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基础写作的评分标准内容5分语言7分连贯性2分书写1分句子内容的完整性(Completeness)句子结构的正确性(correctness)句子结构的复杂性(Variety)句子内容的连贯性(Coherence)•处理词语写出句子连接句子，变身复句。•1.某事值得做sthisworthdoing•值得(花费金钱，时间)worthwhile•2.日常生活dailylife•3.饥饿starvation•4.卫星satellite•通讯传播communication•5.天气预报weatherforecast•6.能源短缺energyshortages•写作内容：•最近，你班同学就“太空探索是否值得”这一话题展开了一场讨论.请你根据下表提供的信息，用英语写一篇短文介绍讨论的情况。•30%的同学反对：1.离我们及我们的日常生活太远2.浪费金钱，这些金钱本可以用来解决饥饿，污染等问题。•70%的同学赞成：1.已使用卫星进行通讯传播，天气预报等；2.有望解决地球能源短缺问题.1.Thereare30%ofthestudentsthinkthatspaceisworthexploring.30%ofthestudentsthinkthatspaceisworthexploring.错误诊断：therebe句型使用错误.中国式英语2.70%studentsthinkthatisworthwhiletoexplorespace.70%ofthestudentsthinkitisworthwhiletoexplorespace.错误诊断：百分比和名词之间要用of,of之后的名词要有thethat是从句标记，要有主语3.Andhad30%thestudentsareagreetheideaofexplorespace.30%ofthestudentsagreewiththeideaofexploringspace.错误诊断：have的用法错误百分数后用of连接名词sbagreewithsb/sb’sideaof是介词，后用名词或者动名词写说明文或介绍性的文章时,时态要用现在时,注意句子结构,尤其是主句,从句结构要清晰,复杂,主句,状语部分要用恰当,不要逐句翻译.找出错误，修改标注出你认为他/她写得好的句子•Thediscussionofseekingthespace•Today,ourclasshadadiscussion,whichtalkaboutiftheseekingofthespacehaveaworthwhile.•Thosewhoareinfavorofseekingthespaceclaimthatithasalotofadvantages.•Forexample,thesatellitewasusedtocommunicationandthewhetherforecast,alsotheseekingcouldmaketheearthfullofenergy.•Butsomestudentswhodisagreedwithitsaid:“Maybetheseekingisright,butit’stoofartoknowitinourdailylife,themoneyusedtoseekingthespaceshouldbeusedsthedealwiththestarvationandthepollutions.•onmyviews,Ithinktheseekingofthespaceisworthwhiletodoit.•Thediscussionofseekingthespace•Isspaceexplorationworthwhile?•Isspaceworthexploring?•Today,ourclasshadadiscussion,whichtalkaboutiftheseekingofthespacehaveaworthwhile.•discusssthdiscussionon/aboutsth•itisworthwhiletodosth•Recently,wehavehadadiscussiononwhetheritisworthwhiletoexplorespace.Whetherthespaceexplorationworthwhile•Thosewhoareinfavorofseekingthespaceclaimthatithasalotofadvantages.•beinfavorof赞成claim声称，宣称•Thosewhoareinfavorof(赞成)exploringspaceclaimthatithasalotofadvantages.•70%ofthestudentswhoareinfavorofexploringspaceclaimthatithasalotofadvantages.•Forexample,thesatellitewasusedtocommunicationandthewhetherforecast,alsotheseekingcouldmaketheearthfullofenergy.•1.拼写错误whether2.时态错误•Forexample,satelliteshavebeenusedforcommunicationandweatherforecast,andtheexplorationcanenableustosolvetheproblemofenergyshortagesontheearthifwefindnewresourcesonotherplanets.•Butsomestudentswhodisagreedwithitsaid:“Maybetheseekingisright,butit’stoofartoknowitinourdailylife,themoneyusedtoseekingthespaceshouldbeusedsthedealwiththestarvationandthepollutions.•But30%ofthestudentswhodisagreewithitfeelthatspaceistoofarfromourdailylifeandthemoneyspentonspaceexplorationcanhavebeenusedtodealwithproblemssuchasstarvationandpollution.•Onmyviews,Ithinktheseekingofthespaceisworthwhiletodoit.•Inmyview,spaceisworthexploring.•Inmyopinion,spaceisworthexploring.•AsfarasIamconcerned,space…•Personallyspeaking,Ithink…•1.Recently,ourclassmateshaveheldadiscussionwhosetopicofthatwaswhetherworthexplodinginspace.•Recently,ourclassmateshaveheldadiscussionwhosetopiciswhetherspaceisworthexploring.•Recently,ourclassmateshaveheldadiscussiononwhetherspaceisworthexploring.•2.30%studentsdisagreebecausetheyconsideredthatitwasfarawayfromusandourdailylife.••30%ofthestudentsdisagreebecausetheyconsiderthatspaceisfarawayfromourdailylife.•3.Besides,itwastedmoneywhichshouldhavesolvedsomeproblemssuchasstarvationandpollution.•Besides,itwastesalotofmoney,whichcouldhavebeenusedtosolveproblemssuchasstarvationandpollution.•4.Buttheothersagreedwiththeopinionthatwasworthdoingthatandgavesomereasonaboutthatitbenefitedsolvingearth’senergyshortagesproblem.结构混乱•Buttheotherswhoagreewiththisideathatspaceexplorationisworthwhileclaimthatwehavebenefitedalotfromspaceresearchanditmayhelpustosolvetheearth’senergyshortageproblem.•5.Anditisknowntoallthesatelliteisusedtomakecommunicationorforecast.•Itisknowntoallthatsatelliteshavebeenusedforcommunicationandweatherforecast.•被用来做某事•1.beusedtodosth•2.beusedforsth•Sample1•Recently,ourclasshasheldadiscussionaboutwhetherspaceisworthexploring.30%ofthestudentsobjecttheideaofexploringspace.Theyfeelthatit’sawasteoftimeandresourcestodosoandthelargesumofmoneyspentontheexplorationcouldhavebeenusedtodealwithproblemssuchasstarvationandpollution.However,70%ofthestudentsconsideritworthwhiletoexplorespace.Asweallknow,satelliteshavebeenusedforcommunicationaswellasweatherforecast,whichmakeourlivesmoreconvenient.Besides,ifresourcesarefoundonotherplanets,energyshortagesonourearthcanbesolved.•Sample2•Recently,studentsinourclasshavehadadiscussiononwhetherspaceisworthexploring.30%ofthestudentsthinkspaceexplorationisnotworthwhile.Theythinkspaceistoofarawayfromusandourdailylife,andthemoneyspentonspaceexplorationcanhavebeenusedtosolveproblemssuchasstarvationandpollution.70%ofthestudentsthinkspaceisworthexploringbecausewehavebenefitedalotfromit,suchasusingsatellitesforcommunicationandweatherforecast.Also,spaceresearchwillenableustofindnewresourcestosolvetheproblemofenergyshortagesontheearth.