作文my-school-life

CompositionComposition1.ReadtheTitle(审题）MySchoolLifeTeachersClassmatesSchoolActivitiesStudyTeacherskindHumoroushaveastrongsenseofresponsibilityknowledgeablehelp/encouragemetoimprovemystudyClassmatesfriendlydicussproblemstogetherhelp/encourage/supporteachotherclever&hardworkingActivitiesLibrary:readsportsmeetingsArtFestivalattendtheclubtakepartindifferentcompetitionsActivitiesfun&interestinguseful/meaningful:Toimproveourabilitiesrelaxourselvesenrichourknowledgehelp/encourage/supporteachotherdevelopourinterests2.Structure（结构）•开头•中间•结尾MySchoolLife（怎么样..（具体..(情感：期待，热爱，收获开头（怎么样..interesting/enjoyablecolourful&meaningfulbusybutpleasanthavealotoffun…….结尾MyschoollifeTeachersClassmatesActivities…..(情感：期待，热爱，收获Ibelieve/lhope+从句…………….How/What+感叹句1.spend…onsth/(in)doingsth2.Although…尽管3.so…that如此..以致。。4.inorderto/sothat为了5.How/What(感叹句）6.beproudof7.take(anactive)partin(积极）参加8.bekeenon=befondof=beinterested9.比较级quicker,moreexciting10.notonly…butalso11.when…从句8＋8＋4中考英语作文评分标准内容分8分。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚，完整.语言分8分。学生需用语规范，表达准确，无或少见语法错误，词汇拼写正确，句型使用恰当。首先是字数，少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。其次是语法和拼写错误，每个扣0.5，动词重要大错误扣1-2分，重复错误不计；标点错误每4个扣0.5.组织结构分4分，也就是我们常说的文采分。根据学生使用复杂句型/单词和谚语/俗语的情况来加分。1.结构三段式（开头，中间，结尾）层次StudyClassmatesActivitiesTeachers2.Everysentencemakessense.(Topic)每句话都有意义开头：Schoollifeisbusybutpleasant.busy?Pleasant?WehaveclassesfromMondaytoFriday,SaturdayandSudnayrest.Ourgradehasfiveclassroomsandweareintheforth.Wehaveeightlessonseveryday.Thefirstlessonstartsat7:40andweleaveschoolat4:15.④Icanseemanyflowersandmanybutterfliesflyaroundinthegardens.____________________ofmyschoolalsomakemyschoollife___________________.⑤Iamkeenonplayingcomputergames,solwearglasses.2.Everysentencemakessense.(Topic)每句话都有意义Thebeautifulscenerymuchmoreenjoyable3.Logical(逻辑性)；承上启下递进顺序Firstly,....Secondly,....Finally/Lastbutnoleast,.....“还有，而且/另外....Besides,What'smore,Morever,Furthermore,ontheonehand.....ontheotherhand一方面...另一方面....表转折but,however,while/nevertheless(然而),insteadof（而不是）；or(否则）1.Logical(逻辑性)；承上启下表并列：notonly...butalso....,aswellas,both....and....,neither....nor....,either....or...,表因果because+从句，becauseofsth=thanksto,since=nowthat既然，由于so+adj.+that...,such+n.+that....,表条件If+从句，unless(除非）表目的(为了)sothat+从句，inordertodosth1.Logical(逻辑性)；承上启下表时间when,while,as,not...until,before,after,assoonas(一...就...),表让步（al)though,evenif（即使），eventhough（虽然）结尾:Inbrief/Inaword,简言之/总而言之Tosumup/Toconclude,Inconclusion,3.Logical(逻辑性)；承上启下①study→activitiesBefore：Wehaveeightlessonsinaday.Itakepartinafootallactivityonceaweek.After:_______alotforustolearninschool.Somesubjectsareinterestingforme,whileothersareabit______.However,asstudents,weshouldlearnasmuchknowledgeaspossible___________givingupeasily.Asanoldsayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”_____________________we'rebusywithstudy,westill__________________schoolactivities.boringinsteadofAlthoughtakeanactivepartinThere‘s1.Logical(逻辑性)；承上启下②study→classmates(1)_______schoolworkisbusyandtiring,lneverfeel_______inthecompanyofmyclassmates.(2)Therearealotoflessonsforustolearninschoolandwehaveto______muchtime____study.Butlfeelquite______tobewithmyteachersandclassmates.They're_____kindandfriendly______they_______myschoollifemuch______andhappier.Althoughboredsothatmakeeasierspendonlucky2.句式变化，和作文内容灵活结合TeachersBefore:Wehavemanyteachers.Theyareveryfriendlyandkind.After:Myteachersareallverykindandfriendly.Theyteachme_________tobeagoodstudentinschool__________a__________personinsociety.Besides,theyare____knowledgable______①theymakemystudylessboring.②ourstudyislessboringthankstothem.③wecanalwayslearnalotfromthem.notonlybutalsoresponsiblesothat2.句式变化，和作文内容灵活结合TeachersTheyteachustheknowledgeandtellushowtoserveintheworld.After:They__________teachusknowledge__________tellushowtoservetheworld.notonlybutalso2.句式变化，和作文内容灵活结合Study...activities,competitions)Althoughbeinggoodatthemisveryhard.After:Althoughbeinggoodatthemisveryhard,wecan________ourabilitiesby_________thedifficulties.Wedareto________becauseweknow:NoPains,nogains!improvechallengeovercoming2.句式变化，和作文内容灵活结合ClassmatesBefore:Wehavemanyclassmates.Theyaremuchmoreinteresting.lalwaysplaywiththem.After:(1)Myclassmatesaresointerestingthat_____________________________________________________(2)Ialwayshaveagoodtimewithmyclassmatesbecausetheyarenotonly________butalsovery___________.lreallyenjoyeveryminutewhenlstudyandplaywiththem.friendlyencouraging2.句式变化，和作文内容灵活结合ClassmatesMyclassmatesareveryhelpfulandkind.After:Thetimelspendwithmyfriendsreallyrelaxesme.Wediscussproblemstogether.Ifsomeoneisintrouble,wewillencourageeachother.Somehowlthinkwe'remorethanfriends,morelikeafamily.(李芷媛）2.句式变化，和作文内容灵活结合④lunchManystudentshavedifferentkindsoffoodinthecanteen.Thelunchesarenotonlydelicousbutalsoveryhealthyforus.After:Allthestudentshavelunchinmyschoolanddifferentkindsoffood___________everyday.isprovided2.句式变化，和作文内容灵活结合⑤Activities(1)Myhobbyisplayingfootball,solattendafootballclub.(2)Studentsalwaysreadbooksinthelibrarytoenrichourknowledge.(3)Ilearnhowtocooperatewithotherswhenlworkwithmygroupmembers.3.语法错误1.Inourschool