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PRESENTEDBY范永霞WritingIreceivedsomelettersfrommyfriends...ADDYOURTITLEHEREI'mtoofat.Iwanttoloseweight,whatshouldIdo?Ican'tsleepwell,whatshouldIdo?Ican'tlearnEnglishwell,whatshouldIdo?123Couldyoupleasegivethemsomeadvice?someusefulstructuresforadvice：1.Ifeelthatitwouldbehelpfulif…2.IfIwereyou,Iwould…3.It’simportant/helpful….4.Iwouldliketosuggestthat…5.Ifeelitimportant/necessaryto…拖动解锁Howtowriteagoodletterofadvice?PPT模板下载：行业PPT模板：节日PPT模板：素材下载：背景图片：图表下载：优秀PPT下载：教程：教程：教程：资料下载：课件下载：范文下载：试卷下载：教案下载：字体下载：•1.Wewillwritea________,sopayattentiontotheformat(格式)•2.(Match)Theletterislikeafish,whichhas___parts.Whatwillbeincludedinthe3parts?step1：analyzetherequirement审题letterYourhopeProblemandPurposeYoucanasktheteacherforhelpYoushouldtakenotesintheclass...YoushouldlikeEnglish.Dear***,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________yours,***HeadBodyTail3DearDeng,IamsorrytoknowthatyouhavedifficultyinlearningEnglish.Itoldyousomethingaboutit.YoushouldlikeEnglish,becauseitwasimportant.Youshoudtakenotesintheclassandpracticeitafterclass.Youcanasktheteacherforhelp.IhopeyoucanstudyEnglishwell.Iamlookforwardtoyourreply.Yours,MissFanCanyoufindoutsomemistakes?willtellislookingstep2step1审step2时step2：tense时态DearDeng,IamsorrytoknowthatyouhavedifficultyinlearningEnglish.Iwilltellyousomethingaboutit.YoushouldlikeEnglish,becauseitisimportant.Youshoudtakenotesintheclassandpracticeitafterclass.Youcanasktheteacherforhelp.IhopeyoucanstudyEnglishwell.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,MissFanstep1审step2时(43words)step3：adddetailsprobably（1-2sentences）适度增加细节step3度DearDeng,IamsorrytoknowthatyouhavedifficultyinlearningEnglish.Iwilltellyousomethingaboutit.YoushouldlikeEnglish.Itisimportant.Youshoudtakenotesintheclassandpracticeitafterclass.Youcanasktheteacherforhelp.IhopeyoucanstudyEnglishwell.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,MissFan1.Hereissomeadvicethatmaybehelpfultoyou.YoushouldlikeEnglish.Asyouknow,interestisthebestteacher.IfyoudevelopaninterestinEnglish,youwilllearnitmoreactively.Howtoadddetails?Tip2:addsomereasons.（增加原因）Tip3:createsomeconditions.（创设条件）Tip1:addsometransitionalsentences.(增加过渡句）Adddetailsfortheothertwosuggestions:2.Youshouldtakenotesintheclassandpracticeitafterclass.____________________________________________________3.Youcanasktheteacherforhelp.____________________________________________________Practice:adddetails（1-2sentences）Tip1:addsometransitionalsentences.(增加过渡句Tip2:addsomereasons.（增加原因）Tip3:createsomeconditions.（创设条件）step1审step2时step3度eg:First,...,second,...,lastbutnotleast,...eg:Youcanasktheteacherforhelp.Tip1:addsomelinkwords(连接词).Itissuggestedthatyoushouldaskyourteacherforhelpwhenyouareintrouble.step4：modify修饰Tip2:usedifferentsentencestructures.Foronething,...foranother,...what'smore,...鹤立鸡群鸡立鸡群coherent连贯step1审step2时step3度step4饰YoushouldlikeEnglish.Itisimportant.Youshoudtakenotesintheclassandpracticeitafterclass.First,YoushouldlikeEnglish.Itisimportant.Second,Youshoudtakenotesintheclassandpracticeitafterclass.Modifythesentencesyouwroteandmakeabetterletter:Practice:modifyyourwordsandsentencesTip2:changesomeadj/adv/sentencesTip1:addsomelinkwords(连接词).step1审step2时step3度step4饰DearDeng,IamsorrytoknowthatyouhavedifficultyinlearningEnglish.Itoldyousomethingaboutit.YoushouldlikeEnglish.Youshouldtakenotesintheclassandpracticeitafterclass.Youcanasktheteacherforhelp.IhopeyoucanstudyEnglishwell.Iamlookforwardtoyourreply.审饰时度Howtomakeagoodwriting?HeadBodyTailproblemandpurposesuggestionshopetensedetailslinkwordsadvandedwordsorsentencesSummaryHomework假设你叫李华，你的好朋友Jane最近发现自己在发胖，很苦恼。她写信请你给她就如何减肥提建议。请你根据下面的内容给简写一封信，词数100左右。1、健康饮食2、多锻炼3、喝足够多的水作文要求:依据作文四步骤在原文基础上完成和修改；字数100左右。Iamsorrytoknow______________.Iwill_______________.Itisimportanttohaveahealthydiet.Itishelpfultodomoreexercise.Itwouldbeagoodideatodrinkenoughwater.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.