雅思写作:如何拓展中间段

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如何写开头段Sentence1Background(generalstatement)Sentence2Rephrasethetopic(thesisstatement)Sentence3personalopinionorbriefdescriptionofmainbody如何写背景句确定题目讨论哪个方面的问题,然后以这个问题为中心,写一句介绍性的话。例题1:Somepeoplewhohavebeensuccessfulinthesocietydon’tattributetheirsuccesstothetheoreticalknowledgetheylearnedfromtheiruniversity.Doyouagreeordisagree?Peoplehavelongbeeninterestedinidentifyingtheforcesthatcontributetopersonalachievement.Theimportanceoftheoreticalknowledgetoone’ssuccessisamatterfordebate.例题2.Theadvertisingisdiscouragingpeoplefrombeingdifferentindividualsandmakespeopletobeorseemtobethesame.Doyouagreeordisagree?Theinfluenceofadvertisingonourbuyingbehavioursisasubjectmatter.Inrecentyears,muchmoreattentionthaneverbeforehasbeenpaidtotheinfluenceofadvertisingonourbuyingbehaviors.如何改写题目1.不要抄袭题目2.句子不要过长例题1.Doyouthinkitisbettertosendcriminalstojailorletthemreceiveeducationorjobtraining?Sentence1Thetreatmentofcriminalshasbeenopentodebateinrecentyears.Sentence2.1)加上常用句型:Thereismuchcontroversyoverwhethertosendcriminalstojailsortoletthemreceiveeducationorjobtraining.2)改变句子成分的顺序:Somepeoplethinkthattosendcriminalstojailsisbetterthantoletthemreceiveeducationorjobtraining.3)改变句子成分:Somepeoplethinkthatimprisonmentisbetterthaneducationorjobtrainingintreatingcriminals.例题2.PoliceinBritaindonotcarryguns.Somepeoplebelievethatitwillmakecitizensunprotected,butsomesuggestthatitwouldreduceviolenceinsociety.Discussthosetwoviews.Sentence1.Insomecountries,suchasBritain,itisaconventionthatpolicedonotcarryguns.Sentence2.1)加常用句型:Thereisaperceptionthatitwillmakecitizensunprotected,whileacounter-argumentisthatitwouldreduceviolenceinsociety.2)改变句子成分的顺序:Somepeoplethinkthatcitizenswouldbeunprotected,whilesomesuggestthatviolencecouldbereduced.3)改变句子成分:Somepeoplethinkthatitfailstoprotectcitizenswhilesomesuggestthatitwouldminimizeviolenceinsociety.如何写第三句话:1.一种是阐明自己的立场2.一种是不阐明自己的立场,只是简单的说文章会讨论些什么内容。例题1.Childreninsecondaryschoolstudyinternationalnewsasasubject,butsomethinkthat’sawasteoftime.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.Sentence1Internationalnewsrepresentsoneofthemainsourcesofinformationfromwhichwediscoverwhatishappeningaroundtheworld.Sentence2However,whenitcomestoincludingitinthecurriculumatsecondaryschool,thereisanongoingdebate.Sentence31)阐明立场法支持:Mypersonalviewisthatstudyinginternationalnewsisofbenefitstostudents.反对:Iamnotconvincedthatitisnecessary.2)不明确表示自己支持哪一方面,而是指明文章会讨论一个事物的两个方面Therearesomepointsinbothsides.