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书面表达高分卷特点外在美结构美词汇美句式美衔接美巧用复杂句式，提高文章品味火眼金睛Whichoneisbetter?Why?Shealwayssingswhiledoingherwork.Shealwayssingswhenshedoesherwork.Aftereverythingwasfinished,theybegantochatwiththeelderlypeople.Witheverythingfinished,theybegantochatwiththeelderlypeople.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakeremarkableprogress.Studyhard,andyouwillmakeremarkableprogress.（状从省略）(with复合结构)(祈使句+and)1.2.3.(A)(B)(A)(A)(B)(B)Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknewsomanythings.Whatsurprisedhimwasthatthelittlegirlknewsomanythings.IpassedtheEnglishexambecauseofyourhelp.IwouldnothavepassedtheEnglishexambutforyourhelp.(名词性从句）（虚拟语气）4.5.(A)(A)(B)(B)BrainStormWhatadvancedstructurescanweusewhenwritingcompositions?1.非谓语动词：--ing,--ed,--todo2.三种从句：名词性从句，定语从句，状语从句3.各种句式：倒装句，强调句，祈使句，感叹句，省略句，虚拟语气，被动语态等Practicemakesperfect1.通过使用网络与家人联系是很方便的.2.我们需要冷静下来,反思我们的学习方法。3.他很聪明，但他从不努力。4.我们对自己的态度才是最关键的。5.坐在一盘子粽子前，这个男孩不知道如何打开（unwrap)它们。6.正如图中所示，爱就像黑暗中(inthedark)的一盏灯。7.他建议孩子们要避免过度用眼，多做户外活动。8.当他爬到更高的地方时，他感到呼吸更困难了.Translatethesentences1.通过使用网络与家人联系是很方便的。ItisconvenienttokeepintouchwithyourfamilybyusingtheInternet.2.我们需要冷静下来,反思(reflect)我们的学习方法。Whatweneedtodoiscalmdownandreflectourlearningmethod.3.他很聪明，但他从来不努力。Cleverasheis,heneverworkshard.Practicemakesperfect4.我们对自己的态度才是最关键的。Itisourattitudetoourselvesthatmatters/counts.5.坐在一盘(plate)粽子(zongzi)前，这个男孩不知道如何打开（unwrap)它们。Sittingbeforeaplateofzongzi,theboydidn’tknowhowtounwrapthem.6.正如图中所示，爱就像黑暗中的一盏灯。Asisshowninthepicture,loveislikealampinthedark.7.他建议学校里的孩子要避免过度用眼，多做户外活动。Hesuggeststhatschoolchildrenavoidoverusingtheireyesanddomoreoutdooractivities.8.当他爬到更高的地方时，他感到呼吸更困难了.Thehigherheclimbed,themorebreathlesshefelt.点石成金目前，学校存在少数学生考试作弊现象。某英文杂志社拟对此现象向中学生征文，标题是“MyOpiniononCheatinginExaminations”.请根据下列提示用英语写一篇征文稿。内容要点如下：主要原因考试偏多、偏难不用功、懒惰取悦父母、老师个人看法作弊不对，违反校规要诚实，努力学习…(其他看法）注意：1．短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；2．短文标题与开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；3．词数：100左右。4．参考词汇：作弊cheat（v.）MyOpiniononCheatinginExaminationsMyOpiniononCheatinginExaminationsAtpresent,therearealotofstudentscheatingintheexaminations.Thereasonscanbelistedasfollowed.First,therearetoomanyexaminations.Theyaretoodifficultforus.Second,somestudentspaylittleattentiontotheirstudy.Theyarelazyanddon’tworkhard.Besides,theydoitbecausetheywanttomaketheirparentsandteachershappy.AsfarasI’mconcerned,it’swrongtocheatintheexams.Itbreakstheschool’srules.Weshouldtreattheexamsinarightway.Weshouldbehonestandworkhard.Onlyinthiswaycanwegetgoodmarks.MyOpiniononCheatinginExaminationsMyOpiniononCheatinginExaminationsAtpresent,therearealotofstudentscheatingintheexaminations.Thereasonscanbelistedasfollows.First,therearetoomanyexaminations.Theyaretoodifficultforus.Second,somestudentspaylittleattentiontotheirstudy.Theyarelazyanddon’tworkhard.Besides,theydoitbecausetheywanttomaketheirparentsandteachershappy.AsfarasI’mconcerned,it’swrongtocheatintheexams.Itbreakstheschool’srules.Weshouldtreattheexamsinarightway.Weshouldbehonestandworkhard.Onlyinthiswaycanwegetgoodmarks.theImportantPoints①考试偏多、偏难•Therearetoomanyexaminations.Theyaretoodifficultforus.•②不用功、懒惰Somestudentsarelazyanddon’tworkhard.better:Sometimeswehavetoomanyexaminations,whicharetoodifficultforus.better:Notonlyaresomestudentslazybuttheyalsodon’tworkhardattheirlessons.③取悦父母、老师Theydoitbecausetheywanttomaketheirparentsandteachershappy.④作弊不对、违反校规⑤要诚实，努力学习Better:Inordertopleasetheirparentsandteachers,theysometimescheatwhentakingexaminations.Cheatinginexaminationsiswrong.Itbreakstherulesofschools.Better:Itiswrongtocheatinexaminationsbecauseitbreakstherulesofschools.Westudentsshouldbehonestandstudyhard.Better:Whatwestudentsshoulddoistobehonestandtrytogetgoodresultsbystudyinghardinsteadofcheatinginexaminations.⑥我们要改进学习方法Weshouldimproveourstudymethods.⑦我们要为考试作好充分准备，取得好的成绩.Weshouldgetwellpreparedforexaminationstogetbetterresults.Better:Ourstudymethodsshouldbeimproved.Better:Onlywhenwegetwellpreparedforexaminationscanwegetbetterresults.MyOpiniononCheatinginExaminationsItisknowntousallthatsomestudentscheatinexaminationsatschool.Asstudents,weoftentakeexaminationsatschool,butsometimeswehavetoomanyexaminationswhicharetoodifficultforus.Ontheotherhand,notonlyaresomestudentslazybuttheyalsodon’tworkhardattheirlessons.Sowhentakingexaminations,theysometimescheatinordertogetbetterresultstopleasetheirparentsandteachers.Inmyopinion,it’swrongtocheatinexaminationsbecauseitbreakstherulesofschools.Whatwestudentsshoulddoisbehonestandtrytogetgoodresultsbystudyinghardinsteadofcheatinginexaminations.What’smore,ourstudymethodsshouldbeimprovedandonlywhenwegetwellpreparedforexaminationscanwegetbetterresults.佳句共赏1.Nowadaysthereisaphenomenonthatsomestudentsoftencheatintheirexaminations.2.Therearemanyfactorscontributingto/accountingforthephenomenon.3.Thesereasonsgivearisetothephenomenon.4.Thereisnodenyingthatcheatingdoesnogoodtous.5.Weshouldattachmoreimportancetohonestyinexaminations.6.Successfavorsthediligent.7.It’suniversallyacknowledgedthathardworkleadstosuccesswhilelazinessoftenresultsinfailure.AssignmentCompletethecomposition!