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分词在高考写作中的应用•2012年广东高考基础写作•BornonMarch7,1915,AllanStewart,anAustralian,becametheoldestmantoobtainamaster’sdegreeovertheworldin2006.Hebelievedthatoneisnevertoooldtochallengeoneself.Hegothisfirstdegreein1936andthenhisdoctor’sdegreeofmedicine.Inhiseighties,hedecidedtostudylaw,afterwhichheobtainedhisthirddegreein2006.In2012,hemanagedtogethisfourthdegreebyonlinelearningandwonpraisefromhisteacherforhisgoodtimemanagementinstudy.2013年广东高考基础写作AboutthirtyvolunteerstotheMarswillhavebeenselectedthroughouttheworldby2015.Thecandidates,agedatleast18yearsold,areexpectedtomakepreparationsforthefactthattheycan'treturntotheearth.Moreover,thecandidatesshouldbewillingtokeepgoodrelationswithothers.ExpertsbelievethatthelivingconditionsontheMarswouldbetootoughandthevolunteerswouldbefacedwithbitterlycoldclimate,lonelinessandfear.However,somevolunteersclaimthat,tiredofthelifeontheearth,theywanttoexperiencethelifeontheMars,addingthattheywillbetheheroesofmankindiftheysucceed.•2014年广东高考基础写作•RichardAvis,aBritish,wasbornonDecember1st,1974.Inordertounderstandthemeaningofsuccessfullifeindifferentcultures,Richard,from2011,begantoseektimetwinsaroundtheworld.Withthehelpofthelocalmedia,hehasalreadyfound32timetwinsfrom13countries,ofwhomthereare17malesand15females.Theirpositionsincludegovernmentofficials,athletes,drivers,teachers,artistsandsoon.Richardintendstofind40timetwinsbeforehisbirthdayandheisgoingtowriteabookbasedonthisexperience.在英语写作中如能灵活使用分词来整合信息，可以使语言表达更简练，也是简单句看起来更“高级”，使改卷老师有眼前一亮的感觉。1.Ifweweregivenmoretime,wewouldbeabletodotheworkmuchbetter.•Givenmoretime,wewouldbeabletodotheworkmuchbetter.2.Allthevisitorsleftandtheyleftrubbisheverywhere.Allthevisitorsleft,leavingrubbisheverywhere.3.Thebookisworthreading.ItiswrittenbyLuxun.ThebookwrittenbyLuxunisworthreading.Haveatry.Rewritethefollowingsentences.一、分词作定语分词作定语，通常放在所修饰词的后面，即作后置定语。分词和被修饰的名词构成逻辑上的主动或者被动关系，主动关系时用现在分词，是被动关系时用过去分词。作定语的分词短语可以装换成由相对应的关系词引导的定语从句。Eg1.然而，选择“伟人”（作偶像）的男生的比例与女生的比例相同。（2007年广东高考）However,thepercentageoftheboyschoosinggreatmanastheiridolisthesameasthatofthegirls.Eg2.由AmyChua著的《虎妈战歌》(BattleHymnofTheTigerMother)一书于2010年出版。（2011年广东高考）Thebook,BattleHymnofTheTigerMother,writtenbyAmyChua,waspublishedin2010.OR:AbookentitledBattleHymnofTheTigerMotherbyAmyChuawaspublishedin2010.•二、分词作状语•分词作状语，可表示时间、原因、条件、结果、伴随等，可转化为由when、because、if等引导的状语从句，一般放在句首；表示结果和伴随时常放句末，可转化为and连接的并列句。过去分词表完成，被动,与主句主语之间是被动关系。现在分词表进行，主动,与主句主语之间是主动关系。注意：分词做状语，分词的逻辑主语与句子的主语一致。Seenfromthetopofthehill,hefoundthecitylookedbeautiful.