Results-(SCI写作)

MedicalWritingCourseResults研究生系列讲座（五）IMRADFormatIntroductionMethodsResultsandDiscussionResultsFunctionsProvidingthedatacollectedAllowingreaderstoevaluateandinterpretResultsAmountofdatatopresentFull-lengthmanuscript:Introduction:～500wordsMethods:～1500-2000wordsResults:～1500-2000words,4-6illustrationsDiscussion:～1500wordsmaximumResultsTheeasiestsectiontowriteBetruetothepurposeofourstudyHaverigorouslytestedourresearchhypothesisResultsThemostobjectivesectionPresentingtheunadorneddatawithaminimumamountofexplanationResultsDifferencesbetweenresultsandmethodsMethods:HowthedatawereaccumulatedResults:WhatdatawereaccumulatedResultsDifferencesbetweenresultsanddiscussionResults:Datapresentation(“Experimentsshowedthat...”)Discussion:Datainterpretation(“Experimentssuggestthat...”)ICMJE’suniformrequirementsTheinformativecoreofthepaperPresentingourobservationsinadequatedetailandinaformwhichfacilitatesinterpretationICMJE’suniformrequirementsWhatwasfoundorseen？Decideonalogicalorderforpresentation(Table1)PresenttheresultsthathaveabearingonthequestionyouareexaminingExcludeirrelevantfindings,butneveromitvalidresultsthatappeartocontradictyourhypothesisResultsWhatyoudid1.Expt.A2.Expt.B3.Expt.C4.Expt.D(historical)What&howyoupresented1.Expt.D2.Expt.B3.Expt.A(logical)OrderofpresentationResultsWaystopresentdataTextIllustrations(tables,figuresandgraphs)anintegralpartoftheresultssectionGeneralguidelineResultsunderstandablewithouttextMovesMoveOnePresentingobservationsconsistentwithourexpectationsorhypothesisMoveTwoPresentingourinconsistentobservationsThreeStepsofMove1Theexpressionreferringtolatertextoravisualelement(Introductorystatement)AstatementoftheresultsAsubstantiationorreiterationoftheresultsStepOneDirectingthereaders’attentiontotextwhichexistsbelowortodatawhichexistsinanaccompanyingtableorfigureThreeStepsofMove1StepOneTense:presenttenseVoice:activeorpassivevoiceFigure1showsmeanbloodpressuresforthetwogroups.Thehigherincidenceofbackpainincivilianpilotsmaybedueto….ThreeStepsofMove1AmetatextualexpressionreferringtolatertextoravisualelementAstatementoftheresultsAsubstantiationorreiterationoftheresultsStepTwo:pasttenseVoice:activeorpassivevoiceThetreatmentgrouphadlowermeanarterialpressurethanthecontrolgroup.Afterflightsoflessthantwohours,11%ofthearmypilotsand33%ofthecivilianpilotsreportedbackpain.obtainedwhentheresearchwasperformedTenseThreeStepsofMove1AmetatextualexpressionreferringtolatertextoravisualelementAstatementoftheresultsAsubstantiationorreiterationoftheresultsStepThreeTense:pasttenseVoice:activeorpassivevoiceOverall,PORsforpretermbirthandsmallsizeforgestationalageassociatedwithH1N1vaccinationinthesecondorthirdtrimesterdidnotchangewhenadjustedforexposuretoseasonalinfluenzavaccine.MovesMoveOnePresentingobservationsconsistentwithourexpectationsorhypothesisMoveTwoPresentingourinconsistentobservationsMove2thesamestepsasMove1butmoreabbreviatedImplication:Ifouroriginalresearchplanhadbeenbetterthoughtout,ourobservationswouldhavebeenabettermatchforourexpectations.Move2AdverseEventsTherewasoneseriousadverseeventthatmayhavebeenrelatedtothestudy.Oneparticipantinthegroupreceivingin-personsupportwasassaultedwhileexercisingandhadmusculoskeletalinjuries.…(P.64)ResultsFunctionsofillustrationsCondenselargeamountsofinformationConvincereadersofyourfindingsbyshowingdataqualityFocusattentiononcertainfindingsSimplifycomplexfindingsPromotethinkinganddiscussionResultsAdvantagesofusingillustrationsMoreemphasisRapidappreciationLesslanguage-dependentIllustrationstabulation列表formaltable规则表①statisticaltable统计表②textual/wordtable文字表③matrix矩阵表Illustrationsdiagramandflowchart示意图和流程图primaryevidence原始数据①photographsofpatients患者照片②micrographs显微照片③gelelectrophoretograms凝胶电泳图④polygraphrecording多导描记图Illustrationsgraphs曲线图①linegraphs/drawings线图②scattergraphs,scattergrams散点图③bargraphs条图④histograms直方图⑤frequencypolygons频数多方图Illustrationsothertypes①piegraphs饼图②forestplot森林图③map地图Illustrationslegends,caption图例①figuredesignation图标（Figure2）②figuretitle图题③experimentaldetails试验细节④valueexpression标明数值报告形式Valuesareexpressedasmean(SD)⑤definition定义解释⑥statisticalinformation统计学信息IllustrationsSomepitfallsoffiguresandcaptionsFigures①Notmentionedintext②Textualdatainconsistentwithfigures③Mislabeling④Symbols,datapoints,unreadableorcluttered⑤UglinessIllustrationsCaptions①Reiterateresultssection②Writteninshorthand,abbreviatedformratherthanwholesentencesIllustrationsChoosingthemosteffectivetypeofillustrationsforagivengoal①Toshowsequentialprocesses:flowchart②Toclassifyinformation:table,list,pictograph③Todescribepartsorcircuits:schematic④Todescribeaprocess,organization,ormodel:pictograph,flowchart,blockdiagram⑤Todescribeachangeofstate:linegraph,bargraphIllustrations⑥Todescribeproportions:piechart,bargraph⑦Todescriberelationships:table,linegraph,blockdiagram⑧Todescribecausation:flowchart,pictograph⑨Todescribeanentireobject:schematic,drawing,photograph⑩Toshowtheverticalorhorizontal:flowchart,drawingtree,blockdiagramIllustrationsProviding