1/112018届二轮复习短文改错模拟试卷10篇训练之七【1】ItwasasunnydaytodaybutIwenttoXishanParkforaspringouting.ThemomentwhenIenteredthepark,avarietyofbeautifulflowersandgreentreescameintosight.Attractingbythebeauty,Icouldn’thelptakingphotos.AsIwanderedalongthepath,enjoyingthebeautifulview,Inoticedanythingunpleasant.Twoschoolgirlsjumpedoverthefencetopickflowers.Obviouslytheydidn’trealizethattheirbehaviorhasdonegreatdamagetobeautyofthepark.Withouthesitation,Iwentupandstoppedherpolitely.Feelingquiteembarrassed,thetwogirlscameoutimmediate.Thentheytookpicturesinsidethefence.Seeingthat,Ismiledandeverythinglookednicerinmyeye.答案:第一句:but→and第二句:去掉when第三句:Attracting→Attracted第四句:anything→something第六句:has→had。beauty前加the第七句:her→them第八句:immediate→immediately第九句:inside→outside第十句:eye→eyes2/11【2】Myhobbyiscollectingstamps.Ihadstampsfrommanycountries,likeEngland,Canada,Chinaandothercountries.Yesterday,oneofmyfavoritestampwaslost,thismademereallyupset.Ilookedforitanywhereandaskedeverybodyintheroom,butstillIcouldn’tfindthem.“Wherecouldithavegone?”Ithoughttomyself,“MaybeIshouldtellmyteacher.”Withmyeyesfillingwithtears,IcameinMr.Li’soffice.“Don’tbesoworrying!”Mr.Litoldmewithasmile,“Youmustputitsomewhereelse.Iamsureitwillturnupsoon.”Atthelast,IfounditinmyEnglishbook.答案:第二句:had→have第三句:stamp→stamps。this→which第四句:anywhere→everywhere。them→it第六句:filling→filled。in→to/into第七句:worrying→worried第八句:must后加have第十句:去掉the【3】Notonlyourparentsgiveusendlesslove,buttheyalsogiveus3/11enoughsupport,alwayssharingtheirhappinessandsorrow.I’mverygratefultomyparents.Theygivemesomuchloveandsparenoeffortstosupportme.IstillrememberedonceIwasseriouslyill,theyweresoworryingandalmostaccompaniedmethewholenight.Besides,theyareconsiderate.NowI’mtheSenior3student.Luckyforme,myparentscanunderstandmystressfulconditionandoftentalktomebyencouragingwords.Furthermore,Iamgivenenoughpersonalspace,whatIappreciatesomuch.NowIhavemadeupmymindtostudyhard.WhenIgrowup,Iwilltrymybesttomakemyparentstoliveahappylife.答案:第一句:only后加do。their→our第三句:efforts→effort第四句:remembered→remember。worrying→worried第六句:the→a第七句:Lucky→Luckily。by→with第八句:what→which第十句:去掉第二个to【4】YesterdaymyfriendLindaandIhadlunchatthepizzeria(做比萨饼的店)behindourschool.IknowLindaisn’tcrazyforpizzas。shecamealongjustbecauseme.Atthetablenexttome,therewere4/11twoguysfromourclass.Oneofthemwasreallyfunnily.Hetriedtoimitateallthepeopleinthepizzeria.Wecouldn’tstoptolaughing.Butthereweresomecustomerwhodidnotlikethefactwhichtwoboyswereimitatingthem.Theycomplainedtoanowneroftherestaurant,andhecameoverandtellthemtostop.ItwasapitybecauseLindaandIwasreallyhavingfun!答案:第二句:for→about。because后加of第三句:me→us/ours第四句:funnily→funny第六句:去掉to第七句:customer→customers。which→that第八句:an→the。tell→told第九句:第二个was→were【5】DearMr.Zhang,Knownthatourschoolisgoingtosetupelective(选修的)Englishcourses,I’dliketogivesomeadvices.EnglishVisualAudioOralCourseisagoodchoice.MostofusareinterestedatEnglishvideosandsongs,thatprovideuswithgreatimagesandbeautifulmusictolistento.Asresult,wecanenjoysomelocalcustomsandsingingEnglishsongswithjoy.Inaddition,weneedto5/11improveouroralEnglish.WhenwearealwayslearningEnglish,wemaynotbeabletomakeafluentspeech.Wecan’teasycommunicatewithotherslikenativespeakers.ThatiswhyIsuggestedtakingaSpeechCourse.I’llbegladthatifyoucanconsidermysuggestions.Yours,LiHua答案:第一句:Known→Knowing。advices→advice第三句:at→in。that→which第四句:result前加a。singing→sing第六句:When→Although/Though/While第七句:easy→easily第八句:suggested→suggest第九句:去掉that【6】ItwastheChristmas.Isawa7and8yearoldboywearingaman’sovercoatitcoveredhimfromnecktotoe.Thesleeveofthecoatwerecutshortcasualtomatchtheboy’sarmlength.Iwenttothenearbyshop.AsIhadasonwiththesameage,Iknewthesize.Afewmomentslater,Ibuyanicepairoftrousers,withamatchingovercoat.WoreSanta’shat,Iwentawayandgavethenewclothestotheboy.Theunexpectedjoyonfacethrilledme.Unplannedcharitybringsa6/11strangesenseofcontentmentthatmoneycanneverbuy.答案:第一句:去掉the第二句:and→or。it→that/which第三句:sleeve→sleeves。casual→casually第五句:with→of第六句:buy→bought第七句:Wore→Wearing。away→back第八句:face前加his【7】Theteenageyearfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theywerealsothebestandworseyearsinmylife.Atthefirst,IthoughtIkneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsbyyourself.However,myparentsdidn’tseemtothinksuch.Theyalwaystellmewhattodoandhowtodoit.Atonetime,Ievenfeltmyparentscouldn’tunderstandmesoIhopedIcouldbefreelyfromthem.IshowedthemIwasindependentbywearstrangeclothes.NowIamleavinghometocollege.Atlast,Iwillbeonmyown,butIstillwanttohavemyparentstoturntowheneverneedhelp.1.第一句year→years此处指13到19那几年,所以用year的复数形式。2.第二句worse→worstworst与句中的best是并列关系。7/113.第三句去掉theatfirst表示“起初”,是固定搭配,其中没有冠词。4.第三句yourself→myself句子主语是I,所以用myself。5.第四句such→so(don’t)thinkso(不)这样想。so用于believe,hope,suppose,tell,say,do之后,用以避免重复。6.第五句tell→told此处讲的是指13到19那几年的事情,所以用一般过去时。7.第六句freely→free此处需要形容词作表语。befreetodosth.“随心所欲做某事”。8.第七句wear→wearingby是介词,表示“通过”,后面接动词ing形式。9.第八句to→forleaveAforB表示“离开A地去B地”。10.第九句whenever后加Iwhenever引导的时间状语从句中缺少主语,此处指我需要帮助时,所以加I。【8】Thesummerholidayiscoming.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabouthowtododuringtheholiday.Wecanchos