初二下unit2作文解析

这个春天，与你温暖相伴WARMWITHYOUTHISSPRINGTcompositionPPTbyTracy作文中的错误一，三单问题错误表达：Helike/love/help/volunteer.....正确表达：Helikes/loves/helps/volunteers.....二n单复数错误表达：Helovesanimal.Hevolunteerstoteachkidhowtoplaysoccer.正确表达：Helovesanimals.Hevolunteerstoteachkidshowtoplaysoccer.三时态一致性错误表达：Theyarefeelinghappybecausetheyhelpedpeople.Hevolunteershistimetoworkinahospitalandhegotsuchastongfeelingofsatisfaction.正确表达:Theyfeelhappybecausetheycanhelppeople.Hevolunteershistimetoworkinahospitalandhegetssuchastongfeelingofsatisfaction.四be动词与动词原形连用的情况错误表达：1）Theyareverylikethisschool.2)Heisplantoworkinoldpeeple'shome.3)Theyarespendsomehourseveryweek.4)Theyarewanttobeavolunteer.正确表达：1）Theylikethisschoolvery(注意：不是every）much.2)Heplanstoworkinoldpeeple'shome.3)Theyspendsomehourseveryweek.4)Theywanttobeavolunteer.五词语误用1favorite错误表达：Hefavoriteslikeanimals.正确表达：Helikesanimalsbest.2volunteer错误表达：Hedecidedtovolunteerafter-schoolreadingprogram.正确表达：Hedecidedtovolunteerinanafter-schoolreadingprogram.3kindness错误表达：Danielisakindnesspeople.Peterisverykindness.正确表达：Danielisakindpeople.Peterisverykind.六其他错误表达1Theyworkasavolunteer.正确表达：Theyworkasvolunteers.2Theoldsarelonely.正确表达：Theoldpeoplearelonely.思路：总分总：1No.1MiddleSchoolisproudofthreestudents.TheyarePeter,DanielandJohn.Theygiveupseveralhourseachweektohelpeothers.21)Peter:lovesanimalsandwantstobeananimaldoctorvolunteersatananimalhospitalgetssuchastrongfeelingofsatisfaction2)Danel:abookloverwantstohelpkidslearntoread,asaresult,volunteersatanafter-schoolreadingprogram.3)John:bestrongintalkingwitholdpeople.volunteeratoldpeople'shome.weshoudcareforoldpeople.theyarelonely3Thethreeboysfeelveryhappy,becausetheycandowhattheylovetodoandhelpothersatthesametime.•No.1MiddleSchoolisproudofthreestudents.TheyarePeter,DanielandJohn.Theygiveupseveralhourseachweektohelpeothers.•Peterlovesanimalsandwantstobeananimaldoctor.Sohevolunteersatananimalhospital.Hecangetsuchastrongfeelingofsatisfactionwhenheseestheanimalsgetbetter.•Danielisabooklover.Hecanreadbyhimselfattheageoffour.Asaresult,hevolunteersatanafter-schoolreadingprogram.Hehelpskidslearntoread.•Johnisstrongintalkingwitholdpeople.Sohevolunteersatoldpeople'shome.Hereadsnewspaperstothemandtalkswiththem.Hethinksweshouldcarefortheoldbecuasetheyarelonely.Wearegoingtobeoldoneday.•Thethreeboysfeelveryhappy,becausetheycandowhattheylovetodoandhelpothersatthesametime.