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基础写作技巧指导Supposeyouareaguidetodescribeaplacetotourists,whatsubjects(主题）willyouintroduce?Possiblesubjects：1.介绍地理位置（Location）belocatedin…besituatedin…liein…坐落于……脚下/顶部…standsatthefootof/onthetopof…常用词语1.日本在中国的东方。2.这房子朝南。3.新教学坐落在学校的中央。翻译Japanis/liestotheeastofChina.Thehousefaces(to)thesouth.Thenewteachingbuildingliesinthecenteroftheschool.4.中国位于亚洲东部，是世界上最大的国家之一。China,located/lyingintheeastofAsia,isoneoflargestcountriesintheworld.2.介绍人口（Population）:…hasapopulationof…,（acity）withapopulationof…北京是中国的首都，是一个有1200多万人口的大城市。（用一句话）Beijing,thecapitalofChina,isalargecitywithapopulationofover12,000,000.3.介绍面积（Area）has/coversanareaof…squarekilometers（acity）withanareaof…squarekilometers城镇面积100多平方公里It’satownwithanareaofover100squarekilometers4.介绍历史（History）:…hasalonghistory(of…years)withalonghistory(of…years)历史悠久它是一个具有悠久历史的现代化城市。Itisamoderncitywithalonghistory.5.介绍交通（Transportation）takeabus,atrainoraplaneto…goto…bybus/train/plane坐汽车、火车、飞机到…交通便利…hasconvenienttransportation（acity）withconvenienttransportationbothonlandandwater经济迅速发展…economyhasbeendevelopingrapidly多次进入全国经济十强城市…hasbeenlistedamongthetoptenstrongestcitiesineconomyseveraltimes6、介绍经济（economy）7.名胜古迹有很多名胜古迹：placesofinterest/historicalspots承德是全国24个历史文化名城之一，也是44个风景名胜之一。ChengdeCityisnotonlyoneofthewell-known24historicalandculturalcitiesbutalsooneofthe44majorscenicspotsinChina.一些其它表达方式：……发生了很大变化greatchangeshavetakenplace…特色鲜明的地方文化distinctlocalculture海岸线总长……公里Itscoastlinehasatotallengthof…kilometers.基础写作---情景说明西山镇依山傍水。过去，这里的人们生活极其贫困。解放后人们的生活在各方面都发生了很大的变化。人口约10万面积约126平方公里地理概括坐落在粤北一山脚下，面临一条大河，新建有许多工厂商店、医院学校教育状况解放前只有一所学校且只有富家子弟可以上学，现在有10所学校，每个孩子都可以上学；生活状况人们工作之余，可以逛商店、看电影、跳舞、参加体育活动等写作要求：1.短文标题自拟2必须使用５个句子介绍全部所给的内容；3将５个句子组织成连贯的短文•titleifnecessary(标题）•tenseandvoice（时态和语态）•person（人称）•style（文章题材）•theimportantpoints（要点要全）1.Howtoanalyzethedirections(审题)?GreatChangesinXishanTown一般现在、一般过去、现在完成时第三人称应用文Listtheimportantpointsout:解放后人们的生活发生了很大的变化。西山镇的人口约10万；Sinceliberationgreatchangeshavetakenplaceinpeople’slifeXishantownhasapopulationofaboutThepopulationofXishantownisabout100,000.面积约126平方公里•Itcovers/hasanareaofabout126squarekilometers.•Thesizeofitisabout126squarekilometers.坐落在粤北一座山脚下，面临一条大河•XishantownislocatedatthefootofamountainofNorthGuangdongProvinceandfacesabigriver.•Xishantownislocated/standsatthefootofamountainofNorthGuangdongprovinceandinfrontofitflowsabigriver.新建有许多工厂商店、医院学校•Manyfactories,shops,hospitalsandschoolshavebeenbuilt/setup.解放前只有一所学校且只有富家子弟可以上学。现在有10所学校，每个孩子都可以上学；人们工作之余，可以逛商店、看电影、跳舞、参加体育活动等Nowthereare10schoolsandeverychildcangotoschool.Beforeliberationtherewasonlyoneschoolforchildrenfromwealthyfamilies.Afterworkpeoplegoshopping,seefilms,godancingandhavesports.用５个句子介绍全部所给的内容；用适当的连接词或在必要的地方改变句子结构将５个句子组织成连贯的短文•1.Xishantownisasmalltown,______islocatedatthefootofamountainofNorthGuangdongprovinceandinfrontofitflowsabigriver.whichLet’stry!2.Xishantownhasapopulationofabout100,000_______coversanareaofabout126squarekilometers.Xishantown,_________anareaofabout126squarekilometers,hasapopulationof….Xishantowncoversanareaofabout126squarekilometers______________________100,000.andcoveringwithapopulationof多种表达法灵活表达3.Beforeliberation,peopletherelivedahardlife_______sinceliberationgreatchangeshavetakenplace___________manyfactories,shops,hospitalsandschoolshavebeenbuilt.butandnow4.Beforeliberationtherewasonlyoneschoolforchildrenfromwealthyfamilies______nowthereare10schoolsandeverychildcangotoschool.5.Afterworkpeoplegoshopping,seefilms,godancingandhavesports.butLet’sshare!Onepossibleversion:1.Xishantownisasmalltown,whichislocatedatthefootofamountainofNorthGuangdongprovinceandinfrontofitflowsabigriver.Ithasapopulationofabout100,000andcoversanareaofabout126squarekilometers.Beforeliberation,peopletherelivedahardlifebutgreatchangeshavetakenplacesinceliberationandnowmanyfactories,shops,hospitalsandschoolshavebeenbuilt.Theschooleducationhasalsoimproved,forexample,beforeliberationtherewasonlyoneschoolforchildrenfromwealthyfamilies,butnowthereare10schoolsandeverychildcangotoschool.Afterworkpeoplegoshopping,seefilms,godancingandhavesports.南极洲世界上最寒冷的地方，常年有冰雪覆盖Antarctica,isthecoldestcontinentintheworld.Antarctica,iscoveredwithcoldthickiceanddeepsnowallyearround.1.使用定语从句或同位语优化句子表达whichiscoveredwithcoldthickiceanddeepsnowall（the)yearround,thecoldestcontinentintheworld,*语法，句法高分tips夏天几乎不下雨，但一下起来就很大。Ithardlyeverraininsummer__________________itrainsheavily.2.运用非谓语动词和with结构优化句子表达我的家乡位于中国广东，毗邻香港Myhometown,_________________islocatedinGuangdongProvinceofChina.butwheneveritdoes,neighboringHongKong,使用状语从句优化句子表达