核心段落关注新浪微博:韩苏_suger第一种现状关注新浪微博:韩苏_suger问题现状问题仍在Overthepastcentury,allkindsofunfairnessanddiscriminationhavebeenchangedandcorrrected.But......,oneinsidiousform,whichhaseffectedeveryone’slife,continuestothrive.29问题现状问题现状:难以想象Itisdifficulttothepointofimpossibilityfortheaverageyoungstersundertheageof30toimagineatimewhen.....couldbefoundinmostbig-city.29问题现状情况现状:国将不国Encouraging...torejectthelifeofthemindleavesthemvulnerabletoexploitationandcontrol.Withouttheabilitytothinkcritically,todefendtheirideasandunderstandtheideasofothers,theycannotfullyparticipateinourdemocracy.Continuingalongthispath,asweallknow,ournationwillbecomeasecond-ratecountry,andwillhavealesscivilsociety.59问题现状情况现状:反映社会Educationinanysocietyisamirrorofthatsociety.Inthatmirrorwecanseethestrengths,theweaknesses,thehopes,theprejudices,andthecentralvaluesofthecultureitself.Thegreatinterestin......showninpubliceducationoverthepastthreedecadesindicatesthestrongfeelinginoursocietythatallcitizens,whatevertheirspecialconditions,deservetheopportunitytofullydeveloptheircapabilities.69第二种原因问题原因背景作用Althoughwefocusontheissueitselfwhichisdescribedbytheportrayal,wefindourselvesdescribingthefactorswhichaccourntforitaswell.Whiletheleadingactoronthestagecapturesourattention,weareawareoftheimportanceofthesupportingplayersandthesceneryoftheplayitself.Boththeeducationfromthefamilyandthesocietyinwhichweliveareoftenthekeytothegrowthanddevelopmentoftheproblem.Anditisinthepublicschoolsthatwefindthefullexpressionofsociety’sunderstanding—theknowledge,hopes,andfearsthatarepassedontothenextgeneration.109问题原因好人不作为Toparaphrase18th-centurystatesmanEdmundBurke,allthatisneededforthetriumphofamisguidedcauseisthatgoodpeopledonothing.Onesuchcausenowseekstoarousethephenomenon.32问题原因问题原因:道德方面的下降Ofallthechangesthathavetakenplaceinthecommunityduringthepastquarter-century,perhapsthemostfar-reachinghasbeentheinexorabledeclineinmorality.26wecanconcludethatthemostfar-reachingofallthechangesthathavetakenplaceinthecommunityduringthepastquarter-centuryhasbeentheinexorabledeclineinmorality.问题原因问题原因:人们不重视Today,thepublicofChinadon'tplaceaveryhighvalueonintellect.Ourheroesareathletes,entertainers,andentrepreneurs,notscholars.Evenourschoolsarewherewesendourchildrentogetapracticaleducation—nottopursueknowledgeforthesakeofknowledge.Symptomsofpervasiveanti-intellectualisminourschoolsaren'tdifficulttofind.58第一种现状改写举例关注新浪微博:韩苏_suger第一种(1)关注新浪微博:韩苏_suger问题现状问题仍在Overthepastcentury,allkindsofunfairnessanddiscriminationhavebeenchangedandcorrrected.But......,oneinsidiousform,whichhaseffectedeveryone’slife,continuestothrive.29第一种(2)关注新浪微博:韩苏_suger问题现状问题现状:难以想象Itisdifficulttothepointofimpossibilityfortheaverageyoungstersundertheageof30toimagineatimewhen.....couldbefoundinmostbig-city.2919981998Asisvividlydepictedinthepicture,inthecenterofthegroundisahen,whichisshunningfromitsresponsibilitybypromisingthethingwhichisitsduty.Simpleasitis,whatthepictureconveystousisthatifournationwantstoacquiretheachievementinthefuture,wemustshoulderthedutyandpayourattentiontotheprofessionalethics.(66)问题现状问题仍在Overthepastcentury,manykindsofmistakeanderrorwhichhappenintermofthedutyhavebeenchangedandcorrrected.Butshunningfromdutybythesurfacepromise,oneinsidiousform,whichhaseffectedeveryone’slife,continuestothrive.42问题现状问题现状:难以想象Itisdifficulttothepointofimpossibilityfortheaverageeldersovertheageof40toimagineatimewhenthedutycouldbeshirkedbymakingapromiseinmostindustries.34Overthepastcentury,manykindsofmistakeanderrorwhichhappenintermofthedutyhavebeenchangedandcorrrected.Butshunningfromdutybythesurfacepromise,oneinsidiousform,whichhaseffectedeveryone’slife,continuestothrive.Itisdifficulttothepointofimpossibilityfortheaverageeldersovertheageof40toimagineatimewhenthedutycouldbeshirkedbymakingapromiseinmostindustries.And,somanypersonsagreewiththeopinionthatweshouldundertaketheresponsibilityaspossiblyaswecan.93关注新浪微博:韩苏_suger第一种(3)关注新浪微博:韩苏_suger问题现状情况现状:国将不国Encouraging...torejectthelifeofthemindleavesthemvulnerabletoexploitationandcontrol.Withouttheabilitytothinkcritically,todefendtheirideasandunderstandtheideasofothers,theycannotfullyparticipateinourdemocracy.Continuingalongthispath,asweallknow,ournationwillbecomeasecond-ratecountry,andwillhavealesscivilsociety.5920002000Asisvividlydepictedinthepicture,in1900,undertheseaweremanyfish,whichwasthefoodforalittlefishermen,decreasingtotheonlyfish,butthefishermenincreasingremarkably.Simpleasitis,whatthepictureconveystousisthatifwedonottakethestepstoprotecttheenvironmentwhichistheonlyhomeofus,wewillbringourselvesthedisasterandcatastropheafterkillingoutallofotherlifeforms.(78)问题现状情况现状:国将不国Asallweknow,encouragingourpeopletorejectthedutyoftheprotectingtheenvironment,inwhichwelive,leavethelandvulnerabletodeforestationanddesertification.Withoutthegoodenvironmenttogrowup,togetresourceandpractisetheideasoftheirs,theycannotfullyparticipateinoursociety.Continuingalongthispath,ournationwillbecomeasecond-ratecountry,andwillhavealesscivilsociety.67Asallweknow,encouragingourpeopletorejectthedutyoftheprotecting