状语从句在高考写作中的运用(公开课最终)

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Ifthedreamisbigenough,thefactsdon'tcount.如果梦想远大,就一定可以克服艰难险阻。DearJohn,It’sapitythatIhavetosaysorrytoyou!Itwasnot____IreadyourletterthatIknewyoulovedmesomuchandwantedtomarryme,forwehaven’tseeneachother_____weparted._________weareallbusy,Ijusthavetodropafewlinestoyou.Thefactthatyou’renotgoodatEnglishdisappointsme,althoughyouloveme.Totellyouthetruth,Ican’tstandanyonewhocannotspeakEnglishwell.So_________happens,I’mgladtohavemetyou,andinfact,_____timegoesby,you’llgraduallyforgetme.BestwishesAliceuntilsinceNowthatwhateverasadearJohnletterAdverbialClause(绝交信)1.ItisnotuntilIreadyourletterthatIknowyoulovemesomuchandwanttomarryme.2.wehaven’tseeneachothersinceweparted.3.Nowthatweareallbusy,Ijusthavetodropafewlinestoyou.4.Whateverhappens,I’mgladtohavemetyou.5.Astimegoesby,you’llgraduallyforgetme.Iwillnevermarryyou.高考:NeverwillImarryyou.四级:YouarethelastmanIamwillingtomarry.六级:UndernocircumstanceswillImarryyou.GRE:Ifyouwerethelastmanintheworld,Iwoulddefinitelyremainsingle.写作技能提升:句子润色HowtobeautifytheAdverbialClauseinWritingWhilewriting,trytousedifferentformsofverbsandclauses(从句)tomakeyouressaysimple,clear,vividandfullofvarieties.2012广东高考基础写作你接受了一项写作任务,要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。【写作内容】请根据以下信息,介绍一位传奇人物姓名:AllanStewart国籍:澳大利亚出生日期:1915年3月7日世界纪录:2006年获硕士学位时年龄最大学习态度:挑战自我,永远为时不晚。第一个学位:1936年获得第二个学位:医学博士第三个学位:80多岁时决定学习法律,2006年获得硕士学位。第四个学位:2012年通过网络学习获得,善于合理安排学习时间,受到老师表扬。Becausehewasgoodatarranginghisstudytime,hegotpraisefromhisteacher学会使用复合句现象学生作文中出现很多错别字原因……每天有很多作业做,没有记住生字。参考词汇:错别字:wrongly-writtencharacters要求:1.用状语从句表达表格的原因2.语句间要有连贯性现象:Therearemanywrongly-writtencharactersinstudents’compositions.…2.Theyhavesomuchhomeworktodoeverydaythattheyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters.1.每天有很多作业做2.没有记住生字。①Theyhavemuchhomeworktodoeveryday.3.Withsomuchhomeworktodo,theyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters.1.Becausetheyhavesomuchhomeworktodo,theyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters.第三步:合并句子②Theyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters.第一步:拆分成几个简单句第二步:分别翻译这几个简单句HighlightsofAdverbialClausewhilewriting1.状语从句与分词之间的灵活转换2.高考状语从句中的倒装3.高考状语从句中的省略4.状语从句与其他从句之间的转换5.Someproverbs:WhenIthinkofthetriptoShanghai,I’mimpressedmostwithMr.Rui.HeismyoralEnglishteacher.(2012广东高考读写任务:老师影响学生的话题)1.状语从句与分词之间的灵活转换请试试改写下面的句子吧!(改后)ThinkingofthetriptoShanghai,I’mimpressedmostwithMr.Rui,myoralEnglishteacher.1.AfterIrealizedtheimportanceoflearning,Istudiedevenharder.Realizingtheimportanceoflearning,Istudiedevenharder.2.状语从句与倒装inversion1).Iwasaddictedtoonlinegames.AndIwasevenabsentfromschool.