1广东深圳小升初的阅读理解题分析、评价和改写【原稿】ChildrenallliketoplaywithsnowatChristmas.Buttheclimate(气候)ischangingquickly.Theweatherinwintersisgettingwarmerandwarmer.Anditdoesn'tsnowinsomeplacesinsouthernEngland.Sometimesit'shardforchildrentheretohaveawhiteChristmas.Manychildrenwanttohavesnowtoplaywith.Butthechildreninahospice(收容所)getabigsurprise.TheyhaveawhiteChristmas.ArichmancalledChrisHopkinsbought10,000kilosofsnowontheInternetforthem.MrHopkinssaid,Thechildrenhereareunhappy.Theyaretooyoungbuttheyhavenofatherormothertolookafterthem.AllchildrenenjoyChristmaswithsnowandpresents.IfeelveryhappywhenIfindthesnowbringssmilestotheirfaces.()1.MrChrisHopkins__________.A.IsarichmanB.IsakindoldmanC.OftenvisitshospicesD.Oftenbuysthings()2.Thechildreninthehospiceareunhappybecause___________.A.TheyaretooyoungB.TheyhavenofatherormotherwiththemC.TheyhavenosnowtoplaywithD.Theydon'tmoneytobuypresents()3.MrChrisHopkinsboughtsnow__________.2A.InashoppingmallB.OntheInternetC.FromFatherChristmasD.FromnorthernEngland()4.Thewordchangeinthefirstline(行)is__________inChinese.A.零花钱B.改变C.下降D.移动()5.WhichofthefollowingisTRUE?A.Itdoesn'tsnowinnorthernEnglandtheseyears.B.Theclimatedoesn'tchangemuchinEngland..C.AwhiteChristmasisaChristmaswithsnow.D.MrHopkinslikestoplaywithsnow.【参考答案】ABBBC【修改稿】ChildrenallliketoplaywithsnowatChristmas.Buttheclimate(气候)ischangingquickly.Theweatherinwintersisgettingwarmerandwarmer.Anditdoesn'tsnowinsomeplaces(意思重复)insouthernEngland.Sometimesit'shardforchildrentheretohaveawhiteChristmas.Manychildrenwanttohavesnowtoplaywith.Butthechildreninahospice(收容所)getabigsurprise.TheyhaveawhiteChristmas.ArichmancalledChrisHopkinsbought10,000kilosofsnowontheInternetforthem.MrHopkinssaid,Thechildrenhereareunhappy.Theyaretooyoungbuttheyhavenofatherormothertolookafterthem.AllchildrenenjoyChristmaswithsnowandpresents.IfeelveryhappywhenIfindthesnowbringssmilestotheirfaces.”3()1.MrChrisHopkins__________.A.IsarichmanB.IsakindoldmanC.OftenvisitshospicesD.Oftenbuysthings()2.Thechildreninthehospicearenothappy(词义转换)because___________.A.TheyaretooyoungB.TheyhavenofatherormotherwiththemC.TheyhavenosnowtoplaywithD.Theydon'tmoneytobuypresents()3.MrChrisHopkinsboughtsnow__________.A.InashoppingmallB.OntheInternetC.FromFatherChristmasD.FromnorthernEngland()4.Thewordchangeinthefirstline(行)is__________inChinese.A.零花钱B.改变C.下降D.移动()5.WhichofthefollowingisTRUE?A.Itdoesn'tsnowinnorthernEnglandtheseyears.B.Theclimatedoesn'tchangemuchinEngland..C.AwhiteChristmasisaChristmaswithsnow.D.MrHopkinslikestoplaywithsnow.以下我们从文本、考点及题项特征三方面对两稿进行评析。1.文本。文本是适合六年级学生的阅读材料,是关于收容所儿童过圣诞节收到的一份特别的礼物。主题内容与生活关联性大,语言与生活紧密联系,从选4材的角度看能从学生生活出发,适合考生的生活经验。2.考点及题项。原稿中的所有考点均是关于圣诞节事件的信息识别与提取,学生能在原文中直接找到答案,学生无需对所读信息进行分析、综合和应用。修改稿补充了建构性问题,学生根据所获取的MrChrisHopkins说话内容作出关于中心思想的回答,该类问题一定程度上体现了学科核心素养的要求,考察学生能否较好地运用语言的能力,以及根据英国圣诞节、特色与活动等文化知识,拓展比较分析和判断等思维能力。