江苏省七市(南通、泰州、扬州、徐州、淮安、宿迁、连云港)2019届高三第二次调研考试英语试题

【题文】请认真阅读下面有关某校学生父母教育方式现状调查的饼状图及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。OneFridayinJune,2018.InaschoolMr.Chen:Whatwillyourparentsdoifyougetalowergradeinschool?LiHua:Theywillbeangryandscoldme.Mr.Chen:Doyouwanttohaveatalkwithyourparents,forexample,aboutyourlifeinschool?LiHua:Idon’twanttotellthemmyschoollifeaswellasmyfeelings,becausetheycan’tunderstandme.Mr.Chen:Howdoyouliketherelationbetweenyourparentsandyou?LiHua:Althoughtheyloveme,theyoftenpushmetostudyhard,whichputstoomuchpressureonme.【写作内容】1.用约30个词概括上述饼状图的主要内容；2.简要谈谈父母教育方式的重要性；3.谈谈你理想中的父母教育方式。(上述对话仅供参考)。【写作要求】1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.不必写标题。【评分标准】内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Mostofthestudentsenjoyaharmoniousfamilyatmospherewithequaltreatment.However,about16%oftheparentsexpecttoomuchoftheirchildrenandsomeareevenharderonthem.Theimportanceoffamilyeducationcannotbestressedtoomuch.It’swellknownthatthefamilyisaperson’sfirstschool,andparentsarethefirstteachers.Properfamilyeducationisalwaysinthemostfundamentalposition,whichplaysaveryimportantroleinshapingachild’sgrowthanddevelopment.Inmyopinion,theidealfamilyeducationalmodeshouldbetheonethatadoptsthescientificmethodofencouragement,guidance,andtolerance.Parentsshouldpaygreatattentiontoemotionalcommunicationbysparingthetimetotalkwithchildren,listenattentivelytotheiraspirationsandgivethemencouragement.Onlyinthiswaycanchildrenbuildself-respectandself-confidenceanddeveloptheirphysicalandmentalhealth.【解析】【分析】这是一篇议论文。要求概括图文内容并对给出材料反映出的现象谈谈自己的看法。【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，1.用约30个词概括上述饼状图的主要内容；2.简要谈谈父母教育方式的重要性；3.谈谈你理想中的父母教育方式。(上述对话仅供参考)。第二，人称为第三人称。第三，时态为一般现在时。第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，用约30个单词写出上文概要。第二段，简要谈谈父母教育方式的重要性。第三段，谈谈你理想中的父母教育方式。第三步：确定关键词汇和短语：aharmoniousfamilyatmosphere，expecttoomuchoftheirchildren，familyeducation，fundamentalposition，achild’sgrowthanddevelopment，theidealfamilyeducationalmode，第四步：确定较为高级的句子：非限定性定语从句Properfamilyeducationisalwaysinthemostfundamentalposition,whichplaysaveryimportantroleinshapingachild’sgrowthanddevelopment.限定性定语从句Inmyopinion,theidealfamilyeducationalmodeshouldbetheonethatadoptsthescientificmethodofencouragement,guidance,andtolerance.倒装句型Onlyinthiswaycanchildrenbuildself-respectandself-confidenceanddeveloptheirphysicalandmentalhealth.第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接。第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式如：非限定性定语从句Properfamilyeducationisalwaysinthemostfundamentalposition,whichplaysaveryimportantroleinshapingachild’sgrowthanddevelopment.限定性定语从句Inmyopinion,theidealfamilyeducationalmodeshouldbetheonethatadoptsthescientificmethodofencouragement,guidance,andtolerance.倒装句型Onlyinthiswaycanchildrenbuildself-respectandself-confidenceanddeveloptheirphysicalandmentalhealth.高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。【标题】江苏省七市（南通、泰州、扬州、徐州、淮安、宿迁、连云港）2019届高三第二次调研考试英语试题【结束】