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书面表达-----申请信Whatmakesagoodcomposition?KeepingtothepointPreciselanguageVarioussentencepatternsAdvancedvocabularyandexpressionsProperlinkingwordsHandsomehandwritingLearntowritealetterofapplication!applytobeapplyforsthapplicationposition/postadvertiseforgraduatefrom…in…agraduateofTsinghuaUniversityworkasworkingexperienceinbesuitable/fit/qualifiedforhavesomerelatedknowledgeabout申请成为申请申请职位从事毕业于…学校…专业登广告招聘一个清华大学毕业生在…方面的工作经验适合/胜任begood/skilledatmeetyourabilityrequirementshaveagoodcommandofcommunicatewithabilityofcommunicationbeingoodconditionwarm-heartedandpatientteamworkspiritmakeeveryefforttodosthsparenoefforttodosthhaveanadvantageoversbinsth擅长符合你的能力要求与…交流交流能力努力做某事热情和耐心的身体健康团队精神不遗余力做某事比某人有优势精通/掌握•申请信一般包括以下要点：•1、自我介绍+写信目的•2、申请理由+具备的条件•3、恳请考虑自己的申请+表达谢意及期盼期盼回复的心情DearMr.Smith,I’vereadyouradvertisementforanassistantteacher.IamsointerestedinthispositionthatIamwritingtoapplyforthejob.NowIwouldliketointroducemyselftoyou.Iamoutgoing,energetic,andresponsible;Besides,IloveworkingwithchildrenandIamalwaysangoodhelpertomyteachers.Andmostimportantly,IcanspeakfluentEnglish,whichenablesmetocommunicatefreelyandeffectivelywithstudents.SoIwouldbepleasedtobeanassistantteacher.ThankyouforconsideringmyapplicationandIamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.文章结构?1.几个段落？2.人称、时态？3.过渡词？开头中间结尾1-2句表达写信目的3－6个介绍个人优势1-2句表达请求和盼复第一人称人称时态过渡词书信类型besides,so,mostimportantly一般现在时、一般将来时开头：中间：结尾：申请信段落结构篇章结构佳句：定从DearMr.Smith,I’vereadyouradvertisementforanassistantteacher.IamsointerestedinthispositionthatIamwritingtoapplyforthejob.NowIwouldliketointroducemyselftoyou.Iamoutgoing,energetic,andresponsible;Besides,IloveworkingwithchildrenandIamalwaysangoodhelpertomyteachers.Andmostimportantly,IcanspeakfluentEnglish,whichenablesmetocommunicatefreelyandeffectivelywithstudents.SoIwouldbepleasedtobeanassistantteacher.ThankyouforconsideringmyapplicationandIamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.模板大声朗读佳句：so…thatYours,LiHua1.Havingread/learnedfromthenewspaperthat2.Iamwritingtoapplyforthejob.3.IwouldliketointroducemyselfIhaveagoodcommandof…Ilike/amfondof…Iamwellacquaintedwithsth4.Thankyoufor…andIamlookingforwardto…5.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucould…背诵下列常用句型：(2mins)我精通….我喜欢我非常熟悉…•假设你是李华，从网上得知一所美国中学正在招募中国中学生志愿者。本次招募旨在通过网络帮助美国学生体验春节。请用英语写一封电子邮件提出申请，内容包括：1.愿意参加2.自身优势3.计划与愿望•注意：1.词数：100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯请按刚才的思路审题（2mins）DearSirorMadam,I’mLiHua,aseniorhighschoolstudentfromChina.HavinglearnedthatyourschoolislookingforvolunteerstohelpyourstudentsexperiencetheSpringFestival.I’mwritingtoseeifIwillbeluckyenoughtobeinvolvedintheactivity.IthinkI’mfitforthejob.Inthefirstplace,IhavelearnedEnglishfortenyears,whichenablesmetospeakgoodEnglish.Besides,beinggoodatusingcomputersmakesitpossibleformetosharepicturesandvideosoftheSpringFestivalwithyourstudents.Moreimportantly,wellacquaintedwiththecustomsandtraditionsoftheSpringFestival,IammorethanhappytoansweryourquestionsabouttheSpringFestival.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.范文Let'sassessyourwriting!FourAspectsDetailedEvaluationYourScore1.Content:(6points)completeness2.Structure:(5points)paragraphs,linkingwords3.Language:(11points)vocabulary,sentencepatterns,grammar4.Handwriting:(3points)neat,tidy,niceTotal:Step1:Eachgroupchoosesonecomposition.Step2:Giveyourscorereasonably.Step3:Assessandimprovethecomposition.Step4:Presenttheresults.Readwonderfulsentences!互评作文(5mins)任务：1.看看你觉得疑难的地方，别人怎么表达2.找出文章的优、缺点3.打分第一档:21－25分（很好）内容要点齐全，少错误第二档:16－20分（好）因使用复杂句有错误第三档:11－15分（适当）有错误，但不影响理解第四档:6－10分（较差）词汇、句子较多错误第五档:1－5分（差）明显漏掉主要内容评判标准（80-120字）1.卷面是否整洁？2.内容是否完整？3.句子是否基本通顺？4.是否有好词好句Howtopolishyourwriting:Ⅰ.Useadvancedvocabulary1.Youcanfindyourseateasily.Ⅱ.Usevarioussentencepatterns1.Theconcertwillbeheldatthecenter.(强调句)2.You'llfeastyoureyeswhenyoucome.(Only+状语倒装句)ItisatthecenterthattheconcertwillbeheldOnlywhenyoucomewillyoufeastyoureyes.You'llhavenodifficultyfindingyourseat.3.Itexcitedmethatshewouldholdaconcert.(同位语从句)4.Thegirlisgifted.Hersongsarewellwritten.(whose引导定语从句)5.Thoughitisexpensive,I'llbookaplanetickettotheconcert.(as引导部分倒装)Thenewsthatshewouldholdaconcertexcitedme.Thegirlwhosesongsarewellwrittenisgifted.Expensiveasitis,I'llbookaplanetickettotheconcert.6.Tomydelight,theyhaveahappyending.(What引导主语从句)7.Iwenttotheconcert.Imetanoldfriend.(where引导定语从句)8.IfI____you,Iwouldgototheconcertwithouthesitation.(if...虚拟语气)wereWhatdelightsmeisthattheyhaveahapyending.IwenttotheconcertwhereImetanoldfriend.9.使用非谓语动词(1)面对很多困难，她从不放弃。(2)做完作业后，她回家了。Facedwith/Facingmanydifficulties,shenevergivesup.Havingfinishedherhomework,shewenthome.Self-evaluation大家共同评价学生习作…学生优秀习作欣赏•Dearsir/madam，•MynameisLiHuaandI’m17yearsold.IaminterestedinjoiningtheChineseandWesternCulturalCommunicationClub.•IdowellinEnglishreadingandcanspeakEnglishfluently.What’smore,I’mveryinterestedinWesternculture,especiallyliteratureandpainting.Inaddition,I’vereadmanygreatworksbyfamouswriters,suchasGonewiththeWindandJaneEyre.Tobefrank,I’mgoodatcommunicatingandexpressingmyself.•Byjoiningtheclub,IhopeIcanmakefriendswithpeoplefromallovertheworldsothatwecanexchangeourculturalexperiences.I’dliketoknowmoreaboutthedifferencesbetweenChineseandWes