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高考专题读后续写2019级部名师空中课堂Continuationwriting2019级部名师授课题目要求：阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。考试要求：提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语（和所标示关键词）进行续写，使其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。2019年全国1卷A263B291C261D341七选五269+692019级部名师授课120分钟=20+35+20+45听力30分阅读：ABCD+七选五2.5*20=50分完形+语法填空15+15=30分应用文15分80词读后续写25分350词+150词记叙文50分说明文47.5分议论文应用文22.5分2019级部名师授课评分原则①本题总分为25分，按6个档次给分。(22-25;18-21)②评分时，先根据所续写短文的内容(情节)和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。③评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑：与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；内容的丰富性和情节合理性的应用情况；应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；上下文的连贯性。④词数少于130的，从总分中减去2分。⑤拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以虑。⑥如书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次。•内容丰富、合理•与原文情境融洽度高•使用丰富的词汇和语法结构•自然有效的使用段落间,语句间衔接手段,前后呼应,意义连贯常见问题：1.阅读走马观花，不会审题。抓不住文章大意，造成内容和情节不合逻辑，上下文不连贯，导致续写无法完成或续写严重偏离主题。（所给材料与续写部分；续写两段间；所给续写开头语与后续语句间衔接）In1989,freshoutofhighschool,Ihadthedifficulttaskofchoosingacareerpathbeforecollegestartedinthreemonths.InthosedaysinPakistan,therewerelimitedoptions:becomingadoctororanengineer,orenteringthefinancialworldaftergettingabusinessdegree.Iwasn'tinterestedinengineering,sothatIwasleftwithmedicineorbusiness.Icouldn'tdecide.MyunclesuggestedthatIdoaworkplacement实习toexperienceitforamonthinaninternationalcompanyfollowedbyamonthinahospital.Afterthat,Icouldmakeadecision.Itseemedlikeabrilliantidea.Iwasacceptedforamonth'splacementataforeignbankinKarachi.Igotafeelforhowtheworldoffinancefunctioned,madenewfriends,andgenerallyenjoyedthemostlyeasy-goingworksurroundings.Themonthpassedrapidly,andsoonIbeganworkingataleadinghospitalinKarachi.Theexperiencecouldn'thavebeenmoredifferent.Thehospitalhadanintenseenvironment.Thedaysstartedearly(at7am,comparedto9amatthebank),andwerefilledwithendlessduties.Andthenightcalls!Thiswascrazy,workingallday,throughthenight,andagainthenextday.Ibeganthinkingaboutmytwoexperiences.Thebankhadofferedamorerelaxingatmosphere,betterworkinghoursandlessstress.Thehospitalwasfullofexcitementandunpredictability,butthestudyingandtrainingwasdifficult.Itseemedthatthebusinessoptionwasgoingtowinout.Neartheendofmymonthatthehospital,Iwasdrivinghomeafteranespeciallybusynightcall.Infrontofmewasapublicbuswithcollegestudentssittingonthetop.Asthedriverweavedthrough(穿梭)traffic,Icouldseetheboysshakingfromsidetoside.In1989,freshoutofhighschool,Ihadthedifficulttaskofchoosingacareerpathbeforecollegestartedinthreemonths.InthosedaysinPakistan,therewerelimitedoptions:becomingadoctororanengineer,orenteringthefinancialworldaftergettingabusinessdegree.Iwasn'tinterestedinengineering,sothatIwasleftwithmedicineorbusiness.Icouldn'tdecide.MyunclesuggestedthatIdoaworkplacement实习toexperienceitforamonthinaninternationalcompanyfollowedbyamonthinahospital.Afterthat,Icouldmakeadecision.Itseemedlikeabrilliantidea.Iwasacceptedforamonth'splacementataforeignbankinKarachi.Igotafeelforhowtheworldoffinancefunctioned,madenewfriends,andgenerallyenjoyedthemostlyeasy-goingworksurroundings.Themonthpassedrapidly,andsoonIbeganworkingataleadinghospitalinKarachi.Theexperiencecouldn'thavebeenmoredifferent.Thehospitalhadanintenseenvironment.Thedaysstartedearly(at7am,comparedto9amatthebank),andwerefilledwithendlessduties.Andthenightcalls!Thiswascrazy,workingallday,throughthenight,andagainthenextday.Ibeganthinkingaboutmytwoexperiences.Thebankhadofferedamorerelaxingatmosphere,betterworkinghoursandlessstress.Thehospitalwasfullofexcitementandunpredictability,butthestudyingandtrainingwasdifficult.Itseemedthatthebusinessoptionwasgoingtowinout.Neartheendofmymonthatthehospital,Iwasdrivinghomeafteranespeciallybusynightcall.Infrontofmewasapublicbuswithcollegestudentssittingonthetop.Asthedriverweavedthrough(穿梭)traffic,Icouldseetheboysshakingfromsidetoside.In1989,freshoutofhighschool,Ihadthedifficulttaskofchoosingacareerpathbeforecollegestartedinthreemonths.InthosedaysinPakistan,therewerelimitedoptions:becomingadoctororanengineer,orenteringthefinancialworldaftergettingabusinessdegree.Iwasn'tinterestedinengineering,sothatIwasleftwithmedicineorbusiness.Icouldn'tdecide.MyunclesuggestedthatIdoaworkplacement实习toexperienceitforamonthinaninternationalcompanyfollowedbyamonthinahospital.Afterthat,Icouldmakeadecision.Itseemedlikeabrilliantidea.Iwasacceptedforamonth'splacementataforeignbankinKarachi.Igotafeelforhowtheworldoffinancefunctioned,madenewfriends,andgenerallyenjoyedthemostlyeasy-goingworksurroundings.Themonthpassedrapidly,andsoonIbeganworkingataleadinghospitalinKarachi.Theexperiencecouldn'thavebeenmoredifferent.Thehospitalhadanintenseenvironment.Thedaysstartedearly(at7am,comparedto9amatthebank),andwerefilledwithendlessduties.Andthenightcalls!Thiswascrazy,workingallday,throughthenight,andagainthenextday.Ibeganthinkingaboutmytwoexperiences.Thebankhadofferedamorerelaxingatmosphere,betterworkinghoursandlessstress.Thehospitalwasfullofexcitementandunpredictability,butthestudyingandtrainingwasdifficult.Itseemedthatthebusinessoptionwasgoingtowinout.Neartheendofmymonthatthehospital,Iwasdrivinghomeafteranespeciallybusynightcall.Infrontofmewasapublicbuswithcollegestudentssittingonthetop.Asthedriverweavedthrough(穿梭)traffic,Icouldseetheb