中考英语作文写作指导.ppt

写作步骤：1审题2选材3列提纲4写作5复查第一步审题审题主题是关键。写文章都不能离开主题。如果审不清主题，就有可能出现“下笔千言，离题万里”的情况。在审清主题的基础上，还需注意要审清文体。审题不准,丢要点,失分惨重。例1:AspecialgiftI’mlookingforwardto强调这份“礼物”是“我所期待的”，而非我已拥有的一份礼物。如果匆忙动笔就容易将文章写成“Myfavoritegift”.例2:IwanttodosomethingformyschoolI——thefirstperson——personwantto——thesimplefuturetense——TenseSomething——onething——KeywordsFormyschool——purpose例3：学校的“Englishcenter”是同学们练习英语的场所。这里的“teenagerhotline”每天都能收不到不少同学的咨询电话。作为热线的一名志愿者，请你根据当时的记录，首先描述两位同学遇到的问题，然后给一位同学提出具体建议并说明原因。•主要内容：问题、建议、原因•限制：描述两位同学的问题，给一位同学提建议•关键词：problem、suggestion、reasondobadinsports第二步选材BrainstormingProblemcannotfocusplayingcomputergamesdobadinsportsjoinasportsclubdobadinsportsdoregularexercisesomethinggoodatConfidentkeepFriendsfun注意“四定”1.定内容。2.定时态。记叙文、日记常用一般过去时；说明文、通知、布告、介绍等用一般现在时；计划等用一般将来时。3.定人称。用第一人称亲近自然；用第三人称客观真实。4.定句型、定词语。应依据内容,先定句型后定词语。第三步列提纲写文章之前列提纲可以使杂乱无章的材料变得井然有序；列提纲可以使同学们的作文紧扣主题不跑题。列提纲时不必过于详细，可以根据题目要求，考虑你的文章分几段，或者分几个层次，每段的大意是什么,计划好文章的整体结构。Middle正文Ending结尾concludingsentence结论句对全文的总结和概括。supportingsentences支持句用例子、实事或数据围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。topicsentence主题句说出文中的要点、核心问题。Beginning开头英语记叙文的写作的方式例1：利弊型作文——Microblog的利与弊Para1:（综述）withthedevelopmentofinternet…moreandmorepopular…Para2:（利）First,convenient,anywhere,anytime;Second,share…with…;Last,expressviewsfree,money-free…Para3:（弊）However,eachcoinhastwosides.Ontheonehand,awasteoftime;Ontheotherhand,notsafe——beinghacked…Para4:（总结）Asastudent,makegooduseofit.例2：计划安排型作文——谈假期安排Para1:（综述）holidayiscoming,planforthisholidayPara2:（正文）Firstly,studycomesfirst.makepreparationsforthegrade9;Secondly,visittouristattractions;Lastbutnotleast,dosportstobuildupmybody.Para3:（总结）IamsureI’llhaveameaningfulholiday.(I’mlookingforwardtothecomingholiday.)(Ican’twaittoenjoymysummervocation.)第四步写全文写作时尽量做到一鼓作气，一气呵成。写作时要注意语法正确、用词得当、语言地道。书写时要多套用句型，多用短句。开头常用句型：1)....playsanimportantpartinthe...2)Asweallknow,...becomesmoreandmore....3)Aseverybodyknows,...isoneofthemost...in....4)Manypeoplesaythat....ButIdon’tthinkso.5)Iwillneverforgetthe....AGOODBEGINNINGISHALFDONE.MAKEATOPICSENTENCE.Aseverybodyknows,smokingisbadforourhealth.Asweallknow,smokingisabadhabit.Manystudentssaysmokingisfun,butIdon’tthinkso.1.smokingManypeoplesaythatChristmasismorepopularthantheSpringFestival.ButIdon’tthinkso.IwillneverforgettheSpringFestival.TheSpringFestivalplaysanimportantpartinourlife.2.TheSpringFestivalAsweallknow,Englishbecomesmoreandmorepopular/important.Manypeoplesayit’sdifficulttolearnEnglish.ButIdon’tthinkso.3.LearningEnglish记叙文常用的句子间连接词：Atfirst;atlast;intheend…then/next/afterthat…when/while