例题2.Somepeoplebelievethatairtravelshouldberestrictedbecauseitcausesseriouspollutionanduseuptheworld’sresources.DoyouagreeordisagreeSentence1Thereislittleroomfordoubtabouttheconveniencebroughtbyairtravel.Sentence2However,whenitcomestoitsimpactontheenvironment,noconclusionhasbeenarrivedat.Sentence31)表明立场支持:AsfarasIknow,itsbenefitsarefarmoreovertthanitsdownsides.反对:Mypersonalviewisthatitsbenefitscannotjustifyitsharmfuleffects.2)不标明立场Thisessaywillcompareandcontrastitsbenefitsanddownsides.问题类题目的开头段例题1.Whatarethecausesandsolutionsoftheproblemofthescarcityofwaterresource?Sentence1Watershortageisoneofthemostchallengingissuestoaddressinmanycountries.Sentence2.(不要说有人争议水资源缺乏的问题,而是直接关注它的原因)Therearesomefactorsleadingtothisproblem.Sentence3(说清楚文章要讨论的内容)Someofthemostfactorswillbediscussedbelow,followedbysomeresponsiblesolutions.例题2.Thereisagapbetweenlivinginthecityandlivinginthecountryside.Whatarethereasonsinyourcountryandhowcanthedifferencebereduced?如何拓展中间段Topicsentence(onesentenceonly):highlightthecentralpointofthisparagraph,servetosupportanargument.Supportingsentences:sentencesfortheextension,explanationandjustificationofthetopicsentence(3sentencesifthemainbodyiscomposedof3paragraphs,and4to5sentencesif2paragraphs)例题1Dothepositiveeffectsofadvertisingoutweighitsnegativeeffects?A社会类题目1.经济角度:社会的经济利益,经济发展,发展经济的契机等2.科技角度:科技发展带来的机遇和危机,工业生产,高科技设备,媒体,电脑,自动化,数字化等3.社会角度:社会的整体良性发展,环境问题,社区安全,执法系统,卫生情况,医疗建设,公共设施,文化艺术,旅游观光,城市风貌4.公众角度:公共利益,个人的利益和便利(衣食住行)B教育类题目1.社会能力和工作能力:年轻人在社会上的生存能力,交际能力,交流能力,实践能力,工作能力2.学校表现和学习能力:学生在理论知识方面的掌握和学习能力的提高,学校的课程安排,设施配置,教学方法和社会要求的接轨,重视理论还是实践,教学质量,课堂气氛,教师素质,教学方法的革新3.性格和感情的健康:学生是否有健康的业余爱好和课后活动,性格是否开朗和积极,行为是否端正,中小学生在社会上遇到的问题,暴力,色情,媒体,社区安全,犯罪率的上升,家庭背景,父母教育,对儿女行为的约束,家庭暴力,家庭问题,单身家庭,家庭的贫困问题,父母行为对子女的影响。4.身体健康:学生是否参与体育活动,养成好的生活习惯,常见的问题是青少年过分使用电脑,不注意体育锻炼,生活习惯不好。经济角度:广告宣传产品,促进消费,推动经济公众角度1:广告让消费者了解商品信息,比较商品优缺点,购买到比较适合自己的产品。公众角度2:广告有时会夸大其词,误导消费者,让消费者购买自己并不需要的产品。注意:1.最有说服力的观点应该放在第一段,第二段的观点次之,第三点的观点最弱2.观点不要标新立异,最常见的观点往往是最安全的和最有说服力的1.Oneofthemainfunctionsofadvertisingistoassistconsumerstofindandbuysuitableproducts.2.Meanwhile,advertisingservestostimulateconsumptionandcontributestoeconomicdevelopment.3.Despiteitsimportance,thereisnodenyingthateverynowandthen,advertisingleadsconsumersintoanimpulsivepurchase,therebycausingwastefulspending.支持句的写法Explanation:解释和说明中心句的意思或原因Extension:将中心句或将解释中心句的句子拓展一下,阐述它的影响Example:在需要的时候,举例说明,有助于更加形象地描述事情Sorting:当一个中心句有几个分论点支持时,可以将论点分类说明Contrasting:描述相反的情形,在无法落笔的时候特别有用。1.1.Oneofthemainfunctionsofadvertisingistoassistconsumerstofindandbuysuitableproducts.1)Commonknowledgeisthatadvertisingreferstopresentinginformation,relatingtoaproducto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