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主题:用英语简介李敏同学[姓名职务与特点]LiMin,monitorofClass1Grade2(同位语),ishealthyandlively.[成绩与爱好]Shedoeswellinallhersubjects,andsheisfondofsports,singinganddancing.[事迹]Whenshecametoschool,shehadmuchdifficultywithEnglish,butthroughhardworkshemadegreatprogress.In2006shetookpartintheNationalPhysicsOlympicCompetitionandwonthefirstprize.LiMinisverystrictwithherselfinherworkanddailylife,andisalwaysreadytohelpothers.一、写作内容1.age,sex,birth-place,background(概况)2.appearance,character(外表、性格)3.Education(教育背景)4.bigeventsinhisorherlife(inorderoftime)(经历、生平)5.evaluation(评价)1.职位头衔：用同位语,年龄性别与家境也可用同位语。如：⑴SunShuwei,aworldchampionindiving(一位跳水的世界冠军),isaboyof14fromGuangdong.(同位语)⑵I’mLiHui,agirlofseventeen(一个17岁的女孩子).二、句式模板⑶AbrahamLincoln，thesonofapoorfamily(一个贫苦家庭的儿子),wasborninKentuckyonFebruary12,1809.亚伯拉汗·林肯,于1809年2月12日出生于肯塔基州。2.介绍出生:介绍出生的时间、地点和家境用分词结构,使文章更简洁。如：⑴YaoMing,borninShanghaiin1980(1980年出生于上海),isaworldfamousbasketballplayer.⑵Bornofapoorclerk’sfamily(出生在一个贫困的小职员家庭中),CharlesDickenshadlittleschooling.3.描写外貌:巧用with短语。如：MyEnglishteacherisabeautifullady,withlonghairandbigeyes(她长着两只大眼睛,留着长发).4.生平事迹：尽量用复合句、并列句、非谓语动词短语和倒装等高级语句。如：⑴Inhislife,hegotmanyhonours，oneofwhichisthe2005CCTVMovingChinaAward(其中包括获得“2005感动中国年度人物”的称号).(定语从句)⑵In2006,havingbrokentheworldrecordandgotthegoldmedal(在他打破世界纪录并获得金牌之后),hebecametheidoloftheyouth.(分词短语)⑶Notonlydoesheshowinterestinscience(他不但对科学极有兴趣),butalsohehasagiftformusic.(倒装句式)写成长经历请按时间顺序。如whenhewasasmallboy，at(theageof)five，in2006，ayearlater等。5.评价:尽量运用短语。如：LeiFengsetagoodexampletous(给我们树立了一个良好的榜样),soallthepeopleshowgreatrespecttohim(很敬重他).此外,以下短语很有用,请熟读背诵：⑴beadmittedintoakeyuniversity考上重点大学⑵majorinlaw主修法律⑶getamaster’sdegree获得硕士学位⑷graduatefromHarvardUniversity毕业于哈佛大学⑸winthefirstprize获得一等奖⑹winagoldmedal赢得一枚金牌⑺wintheNobelPrize获得诺贝尔奖⑻becomeaworldchampion成为世界冠军⑼setagoodexampletous给我们树立了良好的榜样(10)behighlythoughtof受到好评(11)beawardedamedalfor因……而获得奖章(12)beawardedthetitleof获得……称号(13)devote...to...把……专用于/奉献给三、超级仿写(2010浙江)最近,李越被评为你们班的“每周之星”。[写作要点]请你根据她的事迹，用英语为班级板报写一篇短文,内容包括：1.事迹:上周六下午,天气炎热,在别人休闲之时,她却不辞劳苦为班级选购歌咏比赛服装；2.结果:被李越的事迹感动,我们竭尽全力赢得了一等奖；3.评论:她关心班集体,常利用业余时间帮助别人;为我们树立了良好榜样。参考词汇:singingcontest歌咏比赛costume服装StarStudentoftheWeekLiYuehasbeenawardedthetitleof“StarStudentoftheWeek”forwhatshedidforourclass.OntheafternoonoflastSaturday,LiYuewentdowntownandwalkedfromonestoretoanother,lookingforthecostumeswewouldwearinthesingingcontestregardlessofthehotweather.Whiletherestofuswereenjoyingourleisuretimeincoolandcomfortablerooms,shetookgreatpainstosearch,selectandmanagedtofindtherightclothes.Deeplymovedbyherefforts，wetriedourbestandwonthefirstprizeinthecontest.Apartfrombeingwarm-heartedandcaringalotabouttheclass,LiYueoftendevoteshersparetimetohelpingothers.Shehassetagoodexampletous,soshedeservesthehonorandweshouldlearnfromher.