误Seeingfromthetopofthehill,hefoundthecitylookedbeautiful.正Eg1.据王教授说，我国中小学生近视率略高于百分之五十，排在世界第一位。（2009年广东高考）AccordingtoProfessorWang,slightlymorethanhalfoftheschoolchildreninourcountryareshortsighted,rankingthefirstintheworld.Eg2.射击最初（创造出来）只是作为生存工具，19世纪晚期才发展成为一项体育运动。（2008年广东高考）Shooting,originatedasameansofsurvival,developedintoasportonlyinthelate19thcentury.•合并句子•1.Jackdied.Heleftme4collectionsofCD.•2.HereturnedtoLondonlastweek.Hehadlivedabroadfortenyears.•3.Fortypercentofthestudentsagreethatstudentscantakesmartcellphonestoschool.Theyarguethatsmartcellphoneishelpfulinschool.•4.Hewasexhaustedbythelongjourney.Hesoonfellasleep.•5.Themeasuresareveryeffective.Themeasuresaretakenbythegovernment.•6.Thetallbuildingisourlibrary.Itissurroundedbymanybigtrees.•1.Jackdied.Heleftme4collectionsofCD.•2.HereturnedtoLondonlastweek.Hehadlivedabroadfortenyears.•3.Fortypercentofthestudentsagreethatstudentscantakesmartcellphonestoschool.Theyarguethatsmartcellphoneishelpfulinschool.Jackdied,leavingme4collectionsofCD.Havinglivedabroadfortenyears,hereturnedtoLondonlastweek.Fortypercentofthestudentsagreethatstudentscantakesmartcellphonestoschool,arguingthatsmartcellphoneishelpfulinschool.•4.Hewasexhaustedbythelongjourney.Hesoonfellasleep.•5.Themeasuresareveryeffective.Themeasuresaretakenbythegovernment.•6.Thetallbuildingisourlibrary.Itissurroundedbymanybigtrees.•Exhaustedbythelongjourney,hesoonfellasleep.Themeasurestakenbythegovernmentareveryeffective.Thetallbuildingsurroundedbymanybigtreesisourlibrary.•Translatethefollowingsentencesusingtheparticipleasadverbialorattributive.•1、在地球村开设了二十多个展馆，代表美国、英国等不同国家。（2012深圳一模）•2、我们已经决定这个周末去一个叫凤凰山的地方外出郊游。（1012年汕头二模）•3、我们呼吁少一点家庭作业，使学生有更多睡眠和锻炼的时间。（2011六校联考）•4、茂名数字科技馆（MMDSTM）坐落于茂名市图书馆一楼，总占地1000平方米。（2012年茂名二模）•5、1911年12月11日出生于浙江一个富裕之家，钱学森少时天资聪明，被称为“神童”。（2011年肇庆二模）•1、在地球村开设了二十多个展馆，代表美国、英国等不同国家。（2012深圳一模）•IntheGlobalVillage20exhibitionhallswerebuiltoverintheGlobalVillagerepresentingdifferentcountriessuchasUSandUK.•2、我们已经决定这个周末去一个叫凤凰山的地方外出郊游。（1012年汕头二模）•WehavedecidedtogoforanoutingtoaplacecalledFenghuangMountainthisweekend.•3、我们呼吁少一点家庭作业，使学生有更多睡眠和锻炼的时间。（2011六校联考）•Wecallforlesshomework,thusleavingstudentsmoretimetosleepandtakeexercise.•4、茂名数字科技馆（MMDSTM）坐落于茂名市图书馆一楼，总占地1000平方米。•Locatedonthe1stfloorofMaomingLibrary,MMDSTMcovers/occupiesatotalareaof1.000squaremeters.•5、1911年12月11日出生于浙江一个富裕之家，钱学森少时天资聪明，被称为“神童”。•BornintoawealthyfamilyinZhejiangProvinceonDecember11,1911,QianXueshengwassocleverthathewasregardedasasupertalentedboyinhischildhood.Assignment•全优课堂P127写作步步高