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ANSWERKEYPartOne:EssayWriting1AnIntroductiontoWritingActivity(PointandSupportinaParagraph),pages5–6Point:Therearedrawbackstomoviegoing.Support:1.Inconvenienceb.Longtimetofindparkingspotandlongwalktotheaterd.Stickyfloor3.Othermoviegoersa.Runningkidsb.Laughing,shoutingteenagersActivity(IntroductoryParagraph),81.c2.b3.a4.a.Inconvenienceofgoingoutb.Temptationsofthetheaterc.BehaviorofsomepatronsActivity(Body:SupportingParagraphs),9–101.Tobeginwith,Ijustdon’tenjoythegeneralhassleoftheevening.2.b.Parkinglotisalwaysjammedd.Ticketsmaysellout,andtheateriscrowdede.Ticketscostupto$8each3.Second,thetheaterofferstemptingsnacksthatIreallydon’tneed.4.b.2)chocolatebars3)MilkDuds5.Manyoftheotherpatronsareevenmoreofaproblemthantheconcessionstand.6.a.Littlekidsraceupanddowntheaislesb.Teenagerstalkbacktothescreen,whistle,makefunnynoisesActivity(ConcludingParagraph),101.a2.cReviewActivities,18–20Answerswillvary.2TheWritingProcessActivities(Freewriting,Questioning,MakingaList,Clustering,ScratchOutline),25–31Answerswillvary.Activity(WritingaFirstDraft),331.thesis5.specific2.first6.bs3.equiped(otheranswersarepossible)7.conclusion4.secondandthirdActivity(RevisingwithaSecondDraft),36–371.Second5.watchingwhatIkeepinthehouse2.however6.comfortableseats3.unity...MyfriendsareasbadasIam.7.As4.support...snackslikeceleryandcarrot8.jumpintomyhandssticks...noicecreaminthefreezer...9.disgusteddrippingwithbutter...riskpullingoutmyfillingsasIchewActivity(TakingaWritingInventory),39–40Answerswillvary.Activity(Prewriting),41–43L,Q,SO,C,FActivity1(Outlining),43–451.Thesis:Myhighschoolhadthreeproblemareas.a.Students(1)Involvedwithdrugs(2)Formedcliquesb.Teachers(1)Unwillingtohelpafterclass(2)Muchtoostrictc.Buildings(1)Leakyceilings(2)Ill-equippedgym2.Thesis:Workingasadishwasherinarestaurantwasmyworstjob.a.Workingconditions(1)Heatinkitchen(2)Noisyworkareab.Hours(1)Ten-hourshifts(2)Hourschangedeveryweekc.Pay(1)Minimumwage(2)Nobonusforovertime3.Thesis:Joininganaerobicsclasshasmanybenefits.a.Socialbenefits(1)Makenewfriends(2)Meetinterestinginstructorsb.Mentalbenefits(1)Reducesmentalstress(2)Improvesself-imagec.Physicalbenefits(1)Strengthensheart(2)Tonesmuscles4.Thesis:Myfavoritetimesinschoolwerethedaysbeforeholidayvacations.a.Lighterworkload(1)Lessworkinclass(2)Lesshomeworkb.Friendlieratmosphere(1)Teachersmorerelaxed(2)Studentshappyaboutvacationc.Specialevents(1)Peprallies(2)HolidayconcertsActivity2(Outlining),45–47Thesis:Moreandmore,theinventionsofmoderntechnologyseemtobecuttingusofffromcontactwithourfellowhumanbeings.Firsttopicsentence:Theworldofbusinessisoneareainwhichtechnologyisisolatingus.Support:2.Workers’salariesareautomaticallycreditedtotheirbankaccounts.3.Personalbankingisbecomingadetachedprocess.a.Customersinteractwithmachinesratherthanpeople.b.Someloansareacceptedorrejectedbycomputers,notloanofficers.Secondtopicsentence:Anotherareathattechnologyischangingisentertainment.Support:1.Formanypeoplenow,musicisasolitaryexperience.2.Fewerpeoplegoouttowatchmovies.Thirdtopicsentence:Educationisathirdimportantareainwhichtechnologyisseparatingusfromothers.Support:1.Studentssitaloneinfrontofcomputers.2.Studentsusesoftwareathomeinsteadofinteractingwithothers.3.Videotapesarereplacingclassinstruction.Activity(Revising),47–482,1,4,33TheFirstandSecondStepsinEssayWritingActivity(WritingaGoodThesis),50–51List1List22Teachers3BicycleslEducation4Dangersofbikeriding3MathteacherlRecreation5Myhighschoolmath2Recreationalvehiclesteacherwasincompetent.5Bikeridinginthecityisa4Highschoolmathteacherdangerousexperience.List3List41Retailcompanies3Camping2Supermarkets4Firstcampingtrip4Dealingwithcustomers2Summervacation3Workinginasupermarket5Myfirstcampingtripwasa5I’velearnedhowtohandledisastrousexperience.unpleasantsupermarketcustomers.lVacationsActivity(CommonErrorsinWritingaThesis),53A.1.TBB.6.22.TN7.A3.TB8.24.TN9.A5.TB10.2Activity(SupporttheThesiswithSpecificEvidence),54–55Answersforthisactivitywillvary;apossiblethirdpointforeachoutlineislistedbelow.1.c.Learningnewrulesandprocedures4.c.Savemoney2.c.Senseofhumor5.c.Longhours3.c.Toocoldinthewinter6.c.WorryaboutfinancesActivity(TheImportanceofSpecificDetails),57S1.Theparagraphlistsspecificprecautions:gettingapermitandbuyingpressure-treatedlumber.X2.Whatkindsofthingsdidthewriterdowrong?Whatspecificruleswereenforced?Howdidthisparentpunishthewriter?S3Theparagraphlistsspecificexamplesofitemsthatshouldnotbeimproved:cheesecakeandjeans.X4.Whatkindsofproblemsdoesthedoghave?Howdoesthedogmisbehavewhentheownersareaway?Howdidtheownerstrytotrainthedog?Activity1(TheImportanceofAdequateDetails),58Answersaregiveninthetextaftertheactivity.Activity(IdentifyingthePartsofanEssay),61Thesisstatement:4Topicsentenceoffirstsupportingparagraph:5Topicsentenceofsecondsupportingparagraph:15Topicsentenceofthirdsupportingparagraph:22Firstsentenceoftheconclusion:34Activity1(EvaluatingThesisStatements),61–62Activity2(EvaluatingThesisStatements),621.Aa.1.TNa.OKb.OKb.2.OKa.2.TNa.Ab.OKb.3.OKa.3.TNa.Ab.OKb.4.Aa.4.OKa.OKb.TNb.5.Aa.5.OKa.OKb.TNb.Activity3(Evaluatin