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A.建议信一．建议信常用词汇：feedbackn.反馈feasibleadj.可行的suggestionn.建议proposaln.建议venturev.冒昧做某事beneficialadj.有益的advisev.建议suggestv.建议recommendv.推荐，劝告wiseadj.明智的二．常用句式：1.However,toyou,Ihighlyrecommend…但是对你而言，我强烈推荐…1.Ifyoucanmakeacarefulstudy…,Iamconvincedthatyourskillsof…willbegreatlyimproved.如果你能认真学习…,我相信你的…能力将极大提高。2.Tosolvethisproblem,inmymind…为了解决这一问题，我的看法是…3.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning…我写信谈谈关于…的看法。4.Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto…,andIwilltrytomakesomeconstructivesuggestions.就…一事你征询我的意见，我会尽量给出有建设性的建议。5.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialif….我认为如果…,将会收益。6.IfIwereyou,Iwould…如果我是你，我就会…7.Iwouldbereadytodiscussthismattertofurtherdetails.我愿意就此时的细节进行讨论。8.FreshmanasIam,Ifeelthatitismyobligationtomakesomesuggestionsconcerning…作为一名大一新生，我觉得有义务对….问题提出些建议。9.Isincerelyhopethatmyproposalswouldbeconsideredandpositivechangestakeplaceintheseregards.衷心希望您能考虑我的建议，并在这些方面进行积极的改变。三．建议信内容：建议信是建议收信人采取某种行动的信件，可以是做出某种选择或某种改变。建议信也有公函和私人信函之分，公函格式比较固定、正式，私人信函则比较随意。四．建议信的写作结构：1.自我介绍，说明目的。2.委婉地提出建议及改进措施，或提出忠告。3.采纳建议会带来的好处，礼貌总结或期盼回复。五．黄金模板Dear,As,Iamwritingthislettertoexpressmyviewsconcerning.Although,thereisstillmuchroomforimprovement.Forinstance,.Inviewofthesefacts,Iwouldliketomakethefollowingsuggestions.First,.second,.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful.Yourssincerely,六．经典范文Directions:Writealettertoyouruniversitylibrary,makingsuggestionsforimprovingitsservice.Youshouldwriteabout100words.Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter.Use“LiMing”instead.Donotwritetheaddress.DearSir/Madam,Asastudentofouruniversity,Iamwritingthislettertoexpressmyviewsconcerningtheserviceofourlibrary.Althoughwehavebenefitedenormouslyfromourlibrary,thereisstillmuchroomforimprovement.Forinstance,manybooksinthelibraryaretotallyobsoleteandsomeofthelibrariansareill-mannered.Inviewofthesefacts,Iwouldliketomakethefollowingsuggestions.First,morebooksshouldbepurchasedaccordingtothestudents’needs,especiallytheonesonITandmodernliterature.Second,studentsshouldbegiventherighttoevaluatethelibrarians,whichwillbeconcernedwiththeirincome.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful.Yourssincerely,LiMing七．模拟练习（按照上文所提供的黄金模板来写,在合适的位置增添书信的内容）Directions:WritealettertoyourcousinLily,whoisgoingtotakethecollegeentranceexaminationandfeelsgreatpressure,givingyoursuggestions.Writeyourletterwithnolessthan100words.Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter.Use“LiMing”instead.Donotwritetheaddress.