定语从句在写作中的简单应用

授课教师：唐冬霞指导教师：叶欢定语从句在写作中的简单应用授课教师：叶欢人教新课标高二（下）选修7U4sharing复习定语从句•Whatisattibutiveclause?•在复合句中修饰名词或代词的叫定语从句。定语从句•Sheisthegirl,andthegirllivesnextdoor.•Sheisthegirl_________livesnextdoor.•注意事项：•1.从句的位置：先行词之后•2.翻译方法：“。。。的”先行词关系词定语从句：•1.需要很多水的植物theplantneedsmuchwater•2.你上周的来信theletteryoupostedlastweek•3.和我们一起玩的那些孩子们thechildrenplayedwithus•4.我昨天碰见的女孩thegirlImetyesterday.定语从句：•5.成就（achievements）卓著(wellknown)的科学家thescientistachievementsarewellknown•6.我们在农场工作的快乐时光thehappytimeweworkedonthefarm•7.我们在那照过一张相的湖thelakewetookapicture•8.他缺席的原因thereasonheisabsent定语从句•关系词•注意事项：•关系词的主要作用：连接主句和从句、替代先行词和在从句中充当成分.•非限制性从句中关系词既可修饰先行词也可修饰整个主句，不可用that引导,关系代词不能省略。关系词关系词thatwhichwhowhomwhoseaswhenwherewhyPracticeofAttributiveClause•1.Thefactorywhich/thatmakescomputersisfarawayfromhere.•2.Thesearebooks(which/that)youordered.•3.Everyonewho/thatknewhimlikedhim.•4.Thegirl(whom/who/that)theteacheroftenpraisesisourmonitor.•5.Ivisitedascientistwhosenameiswellknownallovertheworld.•6.Ihavethesamebagasyouhave.•7.I'llneverforgetthedaywhen/onwhichhedidtheexperiment.•8.Thatisthehousewhere/inwhichhelivedtenyearsago.•9.Thereasonwhy/forwhichshediditisamystery.•10.Hisfather,whoworksinBeijing,camebackyesterday.•11.Shanghai,whichisinEastChina,isdevelopingquickly.•12.Hefailedintheexam,whichmadehisparentsangry.•13.Aswehadexpected,hefailedintheexam.PracticeofAttributiveClause定语从句之请观察：怎么写定语从句呢？有没有步骤？步骤如何？•制造计算机的工厂离这儿很远。•=工厂制造计算机+工厂离这儿很远。•Thefactorymakescomputers.•Thefactoryisfarawayfromhere.•Thefactorywhichmakescomputersisfarawayfromhere.which请观察：怎么写定语从句呢？有没有步骤？步骤如何？•认识他的每个人都喜欢他。•=每个人认识他+每个人喜欢他。•Everyoneknewhim.•Everyonelikedhim.Everyonewhoknewhimlikedhim.whoConclusion:定语从句写作方法•1.两个简单句•2.找出先行词定从随其后•3.确定关系词改写句子•1.我有一个同学Jane,她的父亲是我以前的化学老师。•IhaveaclassmatecalledJane.Jane’sfatherismyformerchemistryteacher.IhaveaclassmatecalledJanefatherismyformerchemistryteacher.改写句子•2.Jane是外向且热心的女孩，Jane喜欢交朋友和帮助他人。•Janeisanoutgoingandwarm-heartedgirl.Janelikesmakingfriendsandhelpingothers.Janeisanoutgoingandwarm-hearedgirllikesmakingfriendsandhelpingothers.改写句子•3.Jane在此次口语竞赛中获得第一，这使得父母很高兴。•JanetakesthefirstplaceintheSpeechContest.Itmakesherparentshappy.JanetakesthefirstplaceintheSpeechContest,makesherparentshappy.改写句子•4.新年就要到了，到时Jane会和她妈妈一起去香港。TheNewYeariscoming.InthenewyearJanewillgotoHongkongtogetherwithhermother.TheNewYeariscoming,JanewillgotoHongkongtogetherwithhermother.改写句子•5.众所周知，香港是一个购物天堂，Jane打算在那里买她需要的东西。