Errors-Analysis

几种常见的句子错误Incompletesentences片语Studythefollowingsentencesandthentrytocorrectthemistakesinthem1.Behindthehouse.Therelivesabigbadwolf.2.Ihavetofinishthispaperthisweek.Andprepareforthetestaswell.3.MyparentsalwaysafraidthatImaygetlost.4.Iwillcallyoutonight.IfIcanfinishmyworkintime.FourkindsofmistakesPhrasefragmentOverbythesideofthestreet.Thereisastoresellingdelicioussweets.I’llmeetyouinthelibrary.Atfourintheafternoon.Analysis:Inexperiencedwritersmaywriteaphraseasifitwereasentence,becausetheyborrowthephrasedirectlyfromthespokenlanguage.FragmentwithoutasubjectShestoodbythewindow.Andlookedatthestreetbelow.Thekidspaintedthemselvesgreen.Andranthroughthestreettofrightenthepassers-by.SometimeswritersproduceafragmentwithoutasubjectbecausetheydivideasentencewithtwoormoreverbsintotwoormoresentencesFragmentwithoutanauxiliaryverbYoueverseenherlately?Wepreparingforthecomingexam.Manywritersoftenforgettoputinalinkingverborauxiliaryverb,Thusproducingfragmentswithoutverbs.SubordinateclausefragmentIhatewriting.BecauseIcannevergetmyteacher’spraise.Becauseit’srainingcatsanddogs.Iwon’tlendyoumybike.Youcan’tringherupnow.Forit’salreadymidnight.Asubordinateclauseisasentenceusedaspartofanothersentence,butmanystudentstreatitasanindividualsentence.SentencesofthisKindareacceptableininformalcontext,butinformalwriting,theyareConsideredungrammatical.ClassroomactivitiesCorrectanyincompletesentenceyoucanfindinthefollowingparagraphTheauthorlearnedmanythings.Duringhiscollegeyears.Helearnedtoreadandwritewell.Healsolearnedtobeindependent.Andtorelyuponhisownjudgment.Heisagoodrolemodelforhighschoolstudents.Especiallystudentswithlittlemoneybutlotsofambition.Successincollegetakesagreatdealofhardwork.Butcanbeachievedbymanypeople.Readthefollowingparagraphandimprovetheincompletesentences.Second,advertisementscanimprovethereputationofthecompany.Moreandmorecompanieshaveknownthatadvertisementscanhelpthem.Sotheymakeuseofadvertisements.Ifeveryoneknowstheirproducts.Theproductswillbeveryfamous.Morepeoplewillbuythem.Thecompanycangetmoremoney.Iftheproductsarereallygood.Manypeoplewillusethem.Thenthiscompanywillbecomefamous.Soadvertisementscanhelpcompanygetbetterreputation.Absolute（独立主格结构）GettingtoknowabsoluteLookatthefollowingtwopairsofsentencesandtrytotellthedifferencebetweenthema.Hurtinthegame,Iwillnotbeabletoyourpartytonight.Mybestfriendhurtinthegame,Iwillnotbeabletogotoyourpartytonight.b.Mygrandmawassittinginherrocker,singinghappilyinthespringfragranceMygrandmawassittinginherrocker,herradiosinginghappilyinthespringfragrance.Doyouthinktheitalicizedpartsarethesameasordifferentfromtheabsoluteconstructionsintheabovesentences?a.Themanstoodinthestreetcorner,hishandsputinhispockets.b.Themanstoodinthestreetcorner,handsputinhispockets.c.Themanstoodinthestreetcorner,handsinpockets.Whatisabsolutestructure?AnabsolutestructureisaparticiplephrasewhoselogicalsubjectIsdifferentfromthesentencesubject.UsingabsolutewithpurposeAddingdescriptivedetailsLookatthefollowingsentences.Whateffectdoyouthinktheabsolutescanbringabout?a.Themanagersatquietlyinhisoffice,hiseyesclosed.b.Themanagersatquietlyinhisoffice,acigaretteburninginhishand.a.Samwalkedslowlyofftheplayground,hisfacestreakwithtears.b.Samwalkedslowlyofftheplayground,hisleftlegbleeding.Absoluteadddetails,andmakesentencesmuchmorevivid.TrytoCombinesentenceaandb,andsentencecandd,andseehowthenewSentencesdescribethemanagerorSam.SuggestedanswersThemanagersatquietlyinhisoffice,hiseyesclosed,acigaretteburninginhishand.Samwalkedslowlyofftheplayground,hisfacestreakedwithtears,hislegsbleeding.What’smore,participlesandabsolutes,althoughsomewhatdifferent,canbeUsedtogethertocreatevividdescriptions.Thegirlsatnervouslyinheroffice,eyesclosed,waitingforthetelephonetoring.Themiddle-agedmanstoodinthestreetcorner,handsputinhispockets,eyeingeverypasser-by.Indicatingcause-effectrelationshipLookatthefollowingsentencesa.Hisnotebooksstolen,Larryiscertaintofailinthecomingexam.b.Walletlost,Ihadtogohomeonfoot.c.Hishouseworkdone,thenightmoviehavingended,Mr.Strongcoulddonothingbutgotobed.ClassroomActivitiesExpandthefollowingsentenceswithabsolutes.Theboyleanedagainstthetree,双手插在兜里面。Heglaredathisboss,嘴闭着，双手交错。Theintervieweeenteredtheoffice,目光紧盯脚尖。Therabbitstaredattheapproachingwolf,四腿紧抓地面，吓得寸步难移。Thegirlwasenjoyingherfavoritesong,双目紧闭，头晃来晃去。Supplythereasonsforthefollowingsentencesusingabsolutes.1.连续两辆自行车被盗，Iwillnevercometothisplaceagain.2.脸上又起了几个痘痘，shedoesn’twanttomeetherboyfriendtoday.3.船底被炸弹炸开了，theshipsankslowlyintothesea.4.海外广告极其成功，theschoolhasattractedmanyforeignstudents.Comma-splitSentencesLookatthefollowingsentencesandanswerthequestionsHeheardlaughterinsidethehouse,nooneansweredthebell.Theboywasscolded,hebangedthedoorandranout.Nobodywillbuythesecomputerbooks,theyaretooexpensive.Questions:1.Howmanyindependentideasarethereineachsentence?Whatisusedtoconnecttheideas?2.Istherelationshipbetweentheseideascleartoyou?Ifnot,howCanyouclarifyit?3.Lookattherevisedones:Heheardlaughterinsidethehouse,butnooneansweredthebell.Becausehewasscolded,theboybangedthedoorandranout