/assoonas/not…until…atthesametime;attimes;onceinawhile;sothattoone’ssurpriseluckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunatelyinaword/inall议论文常用连接词表示并列的：either…or;neither…nor;both…and;notonly…butalso;表示递进的：besides;what’smore;what’sworse;表示原因的：because;for…;becauseof…;thanksto…;表示结果的：so;asaresult;so…that…;表示目的的：sothat…;inorderthat…;(inorder)to…;表示对比的：while;ononehand+ontheotherhand;eachcoinhastwosides.;prefer…to…;wouldratherdo…thando…;表示转折的：however;but;表示举例的：forexample;forinstance;suchas…;like…;表示总结的：inall/short;inaword;lastbutnotleast;last;表示利弊的：begood/badforsb.;beharmfultosb.;doharmtosb.;…havegreat/muchinfluenceonsb.;表示喜爱的：love/like/enjoy…;befondof…;beinterestedin…;showgreatinterestin;putone’sheartinto…;表达个人想法的：Ithink/believe…;(as)forme;inmyopinion;fromthebottomofmyheart;personally;其他：tobehonest;totellthetruth;makeupone’smindtodo;…结尾画龙点睛，首尾呼应1.与开头呼应，再次重申自己的观点,注意避免重复句式。2.结尾经典词组、句型：Atlast/Finally...最后Inaword,...总而言之Inshort,...简言之Wehopethat…我们希望Let’stryourbestto....Ibelieveifwecan...,...willbe....Whata...!/How...!MAKEACONCLUDINGSENTENCELet’stryourbesttokeephealthy.Inshort,it’simportanttohavegoodhabitsandkeephealthy.Ibelieveifwecanhelpothers,theworldwillbemoreandmorebeautiful.KeepinghealthyHelpingothersLet’stryourbesttobeanenvironmentprotector.Inoneword,it’snecessaryforustoprotecttheenvironment.HowbeautifulBeijingis!WhynotcometoBeijingandenjoyyourself?BeijingTobeanenvironmentprotector常见的作文类型模板：1书信Dear...,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletter…---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Bestwishes!Yours,Lucy书信开头常用语•Iamverygladtoreceiveyourletter(hearfromyou).•Hello,Jane!Howiseverythinggoing(on)?•I’mwritingtoyouforsomeadviceonhowto…•I’mwritingtoaskifyoucan...•Howtimeflies!Ithasbeenmonths/yearssincewelastmet.•Thankyouforinvitingmeto….书信结尾常用语•Bestwishes(to/foryou).•Wishyougoodluck.•(Iam)lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.2图表、数字比例型（提出讨论或调查的事实）Lastweek,ourclasshadaclassmeetingon(howto)…Herearetheresults.（表达出不同看法或观点）Moststudentsthink…While…20%ofthemchooseto….Another15believe…Therearealsosome…sayingthat…（表达个人看法）Asastudent,Iagreeto…Nowadays…isbecomingmoreandmorepopular.Ithasmanyadvantages.First,优点1…Besides,优点2…However,everycoinhastwosides.Italsobringsusbadinfluences.Ontheonehand,缺点1…Ontheotherhand,缺点2…Inmyopinion,个人观点…3说明利弊型4不同观点型Wemadeasurveyaboutwhetherweshould…提出矛盾问题.Differentpeopleholddifferentideas.Somebelieve…正方观点.First,原因1…Besides,原因2…Whileothersdon’tagree.Theythink…反方观点.Ononehand,原因1…Ontheotherhand,原因2…Asforme,个人观点…5解决问题型Recently,the…prob