写作如何写好高中英语作文English writing

如何写好高中英语作文？Howtowriteanexcellentcomposition？给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象整体三部分1.Heading点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性2.Body中心记述部分；层次分明3.Ending小结；呼应主题高中英语作文的三个层次。第一层次：第二层次：第三层次：简单句基础篇短语连词升华篇从句非谓语动词终极篇稳拿及格分，略有盈余：9-11优等分数:12-13卓越得分13-15简单句基础篇DearTom,IrememberthatyoutoldmeyouwantedtoworkinChina.Now,ourschoolneedsateacherfromothercountries.Youcanhaveatry.YoucanteachSpokenEnglish,EnglishWriting,BritainTodayandAmericanToday.Youwillteachhighschoolstudents.Youneedtowork10hoursaweek.Youonlyneedtoteachthreecourses.Youcanalsobeanadvisortoourstudents’Englishcluborourschool’sEnglishnewspaper.Ifyouwanttocome,pleasetellme.Icanhelpyou.Yours,Wanglin短语连词升华篇•DearTom,•IrememberthatyouinformedmethatyouwerefondofworkinginChina.Now,ourschoolwillemployaforeignteachertoteachsomecoursestoseniorhighstudents.Youcanhaveatry.•Ifyoucome,youcanchoosethreeofthefollowingfourcourses:SpokenEnglish,EnglishWriting,BritainTodayandAmericanToday.Meanwhile,youneedtowork10hoursaweek.Besides/Inaddition,youcanalsoworkasanadvisortoourstudents’Englishcluborourschool’sEnglishnewspaper.•Pleaseletmeknowinadvanceifyouareinterestedandifyouhaveanyotherquestions.I’dbemorethanhappytohelp.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.•Yours,•Wanglin从句非谓语动词终极篇•DearTom,•HavingbeeninformedthatyouwerefondofworkinginChina,Iwillshareapieceofgoodnewswithyou.Ourschoolwillemployaforeignteachertoteachsomecoursestoseniorhighstudents.Youcanhaveatry.•Working10hoursaweek,youcanchoosethreeofthefourcourseswhichareSpokenEnglish,EnglishWriting,BritainTodayandAmericanToday.Besides/Inaddition,youcanalsoworkasanadvisortoourstudents’Englishcluborourschool’sEnglishnewspaper.•Pleaseletmeknowinadvanceifyouareinterestedandifyouhaveanyotherquestions.I’dbemorethanhappytohelp.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.•Yours,•WanglinIrememberthatyoutoldmeyouwantedtoworkinChina.Now,ourschoolneedsateacherfromothercountries.Youcanhaveatry.IrememberthatyouinformedmethatyouwerefondofworkinginChina.Now,ourschoolwillemployaforeignteachertoteachsomecoursestoseniorhighstudents.Youcanhaveatry.HavingbeeninformedthatyouwerefondofworkinginChina,Iwillshareapieceofgoodnewswithyou.Ourschoolwillemployaforeignteachertoteachsomecoursestoseniorhighstudents.Youcanhaveatry.YoucanteachSpokenEnglish,EnglishWriting,BritainTodayandAmericanToday.Youwillteachhighschoolstudents.Youneedtowork10hoursaweek.Youonlyneedtoteachthreecourses.Youcanalsobeanadvisortoourstudents’Englishcluborourschool’sEnglishnewspaper.Ifyoucome,youcanchoosethreeofthefollowingfourcourses:SpokenEnglish,EnglishWriting,BritainTodayandAmericanToday.Meanwhile,youneedtowork10hoursaweek.Besides/Inaddition,youcanalsoworkasanadvisortoourstudents’Englishcluborourschool’sEnglishnewspaper.Working10hoursaweek,youcanchoosethreeofthefourcourseswhichareSpokenEnglish,EnglishWriting,BritainTodayandAmericanToday.Besides/Inaddition,youcanalsoworkasanadvisortoourstudents’Englishcluborourschool’sEnglishnewspaper.Ifyouwanttocome,pleasetellme.Icanhelpyou.Pleaseletmeknowinadvanceifyouareinterestedandifyouhaveanyotherquestions.I’dbemorethanhappytohelp.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.技巧1.使用高级词汇3.使用连接词书面表达高分的技巧2.使用丰富的句式定语从句英语作文常用连词First/Firstofall,…首先Inthefirstplace,…首先ToBegin/startwith,…首先Second/Secondly,…其次Lastbutnottheleast,…最后一点，也是非常重要的—点•条理:表举例:forinstance例如forexample例如表对比和转折:however,…但是onthecontrary,…恰恰相反nevertheless,…尽管如此，然而otherwise,…否则instead,…相反ontheonehand,…一方面ontheotherhand,…另一方面Because(of)因为Therefore,...所以Asaresult/consequence,...结果Thanksto...因为……表因果:furthermore,…此外而且inaddition,…此外而且what'smore,…此外而且besides除了……,此外而且notonly...butalso…不仅……而且……表递进AsfarasIamconcerned,…就我而言Inshort，...总之Inbrief，...总之Inconclusion总之Insummary总之Allinall总之Inaword总之表总结•语篇训练（定语从句在写作中的应用）•以下是你们班班长李华的相关信息：•李华是我的好朋友，她的妈妈是我的英语老师。李华总是乐于助人，这使得她在班上很受欢迎。曾经有一段时间，她因为生病学习受到影响。在她的努力之下，她终于赶上了班上的同学。她的梦想是成为偏远地区的一名志愿者，那里的人们非常需要帮助。•1.李华是我的好朋友，她的妈妈是我的英语老师。•Lihuaismygoodfriend.HermotherismyEnglishteacher.•2.李华总是乐于助人，这使得她在班上很受欢迎。•Sheisalwaysreadytohelpothers.Itmakesherpopularamongthewholeclass.•3.曾经有一段时间，她因为生病学习受到影响。Lihua,whosemotherismyEnglishteacher,ismygoodfriend.•Sheisalwaysreadytohelpothers,whichmakesherpopularamongthewholeclass.•Therewasatimewhenherstudysufferedbecauseofherillness.•她的梦想是成为偏远地区的一名志愿者，那里的人们非常需要帮助。•Now,herdreamistobecomeavolunteerintheremoteareas.Peopleareingreatneedofhelp.•Now,herdreamistobecomeavolunteerintheremoteareas,wherepeopleareingreatneedofhelp.•联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：•1)大小：近100户人家，约500口人。•2)变化：过去很穷，78年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。•3)教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有4层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。•注意：1）要点齐全，前后连贯。•2）词数：100-120之间。•Ladiesandgentlemen,•Welcometoourschool.Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.Ithaschangedalotsince1978.Peopleherearericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.•Theschoolherewasverysmall.Nowithasbeenrebuilt.Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.•Thankyou.改写文章要求：1.扩展句子内容；2.变高级词汇；3.变定语从句；4.加短语和连词Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!①Thisvillageisasmallonewit