新东方大学英语四级强化班――书面表达

新东方大学英语四级强化班——书面表达作文四级作文评分方法五级评分制：2、5、8、11、14分注意字数适中用不同单词表达不同意思如何打动评卷人☯文章的整体脉络清晰☯段落的衔接畅顺☯用词造句经典☯书写美观英文写作的基本常识清晰的结构1)观点鲜明的开头2)紧扣主题的结尾3)由主题句引导的衔接自然的中间段落统一的中心自然的衔接：逻辑关系显性化1)重复词：概括；直接；齐头2)序数词3)关联词：递进；转折；因果平时如何提高写作阅读四级阅读理解文章等等背诵18篇优秀四级作文看电影——阿甘正传、狮子王、老友记30遍图表类特点：有图——趋势透，字数少段落安排：第一段：趋势（变化）第二段：分析变化的原因第三段：自己的看法和感想正文：第一段：批注[LU1]:写作的重中重如图所示a)Aswecanseefromthechart/graph/table/diagram,……b)The…displaythatstandingthe……carefully,wecansee.c)Thechart/graphshows/displaysthat……d)Ascanbeshowninthetable……,e)Itisclear/apparentfromthechart/tablethat2.比例a)Bhasthelargestpercentage/proportionof…….b)……account(s)for/take(s)up10%.c)Onthetopofthelistis……,whichaccountsfor60%.d)Atthebottomis……,whichaccountsfor10%.e)Aisranked/ratedfirst,followedbyBat30%andCat25%.3.增长与下降a)Thenumberof……increased/rosesuddenly/rapidly/dramatically（戏剧地）/substantially（实质的）/considerably/sharply/steeply（险峻地）from1990to2000.b)Therewasasudden/rapid/dramatic/substantial/considerable/sharp/steepincrease/riseinthenumberof……from1990to2000.c)Thenumberof……increased/rosesteadily（稳定地）/gradually（逐渐地）/slowly/slightlyfrom1990to2000.d)Therewasasteady/gradual/slow/slightincrease/riseinthenumberof……from1990to2000.e)下降：decrease/fall/drop；adecrease/drop/reduction/declineinthenumberof……4.达到某点a)Thesituation/figuresreached/hitapeak/highat60%in…….Thesituation/figurespeakedat60%in…….b)Thesituation/figuresbottomedoutat20%in…….Thesituation/figureshitatroughat20%in…….5.倍数a)Aistwice/three/fourtimeswhatitwasin1990.Aistwice/three/fourtimestheamountin1990.Aistwice/three/fourtimesasmuch/manyas……in1990.b)Thefigurewasroughlydoubled/tripled/quintupledbetween1990and2000.c).⎪⎬percent15bypercent15tototaltheofpercent10to5fromupshotjumpedroseincreasedit2002,In⎪⎭⎫⎪⎩⎪⎨⎧⎪⎪⎭⎪⎪⎬⎫⎪⎪⎩⎪⎪⎨⎧Byd).percent15bypercent15topercent5to10fromfelldroppeddecreasedit1990,withcomparison⎪⎭⎪⎬⎫⎪⎩⎪⎨⎧⎪⎭⎪⎬⎫⎪⎩⎪⎨⎧e)year.lastofthatagainstaswithcomparedaswithcomparedtripleddoubledthanmorealmostnearbyhaspopulationnumberpercentagefigure⎪⎭⎪⎬⎫⎪⎩⎪⎨⎧⎭⎬⎫⎩⎨⎧⎪⎭⎪⎬⎫⎪⎩⎪⎨⎧⎪⎪⎭⎪⎪⎬⎫⎪⎪⎩⎪⎪⎨⎧ThetimeshalfaandtwoalmostdroppedIt⎫⎧⎫⎧⎫⎧twicenumberThe⎪⎫⎪⎧⎫⎧.yearsfewpasttheyears5recenttheinpercentage50plateauaofsomethingapproachedreachedhasIt⎪⎬⎫⎪⎨⎧⎪⎬⎫⎪⎨⎧⎪⎬⎫⎪⎨⎧⎪⎪⎪⎬⎫⎪⎬⎫inresulttocontributecleadSuchWhatfactorsSeveral⎩⎨⎧坏：终止好：发扬⎪⎭⎪⎬⎫mindinsayingfollowingthebearshouldWepersongreatOnesayingtheAsf).withcompared,sixtimestwiceaboutthanmoredecreasedincreasedhas……⎪⎭⎪⎬⎪⎩⎪⎨⎪⎭⎪⎬⎪⎩⎪⎨⎪⎭⎪⎬⎪⎩⎪⎨g)1990.ofthatasmuchashalftimes4ispercentage⎪⎭⎬⎪⎩⎨⎭⎬⎩⎨h)1990percentage50ofaverageanrisento⎪⎭⎪⎩⎪⎭⎪⎩⎪⎭⎪⎩第二段：As…thenumberof…动词+副词during…As…earlyas数字，thenumberwas……,then……itbecause⎪⎪⎪⎭⎪⎭foreresponsiblbecausechanges……列举1.First……,second……,last（inaddition）2.Foronething,……,foranotherthing,……,what’smore……Ononehand,……,ontheotherhand,moreover,……Thereforeallthesereasons……thechanges.