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写作任务之叙述经历•Wokenupbyamessagepraisingher,theauthorfelthappyallday,whichmadeherrealizethepowerofgoodwords.Therefore,sheadvocates/callson/appealstopeopletosaykindwordstoothers.Attention1.审题：（1）主题；（赞扬－鼓励）赞扬praise(admire/appreciate)（2）经历/例子；写特定某次事情（不能概括），主题（3）你/他人；2.经历用间接引语3.篇幅（例子不宜过长）•Havingreadthepassage,Iwaslostinapieceofmemoryaboutgoodwords.TherewasatimewhenIwasinagonyasaconsequenceofthedreadfullytoughordealsthatIencountered.Oneday,myneighbor,whowaswateringtheflowersinhergarden,praisedmeasastrong-mindedgirlandcomparingmetotheflowersunderthesunlight.ExhaustedandparalyzedasIwas,Iregainedmyenergyandconfidenceimmediately.Itsuddenlystruckmethattherewasnothingcouldbeattheobstaclesbutanoptimisticmind.Thankstohergoodwords,nightmarewasawayfromme.•Fromthenon,IamnotmeanwithmygoodwordsbecauseIamfirmlyconvincedoftheirpowerandinfluence.Notonlycangoodwordsconveykindnessandenthusiasmtoothers,butalsorepresentafantasticlifestyle.1.紧扣主题（赞扬－鼓励）赞扬praise(admire/appreciate)2.选材：写经历时,可用借鉴原文法。因为写经历就是写记叙文,将记叙文的几个要素替换就行了,但一定要注意主题与原文故事一致。(1)讲述一次你赞扬他人或受到他人赞扬的经历。•Havingreadthepassage,aprominentlyunforgettablememoryirresistiblycomesfloodingintomymind.Itisofnoskepticismthatitwastheremarkablyencouragingpraisefrommyfatherthatrebuiltmyconfidence.TherewasatimewhenIalwaysdidadreadfullybadjobwhileplayingsoccerwithothersandmyteammatesinevitablyblamedourfailureonme,whichgaverisetomylackofconfidence.However,myfatherpatientlypraisedmeformyfabulousperformanceinthepast.Butforhispraise,Iwouldhavekeptunder-estimatingmyself.•Onaccountofthestimulatingwords,Iperformedasamoreextraordinaryplayerforthereasonthatnotonlydiditmakeconsiderablecontributionstoestablishingmyconfidencebutalsoitsuccessfullytookmetothedestinationofbeingthoroughlyawarethatweareexpectedtodigourpotentialanddedicateourselves.经历(主题句+具体事例）篇幅发表（主题句+列举）summaryItalldepends.1.Thereisnodoubtthatpraiseiswhatwealldesirefor.Therefore,Iwillneverbemeanwithmysmileandpraisetoothers,which,onmanyoccasion,willchangealot.2.Havingexperiencedsuchanunforgettableevent,Istronglyapproveoftheideathatsimplewordshaveanincredibleinfluenceinourlives.Thereisnoreasonforustoignorethepowerofpraise.(3)适当发挥（呼吁）3.Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthatacquiringotherspraiseplaysasignificantpartinourgrowth.Myperformanceendedupasabigsuccessundermymother’sencouragementandpraiseandallmyeffortspaidoffatthatmoment.4.Frommyperspective,kindwordscanshortenthedistancebetweenpeople’ssoul.(3)适当发挥（呼吁）1.RemarkablyafraidasIwas,Iwasreluctanttoswimundersuchfreezingcoldcircumstance.2.Simpleasmymother’spraisewas,notonlydiditbuildupmyconfidence,butalsoencouragedmetofacepotentialdifficultiesbravely.3.AimlessasIwas,myteacherneverintendedtodesertme.名词/形容词+as/though+主语+动词4.Exhaustedanddepressed,avoicefrommyteachercameintomyears.5.Nervousandexcited,abundantpreparationandpracticeeventuallyenabledmetoharvestthechampion.6.Passionateandhappy,Isparenoefforttopraisethepeoplesurroundingme,whichwillundoubtedlycontributetoharmony.形容词、过去分词表心情7.Onlybycontributingourselvestothesocietyselflesslycanourexistencebecomesignificantandbrilliant.8.Despitethesimplepraise,notonlydiditstimulatemypassionbutalsoitgavemetheenergytostriveagainst（对抗）theobstacles.9.Adiversityofdifficultiesorfailuresmayhappentousunavoidably(inevitably),butonnoconditionwillIbeafraidoftheobstaclesoncountofmymother’scontinuous(constant)encouragementandpraise.倒装虚拟,倒装10.ItisofnoskepticismthatwordsofpraisehavearemarkableimpactonJohn’slives.Withoutmyadmirablewords,Johnwouldnothavemadesuchgreatprogress.11.ButformyChineseteacher’spraise,Iwouldn’thavewrittensuchbeautifulcharacters.Tohiscredit,notonlycanmywritingmakeprogress,butalsoIbecomemoreoutgoing.名词当主语1.Anxietyandpressurecompletelytookupmymindbeforethecompetition.2.Sorrow(bitterness)anddoubts(skepticism)camefloodingintomymind.3Hearingthewords,thestoneinmyheartrelievedandabrimfulofpassioncamefloodingintomymind.4.Myteacher’skindwordsandtheaudiences’applausecontributetomysuccessfulperformance.5.Onthatspecialoccasion,diversitiesofhappinessandpleasurecrowdedinmymind,andburstsofapplausecameintomyears.6.BeforeIgotonthestage,nervousnessfilledmymind.7.Praisedbyme,surprise(astonishment/shock)appearedonhisface.8Asanordinarygirlof13,talent,beautyorcompetencehadnothingtodowithme.doing动名词当主语9.Helpingherrealizeherownshiningpointsandapplaudingherwasmyurgentduty.(wassecondtonothing).10.Gainingabsolutelysignificantachievementenlightenshimtoclimbhigher.11.Beingpraisedisexpectedtoberegardedasafabuloustooltobuildupone’sconfidence.