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第三部分高频话题写作指导八年级（下）Units1-2健康与急救写作导图分析近3年湖南42套中考真题可知，湖南各地市非常重视对该话题的考查，且考查频次很高。该话题的命题角度主要为：1.如何保持身体健康。如：2013湘西中考真题关注青少年的体质，要求考生以“Howtokeephealthy“为题，写一篇短文，谈论体质下降的原因，并给出健康建议；2013湘潭中考真题要求针对青少年的肥胖问题，以“Adviceonkeepingawayfromoverweight（超重）”为题，给出建议帮助解决肥胖问题；2012衡阳中考真题要求以“AHealthyLifestyle”为题写一篇短文；2012岳阳中考真题要求以“Save(节约)FoodandEatHealthily”为题，写一篇短文号召节约人们粮食，健康饮食；2012郴州中考真题要求以“Let’sDoExerciseTogether”为题，给出锻炼身体的建议等。2.如何保障个人人身安全。如：2013岳阳中考真题为了增强和提高青少年的自我安全保护意识，要求考生以“HowtoBeSafe”为题，写出生活中常见的安全注意事项。下面以2013湘西中考真题为例分析此话题：Don’tstayupHowtokeephealthyDietExerciseSleepDon’teattoomuchrichfood,likemeatEatfruitsandvegetablesDrinkmilkNojunkfoodRunPlaybasketballDoyogaGotobedandgetupearly亮点句型速成常用句型：Anursegavemeaninjection.Itwasalittlepainful.推荐句型：→Anursegavemeaninjectionwhichwasalittlepainful.常用句型：Youmustn’tsmoke.It’sbadforyourhealth.推荐句型：→Youmustn’tsmokebecauseit’sbadforyourhealth.开头句：1.Itisveryimportanttokeephealthy.2.Nowadays,moreandmorepeopleknowtheimportanceofkeepinghealthy.3.Healthmeansmuchwealthtoeveryone.中间句：1.Wecan’tgotosleeptoolate.Wecan’tgetuptoolate.2.Weshouldeatthefoodhealthily.3.Weshoulddomoreexercise.4.Inthedoctor’soffice,thedoctorlooksmeovercarefully.5.Hetoldmetotakearestanddrinkmorewater.6.Thedoctoraskedmetotakethemedicinethreetimesaday.7.Afewdayslater,Ifeltbetter.FromthenonIbelievethatkeepinghealthyisthemostimportantthingintheworld.8.Alotofvegetableshelpyoutokeepingoodhealth.结尾句：1.It’seasytohaveahealthylifestyle,andit’simportanttoeatabalanceddiet.2.Ifyoufollowmyadvice,youwillbeinagoodhealth.3.Ihopeeveryonecankeepingoodhealth.（常用词汇见本书“28天话题词汇分类速记表”话题（十三）卫生与健康）写作模板Nowadays,moreandmorepeopleknowtheimportanceofkeepinghealthy.Forme,thereare几种方法tokeephealthy.First,itisnecessaryto做法一；Secondly,weshouldn’t做法二；Thirdly,itisimportantto做法三.Ifpeoplefollowthesethreewaysofkeepingfit,theywill健康会有怎样的改善.典例剖析（’13湘西）近20年来各方面调查表明青少年体质的下降令人担忧。请你以“HowtoKeepHealthy”为题，写一篇60～80词的短文，说说你的看法和建议。要求：主要包括以下内容，可以适当发挥。开头已给出，不计入总词数。1.体质下降的原因;如：eattoomuchjunkfood,havetoomuchhomework...2.合理的健康建议。如：someusefuladvice,shoulddomoreexercise,eatabalanceddiet（饮食平衡),enoughsleep...HowtoKeepHealthyNowadaysstudents’physicalfitnessisdeclining(体质下降)yearbyyear.Ithinktherearesomereasons.______________________________________________________________________________________【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，可以提取以下信息：1.文章应首先根据内容提示写出体质下降的原因，可用一般现在时表述，人称可用第一人称和第三人称；2.就“保持健康”提出建议，所写建议尽量全面，涉及内容尽量多角度，深层次，文体为说明文。【高分范文】HowtoKeepHealthyNowadaysstudents’physicalfitnessisdeclining(体质下降)yearbyyear.Ithinktherearesomereasons.Studentshavetoomuchhomeworktodo,sotheyhavelittletimetohavesports.Somestudentseattoomuchjunkfood.That’salsobadfortheirhealth.Then,howtokeephealthy?Firstly,itisnecessarytokeepabalanceddiet.Wearen’tsupposedtoeattoomuchjunkfood.Itisbetterforustohavemorefruitandvegetableseveryday.What’smore,wearesupposedtohavemealsregularly.Secondly,weshouldn’tstayuptoolate.Gettingenoughsleepisalsonecessary.Thirdly,itisimportanttotakeregularexercises,suchasswimming,joggingandsoon.Ifpeoplefollowthesethreewaysofkeepingfit,they’llgreatlyimprovetheirhealth.Ihopeeveryonecankeepingoodhealth.【检测菜单】1.应该做某事_____________2.熬夜______3.做某事很重要________________4.保持健康_________________besupposedtostayupitisimportanttokeepingoodhealth