2019年雅思写作预测4

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批改网,让英语学习更简单2019年雅思写作预测【题目要求】Peoplenowspendmuchtimeandmoneyontheirappearanceandpaymoreattentiontotheirdressing.Givereasonsandyouropiniononthis.【写作指导】题型为问题原因类,题目考察的是现如今人们花费太多的时间和金钱在穿着打扮上,要求给出原因和个人观点。首先,提出这个问题存在的大背景,引出讨论话题,然后说明这一现象存在的原因,给出自己的观点,昀后总结现象原因。参考结构如下第一段:提出话题背景(注意题目中的同义词替换)第二段:论述第一个原因—人们在意外表是因为虚荣第三段:论述第二个原因—人们在意外表是因为社会习俗要求【好词好句】Harsh刺耳的Drivingforce驱动力undueemphasison过度强调...Beattractedto被吸引做...Berepelledby被排斥....Resortto依靠,求助于Socialmores社会习俗Contendwith与...作战Inordinateattention过度关注Getdistractedby被...分心题目要求写作指导分析解题思路,结构更清晰好词好句积累高分表达,文章更优美优秀范文查看优秀发文,提分更高效批改网,让英语学习更简单1.Thoughitmaysoundharsh,thedrivingforcebehindtheundueemphasisonone’sappearanceisvanity.虽然这听起来很刺耳,但过分强调外表背后的驱动力是虚荣。2.Asitoftenhappens,timeandmoneyarespentandpainsareenduredfornonoblerreasonsthantosatisfytheirvainself-esteem.正如经常发生的那样,人们花费时间和金钱,忍受痛苦,无非是为了满足他们虚荣的自尊心。3.Womenaresupposedtobeattractiveandsexywhilemenshouldbevirileandworldly女人应该是有吸引力的和性感的,而男人应该是阳刚的和世俗的4.Thepursuitofbeautyshouldbecarriedoutinourmindbutnotoverourfaceorbody.对美的追求应该在我们的头脑中进行,而不是在我们的脸上或身上。5.Whatreallycountsisnotwhatmeetstheeye.真正重要的不是取悦我们眼睛的。【优秀范文】ItisreportedthatthemoneyspentoncosmeticsintheUnitedStateseachyearamountsto$200billion,whichisenoughtofeedallthepeopleinAfricafor2months.Alas,Africansgoonstarvingdespiteallthetalksaboutrelievingpoverty.Whyisappearancesomuchregardedbysomepeople?Thoughitmaysoundharsh,thedrivingforcebehindtheundueemphasisonone’sappearanceisvanity.Understandably,everyoneisattractedtobeautyandrepelledbyugliness.Noneofuswouldwishtobecomelessattractive.Butourvanitymayleadtoexcessiveattentiontoourfaceandfigure.Someevenresorttoplasticsurgeriestobeautifythemselves,oftenattheriskoftheirhealthorevenlife.Asitoftenhappens,timeandmoneyarespentandpainsareenduredfornonoblerreasonsthantosatisfytheirvainself-esteem.Thechangesinsocialmoresalsoshapeourattitudetowardappearance.Differentculturestreatappearancedifferently.InMuslimcountriesforexample,womenarecoveredupinshawlswhentheygoout;menallwearsimilarclothes.Naturally,theydon’tcaremuchabouthowtheylook.Inothersocieties,however,womenarejudgedbytheirappearance.Womenaresupposedtobeattractiveandsexywhilemenshouldbevirileandworldly.Thereisnocontendingwithsocialexpectationandpeerpressure:mostpeoplehavenochoicebutconform.Theinordinateattentionpaidtoappearanceanddressingisdeplorabletome.Iregarditasshallowandvain.Thepursuitofbeautyshouldbecarriedoutinourmindbutnotoverourfaceorbody.Whatreallycountsisnotwhatmeetstheeye.Prioritiesshouldbegiventothingsofrealimportance.Itpainsmetoseethatsomanyofusgetdistractedbythislopsidedemphasisonappearance.

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