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2012届高考英语书面表达之（半）开放性作文•每个学生都是独特的，都有自己的才能。某英语报为了给学生提供一个展示和交流特长的平台,以MyAdvantage为题向高中学生征文。请你按所给内容要点写一篇英语短文应征。•内容要点：•1.你所擅长的某一个方面（如唱歌、绘画、某项运动……);•2.你的特长产生的原因,你平时的做法以及收获；•3.你的看法、体会。•注意：•1.短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数；•2.词数：120左右。•MyAdvantage•I’mgoodat_______（2011年江苏卷）下面这幅照片展现了女儿为回家妈妈拿包的情景。请根据你对这幅照片的理解用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应包含以下内容：①描述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作等等；②结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想；③举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么。注意：①可参照图中文字及下面文章开头所给提示，作必要的发挥想象；②词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数；③作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。Theburdenofstudentshasbeenahottopicforyears,buttheloadofparentshasreceivedlittleattention,especiallyfromtheirownchildren.（半）开放类作文只给出主题，两三点提示，一段素材或漫画，然后由考生在此基础上充分发挥想象力，自由发挥，自由创作的一种文体。常见的（半）开放式作文命题形式:话题式/漫画式话题式（半）开放作文围绕题目中所给的特定的话题说明、叙述、举例，最后谈谈自己的感想或发表自己的看法。漫画式（半）开放作文要求考生根据一定提示(一般是一段20余字的英文提示和一幅漫画)，写一篇短文。漫画式（半）开放作文的写作第一步、描述漫画内容•描述漫画内容的基本条件是看懂漫画。•要求是：审图要准，定位要清；描述时言简意赅，不可越位。•要注意：不要花太多时间挖掘图画深意！第二步、阐述对漫画的理解•所谓对漫画的理解，是指围绕漫画反映的基本事实进行较为细致的解释和自己的看法、感想或人生感悟等。•要求是：逻辑清晰，合情合理。•挖掘漫画所反映出的社会现象和蕴含的哲理常用句式：•Itseemsveryridiculousthat…However,thiskindofstoryisperformedeverywhere.•Whatthepictureshowsistheexactreflectionof…•Theimpliedmeaningofthepictureshouldbetakenintoaccountseriously.Andthesocialproblemhasarousedgreatconcernamong…•Theremay/mightbethreefactorswhichcontributeto/accountfor/areresponsibleforthisphenomenon.Firstofall,…Andthenthesecondreasonisthat…Thelastreason,Ithink,is…对漫画中反映的问题作出评价或建议常用句式：•AsfarasI’mconcerned,/Inmyopinion,…•Frommypointofview,/Onmypart,…•Somemeasuresasfollowsshouldbetakentodealwith…Onlyintheseways,canwesolvetheproblemof…•Itisbetter/advisableto…•Iconsideritnecessary…•假设你参加所在年级的英文写作比赛，请按如下要求完成一篇短文：•1.简要描述下图的内容，并点明主题；•2.联系实际，谈谈出现此现象的原因及解决办法。•注意：1.词数不少于120个；提示词：蜗牛snailLook！Theyaremovingmoreslowlythanus从漫画中两只蜗牛中一只所说的话“Look!Theyaremovingmoreslowlythanus”可以看出两只蜗牛在开玩笑来取笑路上拥挤的汽车比它们还要跑得慢。由此我们可以推断：交通拥挤问题的严重性。•①Fromthepicturewecanseetwosnailsarejokingaboutthecarsonthecrowdedroads.Thishumorouspictureisn’tjusttoamuseus.Itactuallyshowsusoneofthemostseriousproblems.Asweallknow,theissueofheavytraffichaslongbeenaproblem.•②Inthepicture,therearetwosnailsplayingajokeaboutthecarsonthecrowdedroads.Howslowlytheyaremoving.Thepictureconveysusthemessagethatheavytrafficisaseriousproblem.•③Inthepicture,twosnailsareplayingajokeaboutthecarsonthecrowdedroads.Theyaremovingsoslowlythatwecan’thelpthinkingoftheseriousnessofheavytraffic.•④Fromthepicturewecanseetwosnailsarejokingaboutthecarswhicharemovingveryslowlyonthecrowdedroads.Thishumorouspictureisn’tjusttoamuseusbutactuallyshowsusoneofthemostseriousproblems.Thatis,heavytrafficisaseriousproblem.•分析现象产生的原因可以从下列考生比较熟悉的几个方面来考虑：•随着经济的发展，私家车的增加；•随着汽车的增加和城市人口的增加，一些道路等交通设施仍然没有得到改善；行人交通意识的淡薄等等。①Firstly,thenumberofprivatecarskeepsgrowingeveryday.Secondly,withalargenumberofpopulationandnumbersofcarsincreasing,someroadsstillremainunimproved.Thirdly,somepeople’slackofawarenessoftrafficregulationalsoresultsintrafficjam.②Therearemanycausesforthisproblem,butthefollowingmaybethemostimportantones.Thefirstcauseisthegreatincreaseinthenumberofprivatecars.Carstakeupmorespacebuttheycarryfewerpeople.Thesecondcauseistheslowandinefficientconstructionandimprovementoftheroadsandstreets.Withalargepopulationandnumbersofcarsincreasing,someroadsstillremainunimproved.Thelastcauseistheinsufficientmanagementofthetrafficsystemandsomepeople’slackofawarenessoftrafficregulations,whichisanobstacletotheflowoftraffic.•③Butwhydoesthishappen?Ithinkseveralfactorscontributetothisphenomenon.Firstly,withtherapiddevelopmentofourcountry'seconomy,moreandmorecarsarecomingintocommonfamilies,whichcausesserioustrafficjams.Secondly,withalargenumberofpopulationandnumbersofcarsincreasing,althoughthegovernmentputsalargeamountofmoneyonbuildingorrepairingroadseveryyear,thequalityoftheroadsisnotsatisfactory.What’sworse,somepublictransportationstillremainunimproved.Thirdly,somepeopleareunawareoftheimportanceofobeyingtrafficregulations,soit’snotuncommontoseeaccidentsblockingtraffic.•紧紧围绕所分析的原因（不要面面俱到，可以选取其中一两个原因）提出解决问题的看法。•①Personally,Ithinkthatratherthanpromoteprivatecars,it’sbettertoimprovethepublictransportationsystemwithscientificroaddesignandpropermanagement.Moreimportantly,nevercantrafficjamsbeeasedwithoutself-disciplinedcitizens.•②Inmyopinion,thenumberofprivatecarsshouldbeputundercontrol.Andatthesametime,busesshouldhavetheirownspecialrouteswhichcannotbeusedbyothervehicles.Besides,undergroundtrainandcitytrainshouldbedevelopedquickly.•③Tosolvetheproblem,somepiecesofadviceareputforward.Isuggestthatmorestreetsandroadsshouldbebuilt.Besides,weshouldtakesomemeasurestolimitthenumberofcars.Thiscandecreasethetrafficflow.④Inmyopinion,thenumberofprivatecarsshouldbeputundercontrol.Meanwhile,thegovernmentshouldtakesomemeasurestoimprovesomepublictransportation.What’smore,peoplemustobeytrafficregulationsstrictly.Forexample,pedestriansdon’tcrossthestreetsuntilthetrafficlightsareforthem.参考范文•Fromthepicturewecanseetwosnailsarejokingaboutthecarsonthecrowdedroads.Thishumorouspictureisn’tjusttoamuseus.Itactuallyshowsusoneofthemostseriousproblems.Asweallknow,theissueofheavytraffichaslongbeenaproblem.•Butwhydoesthishappen?Ithinkseveralfa