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让步段的写法注意•必須指出•让步段是问题的次要方面•或者有解决方案•学生是否应该兼职？•Thesis：Studentsshouldtakepart-timejobs.•Point1:Studentscanmakesomemoney.•Point2:Studentscangetsomeworkingexperience.•Concession:•Admittedly,takingapart-timejobmayhavesomedisadvantages.Forinstance,ifstudentsspendexcessivetimeonpart-timejobs,theiracademicperformancemightdrop.However,Istillthinkthebenefitsofpart-timejobsoverweighthenegativeeffects.公共交通应該收費么？•不应該:•1.Trafficjamswillberelieved.•2.Livingcostsofthecityresidentswillbecutdown.•3.Makingpublictransportationfreewillreduce/relieveairpollution.•Concession:•但是不收費可能會使一些公司破產……•（給出解決方案）•However,aslongasthesecompaniescanobtainmoregovernmentalsubsidies,theproblemwillbesolved.公共交通收费不？•Thesis：AsfarasI’mconcerned,publictransportationshouldbefree.•Point1:Thetrafficjam/congestionwillbegreatlyrelieved.•Point2:Thelivingcostofcityresidentswillbegreatlycutdown.•Concession:•Admittedly,(诚然)，freepublictransportationalsohassomenegativeeffects.Forinstance,somecompaniesmaygobankrupt.However,aslongasthesecompaniescanobtainenoughgovernmentsubsidies(津贴)，thisproblemcanbesolved.Teacher’ssalaryshouldbeasmuchasthatofthelawyers’anddoctors’•Agree:•attractmoretalents•focusonteachingmakingaliving/supportmyfamily•increasingteachers’salaryalsohassomenegativeeffects.Forinstance…•However,aslongasschoolscangetmoregovernmentalsubsides,theproblemwillberesolved.•Socialdonation.•家長是否应該讓孩子管理零花錢？•应該：•1.developabilityofmanagement•2.convenient•3.aslongaschildrencangetmoresupervisionandguidancefromtheparents,theproblemcanberesolved.•Admittedly，……havesomenegativeeffects.Forinstance,……•固执己见：However,thebenefitsof…stilloutweighitsnegativeeffects.•解决方案：Aslongas…cangetthegovernmentalsubsidesandsocialdonation,thesupervisionandguidance……theproblemcanberesolved.学生是否应该玩电脑？•Thesis：frommypointofview,computergamesbenefitchildreninmanyways.•1.computergamescanhelpchildrentoreleasetheirstress.•Plantsvszombies•Angrybirds•Fruitninja•2.broadenourhorizon增长见识•Admittedly,playingcomputergameshaslotsofnegativeeffects.•Forinstance,ifchildrenareaddictedtocomputergames,theiracademicperformancemaydrop.•Aslongaschildrencangetthesupervisionandguidancefromtheirparents,theproblemcanberesolved.户外运动好还是户内运动好？•Thesis：frommypointofview,itisbettertohaveoutdooractivitiesthantohaveindooractivities.•outdooractivitieshavelotsofkinds.Peoplehavemanychoicestorelax•Rockclimbingparachuting•bettertoourhealth--outdoorhasmuchfreshairsowecanbeingoodmood(在好的心情下)allthetime.•Admittedly,outdooractivitieshavelotsofnegativeeffects.•Support:forinstance,peoplecanmeetwithdangerousincidents,notassafeasstayingathome，suchasbungeejumping.•Concession:aslongaspeopletakemoreattentiontoprotectthemselves,theproblemcanberesolved.