写作技巧点拨系列(二)

写作技巧点拨系列(二)熟悉四种并列关系,写好并列句【核心点拨】四种并列关系(联合、转折、选择、因果)对应并列句的四种基本句型。并列句是由并列连词and,but,or,for,so等把两个或两个以上互不依从,但意思紧密联系的简单句连在一起而构成的句子。其结构为:简单句+并列连词+简单句。下面我们就结合近几年高考英语书面表达参考范文中的例句来具体学习一下。1.联合并列句联合并列句常由并列连词(短语)and,notonly...butalso...等连接。其中and可表示平行、顺接、评注、条件等。例如:Besides,I’measytogetalongwithandIreallyenjoymakingfriends.(2014·新课标全国卷Ⅰ)IamastudentinChinaandIplantogotoBritaintoattendasummerschoolduringthevacation.2.转折并列句转折并列句常由并列连词but,while,yet,whereas,nevertheless等连接。其中while,whereas表示的是对比“而”。例如:Thefoodpoisoningincidenthasbeendealtwithproperly,yetwe’vecometorealizetheimportanceoffoodsafety.Helikessports,whereasI’drathercollectstamps.(2014·重庆高考)Itlooksquiteordinary,buttome,itisthemostspecialone.3.选择并列句选择并列句常由并列连词(短语)or,orelse,otherwise,either...or...等连接。其中or,orelse表示“或者;不然的话”。例如:Wearyourcoatorelseyouwillcatchacold.(2013·新课标全国卷Ⅱ)Peoplecaneithergivethemasgiftsorhangthemintheirhouses.4.因果并列句因果并列句由并列连词so,for,therefore等连接。其中for表示解释说明性质的理由。例如:(2014·天津高考)Alltheclassmatesarefriendlyandkind,soyoudon’tneedtoworryaboutthedifficulty.I’msorryforIwon’tbeabletopayavisittoBeijingnextweekendwithyou.【点津】(1)在“祈使句+and/or+陈述句”结构中,当前后两部分为承接关系时,用and;前后意思为相反关系时,用or。可将前面的祈使句转换成由if引导的条件状语从句,这时将and或or去掉。例如:Hurryup,andwewillbethereintime.=Ifwehurryup,wewillbethereintime.如果我们快点,我们就会及时到达那里。(2)notonly...butalso连接的并列句,当notonly置于句首时,其后的句子通常要用部分倒装的形式。例如:Notonlyhasshebeenlatethreetimes,butalsoshehasdonenowork.她不仅迟到了3次,她还没干一点活。(3)并列句有时也可不用并列连词连接,而用标点符号分号(;)连接。例如:Thefutureisbright;theroadistortuous.前途是光明的,道路是曲折的。【即时应用】1.用适当的并列连词填空①Hecouldn’tknowthetruthaboutme,_______hewouldn’ttreatmelikethis.②Thebellisringing_______thelessonisover.③Hewasill,_______hekeptonworking.④Hedoesn’ttalkmuch,_______hethinksalot.⑤_______youleavehereatonce_______Iwillcallthepolice.⑥Itmusthaverainedlastnight,_______thegroundisstillwet.⑦Janewasdressedingreen_______Marywasdressedinblue.⑧Thechildwassick;he,_______,didn’tgotoschool.答案:①or/otherwise②and③but/yet④but/yet⑤Either;or⑥for⑦while/whereas⑧therefore2.请把下面句子合并成一个并列句①Shemakesagoodnameinherclassmates.Shealwaysdevoteshersparetimetohelpingothers.___________________________________________________________②Familyoffersmewarmthandcare.Friendsgivemestrengthandhorizons.___________________________________________________________③Remember,beingpolitecostsnothing.Beingpoliteisworthmillionsofdollars.___________________________________________________________④Runfast.Youwillbecaughtupwith.___________________________________________________________⑤Gaintheconfidenceyoudesire.Showhowenergeticyoureallyare.___________________________________________________________答案:①Shealwaysdevoteshersparetimetohelpingothers,soshemakesagoodnameinherclassmates.②Familyoffersmewarmthandcarewhilefriendsgivemestrengthandhorizons.③Remember,beingpolitecostsnothing,butitisworthmillionsofdollars.④Runfastoryouwillbecaughtupwith.⑤Gaintheconfidenceyoudesireandshowhowenergeticyoureallyare.3.使用恰当的并列连词,翻译下列句子①他英语说得不仅正确而且很快。_________________________________________________________②要么你对,要么我对。_________________________________________________________③珍妮说她病了,但是我刚才在街上看到她了。_________________________________________________________④一些人很富有,而其他人很贫穷。_________________________________________________________⑤商店都关门了,所以我没有买到牛奶。_________________________________________________________⑥我们正在开会,突然有人闯了进来。_________________________________________________________⑦他肯定没有回家,因为我刚才还看到他了。_________________________________________________________⑧他有很多钱,并且可以随便花钱。_________________________________________________________答案:①NotonlydoeshespeakEnglishcorrectlybutalso(hespeaks)fast.②EitheryouarerightorIamright.③Jennysaidshewasill,butIsawherinthestreetjustnow.④Somepeopleareveryrichwhile/whereasothersareverypoor.⑤Alltheshopswereclosed,therefore,Ididn’tbuythemilk.⑥Wewerehavingameetingwhensomeonebrokein.⑦Hecouldn’thavegonehome,forIsawhimjustnow.⑧Hehaslotsofmoneyandhecanspenditfreely.