第三段：总结：Hencefromthe……喊口号：①Itishightimethat+一般过去时②Onlythrough……canwe……只有……我们才能……remarkgoes③+名人名言操辞：上升：rise,increase,goup,boon,rocket下降：decrease,reduce,comedown,onthedecline快速：rapidly,dramatically,sharply（锐）慢：slowly,gradually二选一类特点：给出两个观点段落安排：第一段：1)引出将要评论的事物或者观点；2)提出第一种观点；3)本观点支持性分论点。第二段：1)承上启下；2)提出第二种观点；3)本观点支持性分论点。第三段：我的观点正文：第一段：1)引言：i.Inrecentyears,withfasteconomicgrowth,……haveappearedinmanyfamiliesinChina.近年来，伴随着经济的快速发展，……在中国很多的家庭中出现了。人们对……有着不同的观点。⎪⎩⎪⎨⎧…….onnswerspectives/aviews/persdifferenthave/offerwillpeopleDifferent.......whethertoasquestiononthedividedarePeoplewidely.varies......thetowardsattitudesPeople'⎪⎪⎩⎪⎪⎨⎧⎪⎩⎪⎨⎧sharply.differscontrary.theofquiteisdelygreatly/wivariesittowardattitudepublicperson.persontofromvaryofopinionsspeople'⎪⎪⎪⎬⎪⎪⎪⎪⎪⎩⎪⎪⎪⎪⎪⎨⎧………………⎪⎭⎪⎬⎫⎪⎩⎪⎨⎧非常有兴趣热情巨大的需求有越来越对越来越多的关注普遍的信条ininterestdeep/keen//sth.sb.sb.amongsth.forhusiasmdemand/enteatgrowing/grof/thatawarenessneralgrowing/geof/thatnrecognitiowide-tiongrowing/nageneral/degrowingaisthereRecentlyCurrentlyNowadaysii.Withtheincreaseinthegeneralstandardofliving,someordinaryChinesefamiliesbegintoafforda…….Yet,伴随着人们生活水平的提高，一些中国家庭开始能够买……。但是，人们对……的观点是不同的。……⎪⎫…………普遍的信条越来越大的趋势in/thatbeliefseated-epto/in/thattendencyiii.⎪⎪⎪⎪⎭iv.Eversinceearlythiscentury,……hasbecomeanessential（本质的）partofourmodernlife.……isthedrivingforcebehindtheswift（迅速的）progressofindustry,agriculture,scienceandtechnology.Nobodycandenythatthedevelopmentofourcivilizationdependson…….自从本世纪初夜，……已经成为现代生活的一个重要部分。……是工业、农业和科技飞速发展的动力。没有人能够否认人类文明的发展依赖于……。v.Theissueof……hasbeenwidelyargued/debated（争论）currently.关于是否……的问题，如今公众已经展开了广泛的讨论。vi.……hasbecomeahot/populartopicamongpeoplerecently.Opinionsvaryfrompersontoperson.……已经成为人们谈论的热门话题，不同的人对此有不同的看法。vii.Thereisapublic/general/muchdebate/discussion/controversy（论战）today/nowadaysabout/on/upon/over/astotheproblem/issueof…….关于……的问题，公众已经展开了讨论。viii.Thereisanargument/muchdisagreement/noconsensusofopinionsamongpeopleconcerning/over/asto/on…….关于……，人们的看法不尽相同。2)Thereisnoconsensusofopinionamongpeopleastotheviewof……i.Somepeoplebelieve/argue/say/maintain/advocate