高考英语书面表达阅卷情况

高考英语书面表达阅卷情况分析及启示本次高考阅卷特点：1.阅卷的速度快；2.阅卷时间长；3.阅卷老师的心理状态：4.高考卷其余部分较浅；给分中庸平均分：峰值：约13分17~18分最吃亏学生群：中等左右学生书面表达是提高平均分最大的潜力股影响给分的四大因素：一.作文的卷面；二.文中所采用的语言材料的层次；三.行文的流畅度；四.文章的思想性；一.作文的卷面；漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点建议I：1.高三各次考试中打卷面分；2.大张旗鼓地组织学生练书法；3.提供标准的考试用纸;二.文中所采用的语言材料的层次；人靠衣装，文靠词装A.词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜；B.句型结构运用灵活多变;1.good2.think3.inmyopinionperfect.excellent.outstandingpromisingfavorable…holdtheviewthat…itiswidelysharedthat…itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat…formypart，frommyownperspective4.moreandmore5.remember6.forexample7.helpfulkeepinmindanincreasingnumberofagrowingnumberoftonameonlyafewbeneficial,rewarding1.充分利用课文；建议II：2.鼓励同学平时重视优美语句的收集和欣赏；3.从日常讲解作文做起；Destinationeverynowandthen;…gettheitchto…;…feeltheurgeto…;…stretchitselflazilyalong…;…giveaglimpseof;…awalkthrough…isahistorylesson;Fewvisitorsleave…feelingdisappointed.…isaparadisefor…;afeastfortheeye;awidevarietyof三.行文的流畅度上下贯通、一气呵成建议III：2.组织学生归纳各种功能的连词，组建“连词库”1.突出文章段落中的主题句；Someexamples：意义上承上启下的连词：What’smore,moreover,atthesametime,then,besides,inaddition,furthermore意义转折的连词：however,nevertheless,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,inotherwords,bytheway…四．文章思想性的体现“万能模板”现象：新八股文08年上海卷书面表达：GuidedWriting你班将组队参加学校组织的集体舞比赛（groupdancingcompetition)，班长希望大家积极参加。对此谈谈你的看法。你的文章必须包括以下内容：•你是否会参加比赛•你做出该决定的具体理由08年广东卷书面表达：学校最近组织了一次中美学生交流活动，你参加其中的“大学校园生活”讨论。听完Mike的发言之后，你准备写一份发言稿，题目是“PreparingMyselfforCollegeLife”，内容要点包括：1.以约30个词概括Mike的发言要点；2.然后以约120个词谈谈你理想的大学生活，内容包括：(1)对中学生活的感受；(2)理想的大学生活；(3)中学生活和大学生活的差别，以及你打算如何适应。四．文章思想性的体现“万能模板”现象：新八股文建议IV：有思路，有活路补充：1.避免低级错误，尤其写好首尾段；2.对高考最后一段时间书面表达辅导的认识;高考29分高分作文欣赏Therearebasicallytwowaystogetworkdone.Onewayisworkingindividuallyandtheotherisworkinginateam.Ofcourse,theyeachhavetheirowncharacteristics.Theformer,workingindividually,canallowpeopletodothingsinwhateverwaystheylike.Besides,peoplecanalsosolveproblemsbythemselves.Thelatter,however,isquitedifferent.Itrequiresteamspirit.Asisknowntoall,twoheadsarebetterthanone.Manypeoplecantalkoverproblemstogether.What’smore,peoplecanlearnfromeachotherinteamwork.Personally,Iprefertocombinethemtogether.Becauseworkingindividuallycanhelpmebuildupmyabilitytostandonmyownfeetwhileworkinginateamgivesmeachancetoacquireexperiencefromothers.(129words.)26分作文鉴赏Therearebasicallytwowaystogetworkdone.Namely,workingindividuallyandworkinginateam.Eachofthemhasitsownadvantages.Theformerone,thatis，workingindividually,isaverywaytodevelopone’sDIYability.Peoplemakearrangementandsolveproblemsbythemselves,whichwillcontributetotheformingofpersonalityofindependence.Thelattershowsexactlytheimmensepowerofcooperation.Peoplediscusstogetherandlearnfromeachother.Andanyproblemscanbeovercomemoreeffectivelyandefficiently.Intermsofme,Ipreferthelatterone.Asanoldsayinggoes,threemindsmakeagiant.Alsoitiseasytoimaginethatonepersonmightbewillinginmind,butweakinmuscle.Sotoworkinateamisawiserpreference.（132words）小结：1.整洁的卷面；-----气派门面2.丰富的词汇；-----高档建材3.流畅的结构；-----合理布局4.独到的见解；-----金玉其内