paragraph Development by Example and List

ParagraphDevelopmentbyExampleandListOutlineI.DefinitionII.TwoTypicalStructuresIII.AnillustrationIV.WritingPracticeV.SummaryI.DefinitionAnillustrationparagraphusesexamplestoshow,explainorproveanopinion.Examplescanmakegeneralandabstractideasvividandmoreexact.II.TwoTypicalStructuresStructure1:ThetopicsentenceAnexamplesentenceExtendedexamplesentencesUseonedetailedexampletoillustratethepointAconcludingsentenceSample11.Thetopicsentence:Sometimeswecanachievepeaceofmindbysimplychangingourattitude.2.Anexamplesentence:forexample…3.Extendedexamplesentences:Fredusedto…Fred’schangedattitude…4.Concludingsentence:itdidnot…butitdidsolvetheproblemofhispointlessanger.Structure2ThetopicsentenceExample1TheconcludingsentenceExample2Example3TransitionalexpressionsUseorlistseveralbriefexamplestoprovethepointTransitionalexpressionsbyListorExampleExamples:forinstance;forexample;anillustrationofthis;acaseinpoint;Toillustrate;anotherinstance/exampleof;HereareafewexamplesList:补充：apartfromthis;besides;inaddition递进：furthermore;moreover;whatismoreInthefirstplace/firstandforemost/firstofall,Next;then;finallyandsoon.1.Topicsentence:Historyinformsusthatstoriesofsuccessarealsostoriesofgreatfailures.2.Examples:(1).WinstonChurchillTaketheyoungWinstonChurchillasanexample.(anexamplesentence)AtHarrow,hefailed…(extendedexamplesentences)(2).AlbertEinstein(3).Keynes3.Concludingsentence:thelastoneSample2III.AnIllustration1.WritethetopicsentenceWriteaparagraphonthetopicsentence:“Inanumberofways,ourcommunityismakingiteasierforolderstudentstoattendcollege”.Ways,easierOlderstudentstoattendcollegeCoursesonSaturdaysandsundaysCreditforlifeexperienceDay-carecenterMOOCCoursesontheevening2.ListingYoucanuseyourcellphonetocollectinformationontheInternet3.Grouping•Arrangethelists/examplesinproperorder(timeorder,spaceorder,orderofimportanceandsoon).ExampleonP1244.Outlining5.DeveloptheOutlineintosentences6.Addpropertransitionalexpressions7.ExampleonP125ExampleInanumberofways,ourcommunitycollegeismakingiteasierforolderstudentstoattendcollege.Forexample,thecollegenowofferscoursesonSaturdaysandSundays.Classesonthesedaysappealtothosestudentswho,becauseofworkorfamilyresponsibilities,cannotenrollincoursesduringtheweek.Inaddition,manydepartmentsinthecollegehavebeguntooffercreditsforlifeexperience,sostudentswithagoodbackgroundintheworldofworkcancompletetheirdegreesmorequickly.Finally,DeanRobertsonannouncedlastweekthatthecollegewillsoonopenaday-carecentreforthechildrenofstudentswhowouldattendclassesiftheyhaveapleasantandsafeplacetoleavetheirchildren!topicsentenceTransitionalexpressionsShowfurtherexplanations&proofsTask:Developaparagraphonthetopicof“onlineshopping”.IV.WritingPracticeOnlineShoppingSavetimeconvenientproductscomparisonloseprivateinformationAllkindsofcommoditiesGetcheatedPre-writing1.ListingfalseproductsUnsafetyaccountRiskintransportPre-writing2.GroupingAdvantages:savetimeeasytocomparecommoditiesofferallkindsofcommoditiescheaperproductsDisavantages:getcheated;loseprivateinformationriskintransportunsafebankaccountPre-writing3.Writingthetopicsentence1.Shoppingonlinehasmanyadvantages.2.Onlineshoppinghasmadeourdailylifemoreconvenientandcomfortable.3.Undoubtedly,onlineshoppinghasbroughtusmanyconveniences.1.itspotentialdangerstotheconsumerscouldnotbeignored.2.onlineshoppinghasmanydisadvantages.PositivesidesnegativesidesPre-writing4.Outlining1.listseveralbreifexamples2.Undoubtedly,onlineshoppinghasbroughtusmanyconveniences.easypayeasycomparisoneasychoices.1.listoneexample2.itspotentialdangerstotheconsumercouldnotbeignoredexamplesentence:consumersmightnotgettheexactproducttheywantGiveandetailedexampleofyourfriendsoryourselftoillustratetheexamplesentence.While-writing1.Developingtheoutlineintosentences.2.Addtransitionalexpressionstoyourwriting.3.PresentyourwritingtoyourclassTransitionalexpressionsbyListorExampleExamples:forinstance;forexample;anillustrationofthis;acaseinpoint;Toillustrate;anotherinstance/exampleof;HereareafewexamplesList:补充：apartfromthis;besides;inaddition递进：furthermore;moreover;whatismoreInthefirstplace/firstandforemost/firstofall,Next;then;finallyandsoon.TwoTypicalStructuresStructure1:ThetopicsentenceAnexamplesentenceExtendedexamplesentencesUseonedetailedexampletoillustratethepointAconcludingsentenceTwosamplesOnedetailedexample:Thoughonlineshoppinghasbroughtusmanyconveniences,yetitspotentialdangerstotheconsumercouldnotbeignored.Onepossibleriskisthatconsumersmightnotgettheexactproducttheywantbecausetheinformationprovidedmightnotbeenoughorreliable.Forasimpleexample,aconsumerwhowantstobuyapairofshoesmightendupgettingapairwithdesiredstylebutunfitsizes.Afterall,peoplehavetotrythemselveswhenbuyingclothesorshoes.Moreover,ifconsumersdonotpayattentiontothecredibilityofonlinestores,theymightgetcheated.TopicsentenceAnexamplesentenceExtendenexamplesentencesStructure2ThetopicsentenceExample1TheconcludingsentenceExample2Example3TransitionalexpressionsUseorlistseveralbriefexamplestoprovethepointSeveralbriefexamplesUndoubtedly,onlineshoppinghasmadeoureverydaylifemorec