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雅思大作文开头段巧思万事开头难，很多考生在刚开始动笔写雅思大作文时就陷入无话可说的状态，大多情况下可能会胡乱写作，甚至抄题，这对于雅思写作是非常大的忌讳，导致多如繁星的语法问题、字数被扣以及文思枯竭的印象。因此，快速写出合格甚至高分的开头段落刻不容缓。以下专家将为考生们总结一下大作文开头段写作的两大要素，供考生们参考。要素一：现象句雅思写作考题中会出现一个社会现象，考生的任务就是在自己文章的第一句话将之改写，重述这个社会现象。E.g.1Nowadaysweareproducingmoreandmorerubbish.Whydoyouthinkthisishappening?Whatcangovernmentsdotohelpreducetheamountofrubbishproduced?Itistruethatinalmosteverycountrytodayeachhouseholdandfamilyproducesalargeamountofwasteeveryweek.套句+同义词替换：moreandmore=alargeamountofE.g.2Somepeoplebelievethatchildrenshouldbeallowedtostayathomeandplayuntiltheyaresixorsevenyearsold.Othersbelievethatitisimportantforyoungchildrentogotoschoolassoonaspossible.Whatdoyouthinkaretheadvantagesofattendingschoolfromayoungage?Inmanyplacestoday,childrenstartprimaryschoolataroundtheageofsixorseven.主被动之间的转换：shouldbeallowedtostayathome=starttheirprimaryschool同义词的替换：untiltheyaresixorsevenyearsold=attheageofsixorsevenE.g.3Insomecountriesyoungpeopleareencouragedtoworkortravelforayearbetweenfinishinghighschoolandstartinguniversitystudies.Discusstheadvantagesanddisadvantagesforyoungpeopletodothis.Itisquitecommonthesedaysforyoungpeopleinmanycountriestohaveabreakfromstudyingaftergraduatingfromhighschool.主被动之间的转换，以及同义替换：finishhighschool=graduatefromhighschool所以，从上文中可以看出，一般来说，现象句会在最开始加上一个套句，并且加上地点和时间。雅思大作文开头段经典套句：1.Itistruethat......是真实的2.Itendtoagreethat…我同意…3.Itisquitecommon……是常见的4.Thereisnodoubtthat……是毫无疑问的5.Thereisnodenyingthat……是毫无疑问的6.Itisundeniablethat……是毫无疑问的地点：inmanyplaces;inmanycountries;inmanybigcities;almosteverycountry/city/place时间：inrecentdecades/years;today;thesedays;recently;nowadays要素二：点到问题雅思大作文考题分成两种：report&argumentative。对于report(题目一般会涉及到whydoyouthinkitisimportantto…;howdoyouthinkpeoplecantacklethisproblem.)E.g.4Inmanycountriesschoolshavesevereproblemswithstudentbehavior.Whatdoyouthinkarethecauseofthis?Whatsolutionscanyousuggest?PoorstudentbehaviorseemstobeincreasinglywidespreadproblemandIthinkthatmodernlifestylesareprobablyresponsibleforthis.点到了causes--直接把原因泛泛的带领出来，全文的第二段再开始慢慢细致的描述。E.g.5Happinessisconsideredtobeveryimportantinlife.Whyisitdifficulttodefine?Whatfactorsareimportantinachievinghappiness?Happinessisverydifficulttodefine,becauseitmeanssomanydifferentthingstodifferentpeople.Whilesomepeoplelinkhappinesstowealthandmaterialsuccess,othersthinkitliesinemotionsandlovingpersonalrelationships.Yetothersthinkthatspiritualpaths,ratherthaneitherthematerialworldorrelationshipswithpeople,aretheonlywaytotruehappiness.点到了whydifficult--通过引用两组不同人的观点，把造成这个现象的原因大致导出，与上一个例子有异曲同工之妙。对于argumentative(doyouagreeordisagree?;discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.;isitapositiveornegativedevelopment?)，这种题型基本上都问了作者的观点，所以在开头段落的描写过程中没什么特别大的区别。E.g.6Usingacomputereverydaycanhavemorenegativethanpositiveeffectsonyoungchildren.Doyouagreeordisagree?Itendtoagreethatyoungchildrencanbenegativelyaffectedbytoomuchtimespentonthecomputereveryday.改写题目+主动变被动：havemorenegativethanpositiveeffectson=canbenegativelyaffectedby直接表达自己的观点：ItendtoagreethatE.g.7Somepeoplefeelthatentertainers(e.g.filmstars,popmusiciansorsportsstars)arepaidtoomuchmoney.Doyouagreeordisagree?Whichothertypesofjobshouldbehighlypaid?Iagreewiththeviewthatstarsintheentertainmentbusinessareusuallyoverpaid.Thisistruewhetherweareconsideringstarsoffilm,sportorpopularmusic,anditoftenseemsthattheamountofmoneytheyareabletoearninasshorttimecannotpossiblybejustifiedbytheamountofworktheydo.现象+观点E.g.8Increasingthepriceofpetrolisthebestwaytosolvegrowingtrafficandpollutionproblems.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?Whatothermeasuresdoyouthinkmightbeeffective?Thereisnodoubtthattrafficandpollutionfromvehicleshavebecomehugeproblems,bothincitiesandonmotorwayseverywhere.Solvingtheseproblemsislikelytoneedmorethanasimpleriseinthepriceofpetrol.总之，如果要写出一篇较好的雅思作文，建议考生们在开头段落的描写方面绝对要达到快速和准确这两个要求，把时间控制在5分钟之内，把字数把握在30-40个单词之间。