英语六级作文-High-Salaries-or-Career-Development-高工资还是职业

HighSalariesorCareerDevelopment?高工资还是职业发展？Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicHighSalariesorCareerDevelopment?Youshouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:1)有的大学毕业生选择工作时主要看重高工资，而有的则认为良好的职业发展空间才是更重要的2)阐述他们各自的考虑3)表明你的看法HighSalariesorCareerDevelopment?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________行文思路本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出两种不同的选择，提纲第2点要求分别阐述这两种选择各自的理由，提纲第3点要求表明“我”的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出大学毕业生选择工作时不同的侧重点：注重高工资和注重职业发展空间;对比阐述他们各自的理由;表明“我”的倾向并说明理由。高分范文HighSalariesorCareerDevelopment?Therearemoreandmorepeoplelookingforjobseveryyear,buttheyhavedifferentviewsaboutwhatkindofjobtheyshouldchoose.[1]Someofthemfocustheirattentiononthejobsthatpromisehighsalaries.[1]Othersshowapreferenceforthosejobsthatofferchancestolearnskillsandadvancementpossibilities.[2]Peopleholdingthefirstviewusuallythinkthatmoremoneywillresultinmorehappiness.[3]Withalotofmoneyinhand,theywillbeabletoenjoyarichlife.Otherwise,theywillsufferfromdepression[4]duetolackofenoughmoney.[2]However,theholdersofthesecondviewarguethatoneshoulddevelophisskillsasroundlyaspossible.[5]Itiscareerdevelopmentthatcountsmost.Withoutdevelopment,youwillbeoutrunbyothersandfallbehindthetimessoonerorlater.Inmyview,careerdevelopmentistherightchoicebecausecareermaygiveuslongtermsatisfaction[6]whilehighsalarywouldgiveusshorttermhappiness.Besides,[7]generallyspeaking,agoodcareerdevelopmentwillbringhighsalariessoonerorlater.SoIwill[8]givemyvotetothecareerdevelopmentfirstandthenhighsalaries.【亮点点评】[1]用于引出两种不同的观点或倾向。[2]用于对比分析两种观点各自的理由。[3]“with+宾语+宾补”的独立结构充当状语。[4]“因为缺钱”。[5]强调句型，此处是强调句子的主语。[6]while引导比较状语从句，意为“然而”。[7]“一般来说”。[8]“选择”。佳句临摹1.佳句：Othersshowapreferenceforthosejobsthatofferchancestolearnskillsandadvancementpossibilities.临摹：近些年来，越来越多的人开始喜欢洋快餐。___________________________________________________________________________.2.佳句：However,theholdersofthesecondviewarguethatoneshoulddevelophisskillsasroundlyaspossible.临摹：然而，持第二种观点的人认为体育明星们为社会做出了杰出的贡献，因此应该得到特殊待遇。___________________________________________________________________________.3.佳句：Careermaygiveuslongngtermsatisfactionwhilehighsalarywouldgiveusshorttermhappiness.临摹：我们之间的共同之处使我们的关系牢固，而不同之处则都会我们如何相互理解。___________________________________________________________________________.【KEY】1.Inrecentyears,therearemoreandmorepeoplewhohaveshowedapreferenceforwesternfastfood.2.However,theholdersofthesecondviewarguethatsincesportsstarshavemadegreatcontributionstothesociety,theydeservesomespecialtreatment.3.Thesimilaritybetweenusmakesourrelationshipsolidwhilethedifferenceteachesushowtounderstandeachother.相关标签:职业jobs财富Wealth万能模板