高考英语写作(信件)

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高考英语写作投诉信:投诉信分为:1.购物不满(质量服务,退货换货)2.问题解决(影响利益,解决办法)购物不满类示例范文:假设你是李华,两周前从某国外购物网站买了一部单反相机(SLRcamera-asinglelensreflexcamera),收到货物后,发现有质量问题。1.画质不太清楚;2.操作不简单;3.经常死机。期待的解决方法:1.退货退款2.修理或调换。开头:(自我介绍,交代投诉内容)DearSirorMadam,(自我介绍)MynameisLiHua,oneofyourcustomers.(交代投诉内容)I’mwritingtocomplainabouttheSLRcamera(Iboughtonyourwebsitetwoweeksago),(whichIconsiderisofinferiorquality).正文:(说明产品问题:细节拓展;层次分明)(问题1:画质不清)Whatannoysmemostisthelowimagequality.Theblurrypicturesittakesarefarfromsatisfactory.(问题2:操作困难)Besides,theinstructivebrochureisquitecomplexandunreadable,thusmakingitdifficulttooperatethecamera.(问题3:经常死机)What’sworse,thecamerahasalreadycrashedseveraltimessinceIreceivedit.结尾:(希望如何处理,盼望尽快答复)(过度句,表达不满)ImustsaythisisthemostdisappointingonlineshoppingexperienceIhaveeverhad.(引入责任方)Ithinkyouareresponsibleforsavingtheproblem.(希望如何处理)Idemandedtosenditbackforrepairorexchange.OrelseIwouldliketohaveitreturnedandgetarefund.(盼望得到答复)I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreplay.Yours,LiHua词汇梳理:inferioradj.(质量等)低劣的,下等的satisfactoryadj.令人满意的blurryadj.模糊不清的crashv.崩溃,死机demandv.要求,请求refundn./v.退款instructivebrochure说明书beresponsiblefor+doing负有……的责任…,thusdoing…因此,所以orelse否则,要不人常见句型梳理:投诉内容Iamwritingtoyouabout…whichIreceived/bought…Iamgoingtocomplainabout…Iamsorrytohavetoreturnwiththisletter…whichIreceived/bought…投诉原因WhenIchecked…,Inoticed…WhenItook…outofthebagandexamined…closely,Ifound…WhenIunpacked…andtriedtouseit,itdidnotwork…希望结果Pleaseletmeknowwhatyouintendtodointhismatter.Iamreturning…underseparatepostandlookforwardtoreceivingafullrefundof…Inviewoftheinconveniencethatthishascaused,Ifeelyoushould…问题类示例范文:假设你是李华,请你代表你班同学给校长写一封信,反映你校食堂存在的问题,以引起学校重视,并针对问题提出两条合理建议。1.菜价昂贵,菜式单一2.排队时间长,浪费午休时间3.味道不佳,浪费现象严重开头:(自我介绍,投诉内容&目的)DearPrincipal,(自我介绍)I’mLiHua,oneofthestudentsinourschool.(交代投诉内容)Onbehalfofmyclassmates,Iamwritingtoexpressourdissatisfactionaboutthecanteen,(表明投诉目的)hopingthatitwillgiverisetoyourconcern.正文:(说明投诉问题:要点关系;因果逻辑)(问题1:菜价贵,种类少)Firstofall,itisthehighpricesofthedishesthatwecannotbear,muchlessthelimitedchoicesofthem.(问题2:不好吃-浪费)Besides,thetasteofthefoodisnotsatisfactory,thusleadingtoalotofwaste.(问题3:排队时间长-耽误午休)Finally,whatupsetsusmostisthetimewespendwaitinginthequeue,whichoccupiesmuchofourresttime.结尾:(解决问题建议;表达愿望)(过渡句,引出解决办法)Itishightimethatmeasuresweretakentoeasethesituation.(建议1:降价)Bringingdownthepricesofthedishesiswhatneedstobedonefirst.(建议2:增加选择和窗口)AndthenIsuggestthatmoreflavorsbeaddedtothedishesandmoreservicewindowsbeopenedtoreducewaitingtime.(表达愿望)Iwouldbegratefulifmysuggestionscanbetakenontoconsideration.词汇梳理:dishn.菜肴bearv.容忍,忍受limitedadj.有限的upsetadj.使心烦,使生气queuen.队列occupyv.占用measuren.措施easev.减轻flavorn.风味gratefuladj.感激的,感谢的onbehalfof…代表expresssb’sdissatisfaction(about)表达某人对……的不满giveriseto引起muchless更不必说take…intoconsideration考虑常见句型梳理:投诉内容Iamwritingtoreportsomethingabout…,hopingtogetyourhelp.Iamwritingtocallyourattentiontotheawfulfactthat…Therearesomeseriousproblemswiththe…thatIwishtobringtoattention.意见建议Toremedythematter,Isuggestmakingthefollowingchanges…Toimprovethesituation,itisadvisableforyoutotakethefollowingmeasures:…

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