Hongkongisashoppingparadise.Weallknowit.InHongkongJaneintendstobuywhatsheneeds.weallknow,Hongkongisashoppingparadise,Janeintendstobuywhatsheneeds.ReadittogetherpleaseIhaveaclassmatecalledJanefatherismyformerchemistryteacher.Janeisanoutgoingandwarm-hearedgirllikesmakingfriendsandhelpingothers.JanetakesthefirstplaceintheSpeechContest,makesherparentshappy.TheNewYeariscoming,JanewillgotoHongkongtogetherwithhermother.weallknow,Hongkongisashoppingparadise,Janeintendstobuywhatsheneeds.翻译下列句子•1.我很高兴收到你下学期将来中国留学的来信。（nextterm，anexchangestudent）I'mdelightedtoreceiveyourletterwhichsaysyouwillcometoChinaasanexchangestudentnextterm.2.我希望我有这个荣幸来帮助在找寄宿家庭的你。（ahostfamily）IhopeIcanhavethishonortohelpyouwhoarelookingforahostfamily.翻译下列句子3.学了大约6年英语的我能用流利的英语与人交谈。（have/hasbeendoingsth）I,whohavebeenlearningEnghishforaboutsixyears,cancommunicatewithpeopleinfluentEnglish.4.正如你期待的，我们没有交流障碍。(havenotroubleindoingsth)Asyouhaveexpected,wehavenotroubleincommunicating.5.我是个外向且热心的人，爱交朋友和帮助他人。I'manoutgoingandwarm-heartedpersonwholikemakingfriendsandhelpingothers.6.我们有一个大房子,在这儿你将住得很舒服。Wehavealargehouse,whereyouwilllivecomfortably.7.我们的房子坐落于一个地方，步行10分钟可到校。(belocatedin)Ourhouseislocatedinaplace,whereyoucanwalktoschoolwithin10minutes.翻译下列句子翻译下列句子8.我的父母都是语文老师，这可非常有利于你学汉语。(sthbenefitsbalot)MyparentsarebothChineseteachers,whichcanbenefityoualotinlearningChinese.9.我的父母擅长于烹饪，这可非常有利于你品尝中国的美味佳肴。Myparentsaregoodatcooking,whichcanbenefityoualotintastingdeliciouschinesefood.小试牛刀•Canyoujustuseonesentencetotellthestory?•从前有座山，山上有座庙（temple），•庙里有俩和尚，一个大和尚（monk），一个小和尚，•小和尚要大和尚讲故事，•故事里说。。。•Longlongago,therewasamountain,onwhichstoodatemple,inwhichlivedtwomonks:anoldoneandayoungone,whoaskedtheotheronetotellhimastory,whichgoeslikethis..•写作训练亲爱的Tom：我收到了你上周的来信。谢谢你寄的照片。我常常想起我们一起度过的时光。你还记得那个湖吗?我们在那还照过一张相呢。和我们一起玩的那些孩子们还好吗?我昨晚做了梦，在梦里我们在上次去的那家电影院呢。另外,我买到了你要的那本英语书。周末有时间我将把书寄给你。李华DearTom,Ihavereceivedtheletter（which/that）youpostedlastweek.Thanksforthephotos(which/that)yousent.Ioftenthinkofthetime(which/that)wespenttogether.Doyoustillrememberthelakebywhich/wherewehadapicturetaken?Howarethechildrenwhoplayedwithus?Ihadadreaminwhich/wherewewerestayinginthecinemawhich/thatwewenttolasttime.Besides,Ihaveboughtthebook(which/that)youneed.OntheweekendwhenIamfree,Iwillpostittoyou.YoursLiHuaReview:定语从句写作方法•1.两个简单句•2.找出先行词定从随其后•3.确定关系词家庭作业•1.我的姐姐非常渴望志愿者活动，她去了遥远的山村参加志愿者活动。（bedyingforsth,aremotearea,participatein）•2.她为这次活动做好了准备。否则的话，她就在一家公司做文秘工作了。(makepreparationsfor,otherwise)•3.她妈妈担心她是否能适应独立生活在遥远的山村。(adjusttodoingsth)•4.前几天她告诉我们，在她看来，做志愿者工作不是一种负担，而是一件荣耀的事情。(theotherday,not...but...,aprivilegetodosth)•5.为了志愿者工作，她把她所拥有的一切都捐给了那些需要帮助的