高考英语写作公开课

ByWangYinghuiMarch15th,2016LearningAims1.Learntowriteanoutlinecomposition.2.Developagoodwritinghabit—analyze—organize—polish.3.Developtheabilitiestosolvingtheoutlinecompositionwriting,theproofandtherationalcloze.Whatisagoodwriting？Content:*everythingneededincludedwhichisrelatedtoyourview.(内容要完整)Structure:*Goodbeginningandending(好的开头结尾)*Wellorganizedandsmoothlydeveloped(结构合理,行文流畅)Language:*NoChinglish(避免中文式英文)*NoGrammaticalmistakes(没有语法错误)*Withexactlyusedwordsandrelativelychangedsentencepatterns(词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)HowtowriteacompositionSixstepstowriteacomposition①Analyzingthetask②Findingoutthemainpoints③Thinkingofkeypoints/phrases④Formingsentences⑤Combiningthesentencesintoapassage⑥Copyingnormally(云南省第二次统测)每年都有许多人出国旅游，一些人的不文明行为引起了社会关注。某英文报社正在举行以“文明出国旅游”为主题的讨论。假定你是李华，请给报社专栏编辑写一封信，呼吁大家做文明游客。要点如下：1.尊重习俗；2.不高声喧哗；3.其它。注意:词数100~120个,开头已经写好,不计入总词数。【审题——抓准信息·快速推断】项目结论体裁__________话题以为主题时态_______________人称_____________书信（给编辑一封信）一般现在时为主及情态动词的应用第一人称为主Step1.Analyzingthetask“文明出国旅游”【定点——把握要点，遣词造句】第1段：点明话题—出国旅游，一些人的不文明行为【引入6分】【信息】每年都有许多人出国旅游，一些人的不文明行为引起了社会关注。【遣词】1.假日游客:2.出国旅游观光:3.不文明行为:4.引起了社会关注:【造句】Everyyear,agreatmanygoabroad,whiletheyareenjoyingthemselves,someofthem,which.Step2.Findingoutthemainpointsandformingsentencesholidaymakergoabroadforsightseeingandrelaxationbehaverudelycauseabigconcernholidaymakersforsightseeingandrelaxationbehaverudelycausesabigconcern第2段：针对不文明行为三条建议【作文重点12分】【信息】1.尊重习俗；2.不高声喧哗；3.其它。【点拨】扩充要点,使文章条理【运用】建议注意自己的行为。首先，尊重习俗；其次，不高声喧哗，再次，插队是不被接受的。【遣词】1.尊重习俗：respectandfollowlocalcustoms2.高声喧哗：talkloudlyinpublicplaces3.插队：queuejumping【造句】Inmyopinion,itisnecessarytowatchourmanners.First,wemust____________________________,Besides,we’dbetter__________________________toavoiddisturbancetoothers,Also,beawarethat______________isunacceptableinmanycountries。respectandfollowlocalcustomsnottalkloudlyinpublicplacesqueuejumping第3段：向社会呼吁【结尾6分】【信息】呼吁大家做文明游客【点拨】适度发挥,以使文章符合逻辑【运用】我们在国外旅游，代表我们的国家形象，因此要注意自己的行为。只有这样，才能开心旅游。【遣词】1.代表国家形象：representourcountry2.注意：becautiousabout3.只有这样：onlyinthisway【造句】moreimportantly,weshouldbearinmindthatweare______________________whileabroad,soweneedto_______________howweact,_________canweenjoyourtripsabroadandhavebeautifulmemoriesaswell.representingourcountrybecautiousaboutonlyinthiswayDearEditor,I’vereadyourdiscussionsonhowtobehaveproperlywhentravellingabroad.Everyyear,agreatmanyholidaymakersgoabroadforsightseeingandrelaxation,whiletheyareenjoyingthemselves,someofthembehaverudely,whichcausesabigconcern.Howtobeacivilizedtouristhasbecomeaheatedtopic.Inmyopinion,itisnecessarytowatchourmanners.First,wemustrespectandfollowlocalcustoms,Besides,we’dbetternottalkloudlyinpublicplacestoavoiddisturbancetoothers,Also,beawarethatqueuejumpingisunacceptableinmanycountries,moreimportantly,weshouldbearinmindthatwearerepresentingourcountrywhileabroad,soweneedtobecautiousabouthowweact,onlyinthiswaycanweenjoyourtripsabroadandhavebeautifulmemoriesaswell.yours,LiHuaStep3.Combiningthesentencesintoapassage【连句成篇】【书面表达---短文改错---新完型填空三位一体】之短文改错DearEditor,I’vereadyourdiscussionsonhowtobehaveproperwhentravellingabroad.Everyyear,agreatmanyholidaymakersgoesabroadforsightseeingandrelax,whiletheyareenjoyingthemselves,someofthembehaverudely,thatcausesabigconcern.Howtobeacivilizedtouristhavebecomeaheatedtopic.Inmyopinion,itisnecessarytowatchourmanner.First,wemustrespectandfollowlocalcustoms;However,we’dbetternottalkloudlyinpublicplacestoavoidingdisturbancetoothers,Also,beawarethatqueuejumpingisunacceptableinmanycountries,moreimportant,weshouldbearinmindthatwearerepresentingourcountrywhileabroad,butweneedtobecautiousabouthowweact,onlyinthiswaycanweenjoyourtripsabroadandhavebeautifulmemoriesaswell.yours,LiHuaproperlygorelaxationwhichhasmannersBesidesavoidimportantlysoDearEditor,I’vereadyourdiscussionsonhow1___behaveproperlywhentravellingabroad.Everyyear,agreatmanyholidaymakersgoabroadfor2___________(sightsee)andrelaxation,whiletheyareenjoyingthemselves,someofthembehave3________(rude),whichcausesabigconcern.Howtobeacivilized4________(tour)hasbecomeaheatedtopic.Inmyopinion,itisnecessary5_________(watch)ourmanners.First,wemustrespectandfollowlocal6________(custom）;Besides,we’dbetternottalkloudlyinpublicplacestoavoiddisturbancetoothers,Also,beawarethatqueuejumpingis7_______________(unaccept)inmanycountries,moreimportantly,weshouldbear8___mindthatwearerepresentingourcountrywhileabroad,9___weneedtobecautiousabouthowweact,10_____inthiswaycanweenjoyourtripsabroadandhavebeautifulmemoriesaswell.yours,LiHuatosightseeingrudelytouristintowatchunacceptablesoOnly【书面表达---短文改错---新完型填空三位一体】之新完型填空customs假如你叫李华,你校同学正在就“高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼”这一主题展开讨论,请根据下面所给的信息,给某英文报社写一封信,介绍讨论情况,并谈谈你的看法。赞成（55%）反对（45%）1.应该每天进行体育锻炼,如做早操、打乒乓球、打篮球等。2.锻炼能增强体质,减少疾病。3.锻炼能使大脑得到休息,使学习效果更好。1.锻炼浪费时间。2.锻炼后很兴奋,难以快速投入学习。3.锻炼使人疲劳，而且可能会受伤。注意：1.词数100左右；2.内容充实，结构完整，语义连贯；3.书写须清晰、工整。参考词汇：体育锻炼physicalexerciseWritingpractice【审题——抓准信息·快速推断】项目结论体裁_________话题以__________________________________为主题时态_______________人称_____________书信（给英文报社一封信）“高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼”一般现在时为主及情态动词的应用第一人称为主【定点——把握要点，遣词造句】第1段：点明话题—高