体裁突破(四)夹叙夹议文2A(2017·苏北四市摸底考试)IwrotemyfirstnovelwhenIwas22.Itwasa1.Ididn’tknowhowtoproperlyformatdialogueor2aplot.Thosewereall3Iplannedtoworkoutlater.Igavethebooktomyfathertoread,andwithinadayheleftmeavoicemailsayingthatitwas4andthatIwasgoingtosellitfor300,000.5,andratherquickly,thebookwas6byeverypublisherinNewYork.IftherewerealiteraryprizeforMostRejections,Iwouldhavewonit.Iwas7,ofcourse,butIknewbetterthanto8—writingwasn’taneasyjob,andifthisbookwasn’tmy9in,maybethenextonewouldbe.Igotbacktowork.Butthisscenario(剧情)happenedagain:Iwrotebooks...andthentheywouldn’t10.Still,myfather’sfaithinmeneverwavered(摇摆),even11Iworkedahostofotherjobs.Someofthejobs,likebeingabookseller,weregreatand12tomywritinglife.Some,likesellingoverpricedjeansto12-year-olds,wereonlygoodinsofarastheywerematerialforfuture13.Andtheywere—becauseitfinally14.Isoldabook!Iwasgoingtomakeitbig!IcompletelyagreewithmotivationalspeakerandauthorJohnMaxwell’swords:“Successfulandunsuccessfulpeopledonot15greatlyintheirabilitiesbutintheir16toreachtheirpotential.”Life’snot17.Itneverwas,itisn’tnow,itwon’teverbe.Butdonotfallintotheentitlementtrapoffeelingyouarea18,youarenot.Getoveritand19withit.Andyes,mostthingsaremore20whenyoubreakasweattogetthem.语篇解读本文是一篇夹叙夹议文。作者通过叙述自己写书、售书的过程,体会到任何事情的成功都不是那么容易的,它需要人们的付出,因为只要付出了,就会得到回报。1.A.messB.mixC.confusionD.puzzle答案A解析根据后文“Ididn’tknowhowtoproperlyformatdialogueoraplot.”可知此处指那时我的写作简直是一团糟,故选A。2.A.followB.structureC.discoverD.hatch答案B解析我不知道如何适当地组织语言和构建(structure)情节,故选B。3.A.factsB.messagesC.meaningsD.details答案D解析这些是我后来计划解决的所有细节(detail),故选D。4.A.practicalB.complexC.wonderfulD.dissatisfactory答案C解析我把这本书给我父亲读,当天他留言说我这本书很好,故选C。5.A.ButB.InsteadC.ThereforeD.Regardless答案B解析根据后文“thebookwasbyeverypublisherinNewYork.IftherewerealiteraryprizeforMostRejections,Iwouldhavewonit.”可知,此处与前面父亲的认同形成对比,故选B。6.A.rejectedB.acceptedC.abusedD.commented答案A解析相反,这本书很快就被纽约的所有出版商拒绝(reject)了,故选A。7.A.depressedB.surprisedC.frightenedD.embarrassed答案A解析根据前文“IftherewerealiteraryprizeforMostRejections,Iwouldhavewonit.”可知,作者感到很沮丧,故选A。8.A.continueB.fightC.withdrawD.write答案C解析但是我知道比起退出这样更好,故选C。9.A.cardB.ticketC.penD.bill答案B解析如果这本书不是我的入门票的话,那么下一本将会是的,故选B。10.A.writeB.buyC.workD.sell答案D解析根据前文“Butthisscenario(剧情)happenedagain”说明作者的另外一本书又没有卖出去,故选D。11.A.ifB.becauseC.asD.since答案C解析甚至当我从事许多其他的工作时,父亲对我的信心也从未动摇过,故选C。12.A.turnedB.openedC.ledD.contributed答案D解析一些其他的工作,比如当一名售书员也是很好的,那对我的写作生涯也会有促进作用,故选D。13.A.livesB.decisionsC.storiesD.jobs答案C解析因为他们是未来故事的素材,故选C。14.A.happenedB.failedC.madeD.passed答案A解析事情终于发生了,我卖出了一本书,故选A。