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Whatonearthdotheycareabout?•1.卷面•2.分段•3遣词造句•4.过渡词•5.内容要点干净、整洁篇章结构选好句型，填内容段落层次全面、简单AProposal倡议书写倡议书的目的:提倡开展某项有意义的活动、推行某种行之有效的作法。倡议书通常包含以下内容:1.在第一行正中标题处写出倡议的内容，字体较正文稍大。2.左边顶格写对倡议对象的称呼。3.Structure1.Introduction发出倡议的根据、原因和目的。(B/T)陈述所存在的问题howseriousistheproblem(C)inbrief,whatsolutiondoyoupropose?2.Body所倡议的具体内容和要求。Whatdoyouwantdone?（P）Howshoulditbedone?（E）Whatthingsorpeopleareneeded?（E）When?Howmuchwillitcost?3.Conclusion要表示倡议者的决心和希望（C）Howwilltheproposalhelp？（Call)thepersonreadingtheletteracalltoaction—whatdoyouwantthereadertodo4.结尾处要写上发倡议者的姓名和发出倡议的日期，通常写在右下角。写倡议书时，尽量使用具有鼓动性和感召力的语言，如名人名言、格言、警句，以提高语言的表达效果。例如，在倡议书的结尾使用下列句子就可起到很好的效果。“Believeyourselfandyoucanmanageit!Sticktoit,andyourdreamwillcometrue!”“Dearfriends,comeon!Ifyouthinkyoucan,youcan!”“Pleasestartfromnowon!Youneverknowwhatyoucandountilyoutry!”1.在建议倡议的写作中,应开门见山指出写作目的,陈述建议或倡议的内容。如：Iamwritingtogivesuggestionsabout...(建议信)或Inorderto...,Iamgoingtomakethefollowingsuggestions(倡议书)。确定文体。建议信属于应用文信件类的范畴,写作的时候一般使用将来时或者一般现在时。建议信在于给对方合理并且能够接受的建议,考生应该注意使用一些委婉的语气。2.建议倡议类型的作文都有相关的一些固定句型,考生需要熟练掌握使用这些句型和相关的语法。比如,在句中使用到advise,suggest或advice,suggestion等表示建议的词时,要考虑到虚拟语气的使用。连句成篇。考生把句子合并成篇章的时候,需要注意建议信常用的一些句型结构。如在建议信开头表示来信的目的,如：Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceon...andIwilltrytomakesuggestions./Thanksfortrustingme./Regarding...,I’dliketomakesomesuggestions等句型。在表示建议的时候,考生可以使用Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialif.../Iwouldliketosuggestthat...等句型。另外,考生若是使用虚拟语气的句子IfIwereyou,Iwould...,也会让文章增色不少。PollutedwaterDearfriends,AsthechairmanoftheEnvironmentalProtectionCommittee,Ihavenoreasonnottomentiondifferentkindsofpollutionswehumanbeingsarefacedwith(B).Amongthem,waterpollutionisoneoftheseriousProblems(T).Itthreatensthesurvivalofhumanbeings,plantsandanimals(E).Itisurgentthatsomestrongmeasuresshouldbeadoptedtosolvetheproblem.(C)[Introductionofthetopicandhimself/threats/proposal)Sincewearedependentonwater,weshouldbeinvolvedinfindingasolutiontothisproblem.(B)Weadvocatethatcertainmeasuresshouldbetakenassoonaspossible(T).||Inthefirstplace,(P1)thegovernmentsinbothdevelopedcountriesandthedevelopingcountriesshouldlaydownrules(指定规章制度）andregulationsinrespectofthepollutionproblem(E).Secondly,(P2)factoriesintownsandcitiesmustbeforbiddentodrain（排放）wasteliquidsintorivers,lakesandseasbeforetheyaretotallytreatedandpurified（净化）.(E)(measures/difficulties)Iamcertainthatremarkableresultswillbeachievedinthisrespect.Riverswhichusedtobepollutedbyindustrialwasteswillbecleanedandfishwhichcouldnotlivethereafewyearsagowillbeseenagain.（C&W）Let’sactnowtomakeourworldabetterplace.（Call）ThechairmanofEPC(foreseeableresults/acall)Assignments:1.WriteaproposalWriting•假设你是学校学生会中的一员，为了拥有一个更美好的校园，你发出了全员环保的倡议，并制作了如下图的海报。倡议内容:1）捡起垃圾；2）走路上学；3）牢记关水和关电；4）循环利用资源；5）爱护校园的每一寸土地。•写作提示•1.环保是我们中学生义不容辞的责任；•2.我们要养成这些环保习惯；•3.让我们人人都为地球母亲尽一份绵薄之力（120词左右）•Dearfriends,•Doyouwanttoliveinabeautifulworld?Soitisourobligationtomaintaintheecologicalbalance.•Tofulfillthistask,weshouldbearthefollowingecologicalcodesinmind.First,whilestickingtothehabitofwalkingtoschool,weshouldeatatleastfivekindsoffruitsandvegetablesaday.It’salsoimportanttorecycleeverythingrecyclableandcherishourschool’senvironmentbypickingupanylitterandturningoffthetapsandthelights.Let’salltakeactionnowandcontributetotheprosperityofourmother—theearth.•Thankyou!•TheStudents’Union