•Iwas___addictedtoonlinegames____Iwasevenabsentfromschool.sothatSoaddictedtoonlinegameswasIthatIwasevenabsentfromschool.2).Sheisachild.SheknowsalotAlthoughsheisachild,sheknowsalot.Childassheis,sheknowsalot.当so+adj./adv.+that…句型中的so+adj./adv.放在句首时,主句谓语用部分倒装。当as(尽管)引导让步状语,该从句的表语、状语或动词原形等习惯上要放到从句最前面。2009年广东卷英语作文你是校报小记者,最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况:时间:上周末对象:眼科医生(eye-doctor)王教授主题:我国中小学生近视(short-sightedness)问题基本信息:(1)发生率:略高于50%(2)人数:世界第一专家解读:(1)原因:很复杂(2)治疗:没有哪一种药物能治愈近视(3)建议:不要过度用眼;多参加户外活动(4)特别提示:如何握笔也和近视有关根据以上情况写一篇采访报道,并包括如下内容:1.采访的时间、对象和主题;2.中小学生近视的发生率及人数;3.专家解读。原因很复杂,以致于没有哪一种药物能治愈近视。Healsopointedthatthecausesforshort-sightednessaresocomplicatedthatnomedicinecancureshort-sightedness.Healsopointedthatsocomplicatedarethecausesforshort-sightednessthatnomedicinecancureshort-sightedness.1.Don’tspeakuntilyouarespokento.2.Hewasaswimmerwhenhewasachild.3.Shestoodatthegateasifshewaswaitingforsomeone.4.I’llbuyaTVsetifitisnecessary.5.Thoughitiscold,heworeashirt.()()()()()3.点击高考状语从句中的省略Ellipsis:什么时候可以省略?怎么省略?在含有状语从句的复合句中若从句的主句是it或与主句的主语相同,且在谓语中含有be时,常省略从句的主语和be。1._____________________(在北京的时候),IpaidavisittotheSummerPalace.2._________________(除非修理),themachineisofnouse.3._______________________(如果有必要的话),youcanhelpustodosomething.4.Agirlstoodatthegateoftheschoolasif______________________________(跟老师讲话).When/WhileinBeijingUnlessrepairedtalkingwithateacherIfnecessary4.状语从句与其他从句之间的转换1).Iwon’tbelievewhathesays.(nomatterwhat状语从句)2).Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.(themore…themore)Nomatterwhathesays,Iwon’tbelieve.Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhefelt.1.有志者事竟成。Wherethere’sawill,there’saway.2.读万卷书不如行万里路Amillionmilesisbetterthanamillionbooks3.入乡随俗.WheninRomedoastheRomansdo.4.万事开头难Allthingsaredifficultbeforetheyareeasy.5.只要不灰心,就一定能成功.Aslongasyoudon’tloseheart,you’llsucceed.5.Usefulproverbs:Trytomakeyoursentence…Afterclasstrytosearchforsuchbeautifulandvividsentencesinyourbooks,OK?写作中运用状语从句时的常见错误1.Ididn’tgiveup.Becausemymotheroftentoldme,wherethereisawill,thereisaway.”2.Sheworkedsohardthatcouldcatchupwithothers.3.Onlywekeepoptimisticcanwesucceed.4.Whenhehesitating,amancameuptohim.写作中状语从句的几个常见错误:1.Ididn’tgiveup.Becausemymotheroftentoldme,wherethereisawill,thereisaway.”2.Sheworkedsohardthatcouldcatchupwithothers.3.Onlywekeepoptimisticcanwesucceed.4.Whenhehesitating,amancameuptohim.,becauseshewhenwas1.只有从句,没有主句2.从句中缺少主语3.缺少从句的连接词4.从句中的谓语不完整summary:1.先阅读写作内容,将从句剥离出来,弄懂句子意思.2.写作中用状语从句优化句子3.避免使用状语从句时出现的错误.4.研读范文中从句的使用5.适当使用含状从的名言警句6.Practicemakesperfect!以下是网上走红的“低碳哥”的基本情况时间:2011年人物介绍:“低碳哥(Low-carbonBrother)”,用行动宣讲环保概念的年轻人主要做法有:1.捡起废纸,用空白一面写字。2.不开灯看电视,还把电视亮度调到最低(minimum)。3.上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