15.A.varyB.changeC.matchD.diversify答案A解析成功的人和不成功的人的区别不在于他们的能力而在于他们挖掘潜能的欲望,故选A。16.A.requestB.demandC.hopeD.desire答案D解析参考上题解析。故选D。17.A.sadB.happyC.hardD.easy答案D解析生活并不容易。与后文“Itneverwas,itisn’tnow,itwon’teverbe.”形成排比,故选D。18.A.witnessB.victimC.ownerD.winner答案B解析但是不要陷入自认为是受害者的陷阱中,你并不是,故选B。19.A.getroundB.getonC.getaboutD.getby答案B解析克服它并继续做下去,故选B。20.A.challengingB.demandingC.rewardingD.paying答案C解析只要付出就会有收获,故选C。B(2017·浙江六校适应性考试)Ialwaysbelievedtherewereonlytwooptionsinmylife.Icouldbe21,orIcouldsomehowbeinvisible.Untilthesixthgrade,ateacherhadus22aquestionnairewith“gettoknowyou”questions.Ithoughtshewouldbereadingthem23,soIfeltsafetosharemyperspectives.Theteacher24thesheets,shuffled(打乱次序)them,andredistributedthemtous.We’dreadthestudent’snameandthenourthreefavorite25.Mysheetendedup26thehandsofakidwhowasoneofthecoolestandmeanest.Thefirstquestionwas“What’syourfavoritemovie?”MyanswerwasBeautyandtheBeast,27theotherkidswroteScreamandUniversalSoldier.Alaugh28fromtheroom,andmycheeksburned.Thenextwas“Wherewouldyouliketotravel?”Theotherssaid“Australia”,“Japan”.Iwrote“29abooktakesme”.The30waslouderthistime.Thefinalquestionwas“Whatdoyoudoontheweekends?”Whenhereadmyanswer,“PerformwithClownsforChrist”,manyofthem31atmeinadisgustingmanner.Iwasso32thatIwantedtofindaholetohidemyselfin.Butthen,something33happened.A34fromthebackoftheroomsaid,“Guys,cutitout.”It35toMichelleSiever,whowaspopularandcool.Shesaidtotheteacher,“Whyareyoulettingthishappen?Whatisthe36ifwe’rejustmakingfunofeachother?”Idon’tremembertheteacherorthekids’names,butIrememberMichelleSiever.Iremember37Ifeltwhenshespokeupformebecausesheshowedmethatdayweactuallyhavethree38.Youcanbecool,andyoumightberememberedforalittlewhile.Youcanbeinvisible,andyouwon’tberemembered39.Butifyou40upforsomebodywhentheyneedyoumost,thenyouwillberememberedastheirherofortherestoflife.语篇解读本文是一篇夹叙夹议文。课堂上“我”的问卷被公开宣读,引起了同学们的哄堂大笑,也令“我”感到无地自容,此时MichelleSiever同学勇敢地站出来,声援了“我”,让“我”感激不已。21.A.greatB.coolC.braveD.honest答案B解析根据最后一段中的“Youcanbecool...Youcanbeinvisible...”可知,“我”认为人生有两种选择,要么耍酷,要么隐身,此处与下文中的“cool”相呼应。故选B。22.A.filloutB.setdownC.putdownD.giveout答案A解析根据“questionnaire”可知,老师让“我们”填写问卷。fillout表示“填写”,符合语境。故选A。23.A.publiclyB.privatelyC.loudlyD.quietly答案B解析根据下文“...soIfeltsafetosharemyperspectives.”可知,“我”原本以为老师会自己单独看问卷。privately意为“私密地,单独地”,符合语境。故选B。24.A.correctedB.receivedC.collectedD.handed答案C解析根据下文中的“shuffled(打乱次序)them,andredistributedthemtous”可知,老师先把问卷都收上来,之后又打乱次序发回给“我们”。collect意为“收集”,符合语境。故选C。25.A.questionsB.ideasC.choicesD.answers答案D解析根据常识可知,问卷中一定是让“我们”写出“我们”的答案,所以此处指念出名