industrial-goods-概要写作

概要写作Summarywriting高考新题型Summary五步法•1.阅读并理解大意,把握文章结构•2.找出主题句，要点主题句，关键词。•3.用自己的语言整合信息。•4.修饰文章使之更有连贯性。•5.检查语言，语法，和标点。•step2:Onceuponatime,industrialgoodsweremadetolastforever.Ifyouboughtacarorastove,itwasaonce-in-a-lifetimeinvestment.Youpaidgoodmoneyforit,andyoutookcareofit.•Nowadaysindustryhaspersuadedusthatproductscouldn’tlastalongtime.Itischeapertothrowthemawaythantorepairthem.Thishasleddirectlytothe“throw-awaysociety”whichisagreatwasteoftheearth’sresources.•Justthinkofthecarsthataretradeddaily,justbecausetheyareoutofstyle.Thinkoftheexpensivepackagingmaterialthatisthrownawayeverytimeanewobjectisbought.Andweshoppershavetopayforthatmaterial!•Ourindustrialsocietyhasturnedusintospoiledchildren.Thiswastefulnesshasgotusintothegreattroubleweareinnow.Whenwehavenoresourcesleft,thenwewillstarttotakecareofwhatwehave.Butwhycan’tweactbeforethishappens?Whycan’twetrytobuildasocietyinwhichthepreventionofwasteisavirtue?（例子----expensive）（例子-suchasusedcarsandtheexpensivepackagingmaterial）.（信息整合---后果+措施）•step3:Onceuponatime,industrialgoodsweremadetolastforever.Ifyouboughtacarorastove,itwasaonce-in-a-lifetimeinvestment.Youpaidgoodmoneyforit,andyoutookcareofit.•（例子-----expensive）.•____________________,industrialgoodsweremade____________________________.Andtheywereveryexpensive.Andtheycostalargesumofmoney.Sometimeago;Inthepast;tofunctionwellforalongtime;•step3:Nowadaysindustryhaspersuadedusthatproductscouldn’tlastalongtime.Itischeapertothrowthemawaythantorepairthem.Thishasleddirectlytothe“throw-awaysociety”whichisagreatwasteoftheearth’sresources.•Justthinkofthecarsthataretradeddaily,justbecausetheyareoutofstyle.Thinkoftheexpensivepackagingmaterialthatisthrownawayeverytimeanewobjectisbought.Andweshoppershavetopayforthatmaterial!•Productsnowadayscannotlastlong.____________•_____________________________________,•__________________________________________（例子-suchasusedcarsandtheexpensivepackagingmaterial）Peopleperfertothrowthemawayratherthanrepairthemwhichisawasteofearth’sresourcesWhichhasledtoagreatwasteofearth’sresourceshascaused/hasresultedinstep3:Ourindustrialsocietyhasturnedusintospoiledchildren.Thiswastefulnesshasgotusintothegreattroubleweareinnow.Whenwehavenoresourcesleft,thenwewillstarttotakecareofwhatwehave.Butwhycan’tweactbeforethishappens?Whycan’twetrytobuildasocietyinwhichthepreventionofwasteisavirtue?•1.后果+2.措施•1.Thiswastefulness_______________________now•becausewehavenoresourcesleft.•hasbroughtusgreattrouble•2.Weshouldtakeimmediateactiontostopwastingresources..（信息整合）hascausedgreattroubleforus•step4.连贯性•Inthepast,industrialgoodswere•madetofunctionwellforalongtimeandtheywereveryexpensive.Nowadays,productscannotlastlong.Peopleprefertothrowitawayratherthanrepairit,whichhasledtoagreatwasteofearth’sresources.ThisWastefulnesshascausedgreattroubleforusnowbecausewehavenoresourcesleft.Weshouldtakeimmediateactionstostopwastingresources.However,Therefore,•Step5.检查•Inthepast,industrialgoodsweremadetofunctionwellforalongtimeandtheywereveryexpensive.However,productsNowadayscannotlastlong.Peopleprefertothrowitawayratherthanrepairit,whichhasledtoagreatwasteofearth’sresources.ThisWastefulnesshascausedgreattroubleforusnowbecausewehavenoresourcesleft.Therefore,weshouldtakeimmediateactiontostopwastingresources.Decadesago,industrialgoodswereofhighqualityandcostalot.(要点1)Butthisisnotagoodideatomanufacturers.过渡句Theyadvisedustothrowthemawayratherthanrepairthem,whichhascausedagreatwasteoftheworld’sresources.(要点2)Thiswastefulnesshasbroughtusgreattrouble.Nowwearerunningoutofresources.Therefore,weshouldactimmediatelytosavewhatwehavebeforeit’stoolate.(要点3)69WModelessayWritingskillsSkill2:Rewritesentences.1.Onceuponatime,industrialgoodsweremadetolastforever.•Sometimeago,manufacturersmadeindustrialgoodslastforever.改变语态（主动——被动）2.Thiswastefulnesshasgotusintogreattrouble.•Wehavegotintogreattroubleduetothiswastefulness.改变主语（人——物）3.Itischeapertothrowthemawaythantorepairthem.•Tothrowthemawayischeaperthantorepairthem.•Itismoreexpensivetorepairthemthantothrowthemaway.•Peoplewouldratherthrowthemawaythanrepairthemasitischeapertodoso.改变主语（形式主语）正话反说、反话正说Step1：Step2:Step3:Step4:Understandthewholepassageandgraspthekeypoints.(Reorganizeinformation.)Organizethekeypointslogically.Howtowriteagoodsummary?ConclusionBegintowrite.•Paraphrasesomewordsorphrases.•Rewritesentences.•Usetheminimumofwords.Readandcheck.PolishyourwritingOnceuponatime,industrialgoodsweremadetolastforeverandtheywereveryexpensive.Nowadays,however,industrialproductscan’tlastlonganditischeapertothrowthemawaythantorepairit.Thishasledtoagreatwasteoftheearth’sresources.Thiswastefulnesshasgotusintothegreattroublewearein,soweshouldtrytoactimmediatelyandbuildasocietyinwhichthepreventionofwasteisavirtue.(78W)Decadesago,industrialgoodsweremadedurablepeoplewouldratherthrowthemawaythanrepairit,whichhasresultedinbroughtusgreattroubleeveryonestopswastingresources(64W)•1.wandering•2.account•3.seek•4.scene•5.adventure•6.permits•7.appearance•8.stared•9.spotted•10.contrary•1.seekout•2.accountfor•3.wasbroughtup•4.stareat