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县长在全县审计工作会议上的发言_1县长在全县审计工作会议上的讲话同志们:县委、县政府决定召开审计工作会议,主要目的是进一步提高对审计工作的认识,把我们各部门、各单位、各街镇的思想统一到县委、县政府的要求上来,高度重视审计工作,主动配合审计工作,确保我们有限的财政资金能够用好,用出成效。这次会议的主要任务是总结近年来全县审计工作,安排部署今年审计工作任务。这次会议非常重要,在央要求转变工作作风,尽量压缩会议的大背景下,我们其他方面的业务会议都进行了认真整合、压缩、合并,就审计工作专门召开一次会议,这可见县委、县政府对审计工作的高度重视。刚才云生同志代表县委、县政府对审计工作作了认真的回顾总结,同时也安排了今年的审计工作任务,应该说云生同志的讲话不仅总结了我们这些年的审计工作,肯定了审计工作取得的成效、发挥的作用,同时实事求是地对我们这些年来审计部门在审计工作发现的问题进行了认真的梳理总结,对大家作了一些通报,希望全县各部门、各单位、各镇街以及学校、医院等单位,一定要认真贯彻好本次会议精神,回去以后要结合本单位工作实际,认真进行总结,认真进行整改。下面,我再讲四点意见:一、充分肯定课后续写公开读目录如何构思续写的内容读后续写的高分攻略21读后续写的具体要求提供一段350词以内的语言材料,要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写(150词左右),将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。1如何构思续写的内容Step1ReadforelementsStep2ReadforplotsStep3GatherideasStep4Makepredictions阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。StevewasthemostamazingpersoninallofMinneapolis,andhewasmycousin.Bytheageof19,StevewasastarbaseballplayerattheUniversityofMinnesota.Iwantedtobeexactlylikehim.SowhenSteveaskedmetogowithhimonaspringfishingtripinnorthernMinnesota,Iwasexcited!Afterplanningthetrip,wegatheredclothesandsupplies,andbeganourgreatadventure.WereachedtheSuperiorNationalForestinnorthernMinnesotabyearlyevening.Onourwaytothecampsite,Stevepointedtoasmallhousefarawayinoneofthemountains,sayingthatitwastherangerstation(护林站)wheretheforesterworked.Finally,afteralongwalk,wereachedthecampsiteandsetupthecampasthesunwassetting.Steveknewallthetricksofanexperiencedwildernesscamper.Afterwegatheredenoughwoodfromtheforest,hestartedthecampfireusingonlystoneandsteel—nomatches.Forsupperwefeastedonfreeze-driedbeef,wildriceandpeasoup.Iategreedilyafterallthatwork.Tiredenough,weclimbedintooursleepingbagsearlyandtalkedaboutourplansforfishingthenextday.Wewerestilltalkingquietlywhenasuddennorthwindpickedup;thetemperaturedroppedanditbegantosnow.Stevefoundawaytoincreasethetemperatureinsidethetent.Hedraggedalogfromtheforesttotheoppositesideofthecampfire.Thenhewrappedaluminumfoil(铝箔)aroundthelog.Theheatfromthefirereflectedoffthefoilandintothetent.Soonimagesoflakefishwerefillingmydreams.Thesnowhadstopped,butsometimelaterapowerfulwindmusthavekickeduptheflamesofourdyingfire.IwassuddenlyawakenedbySteve.Ourtentwasonfire.Frightened,Iranoutofthetentimmediately.Thetentcollapsed(倒塌)withSteveinside.Withoutanythoughtofendangeringmyself,Ireachedintotheburningtentandpulledhimtotheicylake.Fortunately,wewerenotseriouslyhurt.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Later,aswestoodbytheburningtenttokeepwarm,weconsideredourdifficultsituation._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Suddenly,weheardanoiseintheforest._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Step1ReadforelementsWhatWhereWhenWhoI,Steve,foresterInspringInaforestAnadventurousfishingtripElementsStep2ReadforplotsBeginning(characterandsetting)ProcessClimax(themainproblemorconflict)Ending(atimetosolvetheproblem/howthingsendup)?StoryMountainBeginningProcessClimaxEnding123?1.Steveaskedmetogoonaspringfishingtrip.2.Wereachedthecampsiteandsetupthecamp.3.Ourtentwasonfireandweescapedtotheicylake.4.?Step3GatherideasSetting(time/place)Time:springPlace:SuperiorNationalForestinnorthernMinnesotaCharactersI,Steve,foresterPlotSteveaskedmetogoonaspringfishingtrip.ProblemOurtentwasonfire.Ending?信息整理:体裁:记叙文时态:一般过去时原文核心信息解读:“我”和表哥去森林里露营,夜里下起了雪,天很冷,表哥生起了篝火,“我们”在温暖中入睡了。睡着后,帐篷起火了,“我们”匆忙逃了出来,但帐篷烧毁了……Step4Makepredictions可用于续写的已知信息:划线词CharacterSteve,foresterSettingclothes,supplies,campsite,forest,fireActionfound,endangeringMoodfrightened段首句Para.1:Later,aswestoodbytheburningtenttokeepwarm,weconsideredourdifficultsituation.(续写部分可详细描写具体困境,比如衣服等物品烧毁,在森林中远离人烟,无法求助等。)Para.2:Suddenly,weheardanoiseintheforest.(续写部分可写声音的来源,发出声音者可以是提供救助的人。)写作思路:“我们”在荒芜人烟的森林深处,孤立无援,随身物品也都随着帐篷一起烧毁了,正当不知道该怎么办的时候,林中传来了声响,发现是护林人开着车过来了。原来护林人看到了火光,过来一探究竟,结果“我们”得救了。构思的理由:文章中出现过forester(护林人),这是极其有用的信息,另外根据常识可知,护林人最重要的工作之一就是侦查火情,所以森林中有火情的话,护林人一定会一探究竟。Onepossibleversion:Paragraph1:Later,aswestoodbytheburningtenttokeepwarm,weconsideredourdifficultsituation.Ourcampsitewasinthedeepoftheforest,reallyfarawayfromthehighway.Wewereinthemiddleofnowhere,wearingonlyunderwear,withoursuppliesburntintoashes,includingourcellphones.EvenStevewasunsurewhattodonext.Theonlythingwecoulddowasjustsitinthecoldairandwonderhowtogetoutoftheforest.Paragraph2:Suddenly,weheardanoiseintheforest.Anxiouslywelistenedandstaredintothedarkness.Ajeepappeared.Aforesterhadspottedthelightfromthefireandhadcometohaveacheck.Wejumpedintothewarmvehicleandtheforesterdroveustotherangerstation,whereweweregivenclothesandwereabletocallourparents.SteveandIhadmanymorecampingadventuresfromthenon,butitwasonthistripthatStevebegantotreatmemorelikeafriendratherthanayoungercousin.Ourfriendshipcontinuestothisday.2读后续写的高分攻略评分标准第五档:21分-25分第四档:16分-20分第三档:11分-15分第二档:6分-10分第一档:1分-5分第五档:21分-25分•与所给短文融洽度高,与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理。•内容丰富,应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。•所使用语法结构和词汇丰富,准确,可能有些许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