全国卷高考英语写作之求职信写作指导(作文评讲)

Writing:ALetterofJobApplication2016届全市调研作文假如你是李华，从报纸上看到中老年英语培训机构MidSeniorESCH面向高中毕业生招聘暑期兼职辅导员，负责学院课间服务事项，请根据以下内容用英语写一份求职信，要点包括：1.你的英语水平；2.你的工作经验；3.你做好这份工作的信心•Typeofwriting:Aletterofjobapplication•Purposeofwriting:toapplyforajobtoc_______theemployertohireyou•Language:politeconvincing/persuasive,logical•Tense:Thesimplepresenttense(introduction),Thepresentperfecttense/Thesimplepasttense(experience)convinceIIStructureoftheletter求职信结构•Para.1：theopeningparagraph:purposeoftheletterHowdoyouknowabouttherecruitment?Whichpositionareyouapplyingfor?•Para.2:thebody:detailedintroductionaboutyourself(Yourname)ahighschoolgraduateyourEnglishproficiency(水平)yourworkingexperience•Para.3:theclosingparagraphconclusion,hope,thanksyourconfidence(conclusion)yourhopetobeinterviewedThankyouforyourtimeandconsideration.IIIThecontentPurposeoftheletter:•toconvincetheemployertohireyouSoyoushouldwritesomethingthat…highlightsyouradvantagesavoidsyourshortcomingsisrelevant/relatedtotheposition!!MyEnglishisnotsogood,butIwilltrymybest.Secondly,Ihaveworkedinothercompaniesbefore,whereIhavegottenenoughworkingexperience.SupportingideasinPara.2YourEnglishproficiency:•英语很好•haveagoodcommandofEnglish•口头、笔头英语流利•befluentinbothspokenandwrittenEnglish•令人满意的阅读技能•satisfactoryreadingskills•在高考中取得好成绩•gotgoodgradesinthecollegeentranceexamination•在演讲比赛中屡获佳绩•receivedagoodmanyawardsinspeechcontests中老年英语培训机构;暑期兼职辅导员;负责学院课间服务事项Yourexperience•社区志愿者，定期为老人提供服务•和老人相处得好，沟通容易•acommunityvolunteer;offerservicestotheoldregularly;getalongwell&communicateeasily•社区志愿者，教老人英语•培养了耐心，责任心•teachtheelderlyEnglish;developmypatienceandsenseofresponsibilitySupportingideasinPara.2Example1(Score:20)Example2(Score:22.5)Howtogetasatisfactoryscore?•arightstructure(3-4paragraphs,purposeintroductionhopethanks)•relevantcontent(highlighttheadvantages)•correct&advancedvocabulary•goodlinkings•properlength(80-120)•beautifulhandwritingRewriting我从报纸得贵机构正在招聘暑期兼职辅导员，我对此非常感兴趣。（or：我写信来是想申请您在报纸上广告的暑期兼职辅导员的职位。）作为一名高中毕业生，我熟练掌握英语。我不仅口头和笔头英语都很流利，而且我的阅读技能也是令人满意的。此外，我在服务老人方面有丰富的经验。在我的社区做志愿者已经三年了，我经常因我的周到服务、耐心和强烈的责任感受到赞赏。因此，我很有信心我能胜任这份工作。如果您能给我面试的机会，我将非常感激。感谢您的时间和考虑。我从报纸得贵机构正在招聘暑期兼职辅导员，我对此非常感兴趣。（or：我写信来是想申请您在报纸上广告的暑期兼职辅导员的职位。）Ihavelearnedfromthenewspaperthatyouarerecruitingpart-timeinstructors/assistantsduringthesummervacation,whichappealstomegreatly.I’mwritingtoapplyforthepositionofpart-timeinstructor/assistant,whichyouadvertisedinthenewspaper.作为一名高中毕业生，我熟练掌握英语。我不仅口头和笔头英语都很流利，而且我的阅读技能也是令人满意的。此外，我在服务老人方面有丰富的经验。在我的社区做志愿者已经三年了，我经常因我的周到服务、耐心、强责任感受到赞赏。Asahighschoolgraduate,IhaveagoodcommandofEnglish.NotonlyamIfluentinbothwrittenandspokenEnglish,butalsomyreadingskillsaresatisfactory.Inaddition,Ihaverichexperienceinservingtheelderly.Havingbeenavolunteerinourcommunityforthreeyears,I’mfrequentlypraisedformygoodservice,greatpatienceandastrongsenseofresponsibility.因此，我很有信心我能胜任这份工作。如果您能给我面试的机会，我将非常感激。感谢您的时间和考虑。Therefore,I’mconfidentthatI’mqualifiedforthejob/I’mcompetentatthejob/I’mequaltothejob.IwouldappreciateitifIcouldgetachancetobeinterviewed./Itwouldbeappreciatedifyoucouldgivemeachanceofaninterview.Thankyouforyourtimeandconsideration.DearSir/Madam,Ihavelearnedfromthenewspaperthatyouarerecruitingpart-timeassistantsduringthesummervacation,whichappealstomegreatly.Asahighschoolgraduate,IhaveagoodcommandofEnglish.NotonlyamIfluentinbothwrittenandspokenEnglish,butalsomyreadingskillsaresatisfactory.Inaddition,Ihaverichexperienceinservingtheelderly.Havingbeenavolunteerinourcommunityforthreeyears,I’mfrequentlypraisedformygoodservice,greatpatienceandastrongsenseofresponsibility.Therefore,I’mconfidentthatI’mqualifiedforthejob.IwouldappreciateitifIcouldgetachancetobeinterviewed.Thankyouforyourtimeandconsideration.Yourssincerely,LiHuaHomework•Correctthemistakesinyouroriginalversion•Addtheoriginalversion&themodelversiontoyourcompositionbooks!