三维设计2013届高考英语一轮复习写作专题讲座课件:第七讲 高级词汇和较复杂结构的写作与训练

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一、使用高级词汇词汇量能反映一个人知识贮存量的多少,也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标准。考生要想取得高分,就要强化使用复杂、高级的词汇。常用方法如下:1.多实少虚写作中多用specificwords,少使用generalwords,多用蕴含感情色彩的词语,少用中性词。如good指人时可用以下形容词替换:kind,honest,generous,selfless,brave,warmhearted,sympathetic,honorable,humorous,smart,gentle等;good指事物或事情时可用以下形容词替换:great,fantastic,splendid,marvelous,excellent,wonderful,meaningful,enjoyable,nice等。以下句子中的形容词虽然都可以用good代替,但远不如原句出彩。Ihopeeveryonecanhaveatime.Heisateacher.ThisisreallyaideatogoclimbingMountHuathisweekend.wonderfulwarmheartednice2.短语优先多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词,以增加文采。Icannolongerbearthewayhespeakstous.→Icannolongerthewayhespeakstous.HewhatIsaidintheclass.→HewhatIsaidintheclass.putupwithdidn'tlistentoturnedadeafearto3.弃旧取新写作中要恰当得体地使用高中学过的、较长的词汇。Weallthesamechance.→Weallthesamechance(opportunity).Wehavehomeworktodoattheweekend.→Wehavehomeworktodoattheweekend.havepossessalotofendless4.避免重复尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词,必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherwatchingfootballmatches.→Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherwatchingfootballmatches.likesenjoysWe'vebuiltanewexperimentbuildingbesidetheoldoneandwe'vealsoalibrarywheretheoldplaygroundusedtobe.→We'vebuiltanewexperimentbuildingbesidetheoldoneandwe'vealsoalibrarywheretheoldplaygroundusedtobe.builtsetup二、使用较复杂结构1.在一篇文章中要适当地改变语法结构来增加文章表达方式的多样性。(1)改变时态和语态Thebellisringingnow.→Theregoesthebell!(2)使用名词性从句Itdisappointedeverybodythattheplayerwasbadlyinjuredinthefirstround.→Thefactthattheplayerwasbadlyinjuredinthefirstrounddisappointedeverybody.(3)使用较高级的状语从句Iwon'tbelievewhatyousay.→Nomatterwhatyousay,Iwon'tbelieve.(4)使用定语从句Thegirlisspokenhighlyof.Hercompositionwaswellwritten.→Thegirlwhosecompositionwaswellwrittenisspokenhighlyof.(5)使用虚拟语气Youdidn'ttakemyadvice,soyoufailedintheexam.→Ifyouhadtakenmyadvice,youwouldn'thavefailedintheexam.(6)使用倒装句Somevaluablebooksandmycreditcardsareinit.→Initaresomevaluablebooksandmycreditcards.(7)使用强调句型Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.→Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.2.改变句子开头的方式。不要一味地采用“主语—谓语—宾语”的文法语序。可以适当地把一些成分(如状语)提前,放在句子的开头,这样使整个句子读起来跌宕起伏,增加书面表达的表现力。WemetattheschoolgateandwenttotheHongxingFarmtogetherearlyinthemorning.→EarlyinthemorningwemetattheschoolgateandwenttotheHongxingFarmtogether.Theyoungmancouldn'thelpcryingwhenheheardthebadnews.→Hearingthebadnews,theyoungmancouldn'thelpcrying.3.通过整合的方式,把几个松散的句子用一定的连接方式连接起来,也可以对所学的英语句式加以简化,使写出来的句子更加准确、得体、简洁、灵活。Wehadashortrest.Thenwebegantoplayhappily.Wesanganddanced.Sometoldstories.Someplayedchess.→Afterashortrest,wehadgreatfunsinginganddancing,tellingjokesandplayingchess.

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