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高考英语写作课——建议信practiceofWriting——1.知道英语建议信的问题特征，掌握其写作技巧。2.能用书信形式对某一问题提出建议并给出理由，得体地表达自己的观点。3.掌握英语建议信的写作步骤和常用表达方式，进行有效写作。Learninggoals（学习目标）Lead--in（课堂导入）Writingtask（任务展示）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter近期打算来长治旅游，请你给他写一封建议信，并祝他旅行愉快。内容要点：1.先参观一些感兴趣的地方；2.多搜集一些关于这些地方的信息；3.多与当地人谈话，以了解长治的历史和文化。注意：1.文章100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不入总词数。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。1.审题2.列提纲/要点3.连词成句4.连句成篇5.润色修正6.定稿体裁时态结构要求字数内容我的建议开头正文结尾体裁人称时态要求结构字数内容一般现在时Para.1Para.2Para.3抓要点,100个左右已给出已给出I'dliketomakesomesuggestionstoyouforyourcomingvisittoChangzhi.先参观你感兴趣的著名景点，例如......,这些地方每年吸引了数以万计的游客。WishyouinadvanceapleasanttriptoChangzhi.书信格式租给体育公司，创造经济效益开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客第一,三人称①08年奥运会刚刚落幕.②征集奥运会后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议.③你想写一些建议开头信息1①08年奥运会刚刚落幕.②征集奥运会后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议.③你想写一些建议..Wanttowritesomeadvice/WouldliketogiveyousomeadviceContributesomesuggestionstoyou.CollectsomeadviceHowtouse/makeuseof/makethebestofthestadiums.AftertheOlympicGamesAfterBeijinghostedthe29thOlympicGames.The2008BeijingOlympic/wereover/finished/heldsuccessfullyinBeijing.①向公众开放，用于健身.②租给体育公司，创造经济效益.③开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客.Useitas/beusedfor/as;takeitas;openitforPlacesofinterest/touristattractionsAttracttourists/appealtovisitors/beattractionforvisitorsGive…to/Rent…to/berentedtoSportcompany/companieswhichorganizematches/organizingmatchesMake/createmoney;bringinmoney/makemoreprofitsOpen/beopenedtothepeople/public/openthemtopublic.Beusedfor/as;bemadeto;Dosomeexercise/buildourbodies/strengthenourbodies信息2信息3信息4向公众开放，用于健身租给体育公司，创造经济效益开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客正文.信息5总结，意愿……结尾Inmyopinion/asfarasIamconcerned../frommypointofview.Iwouldappreciate…Iwouldyouwillthinkof/take…intoconsideration….开头信息1①08年奥运会刚刚落幕.②征集奥运会后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议.③你想写一些建议..①The2008BeijingOlympicGameswereover/finished.The29thOlympicGameswereheldsuccessfullyinBeijing.Beijinghostedthe29thOlympicGameswithagreatsuccess.①The29thOlympicGameswerehostedinBeijingwithagreatsuccess.Beijingachieveditsdreamofhostingthe29thOlympicGamessuccessfully.②CollectsomeadviceHowtouse/makeuseof/makethebestofthestadiums.AftertheOlympicGamesAfterBeijinghostedthe29thOlympicGames.②YouarecollectingsomeadviceonhowtomakeuseofthestadiumsafterBeijinghostedthe29thOlympicGames.IhearyouarecollectingsomeadviceonhowtomakethebestofthestadiumsafterBeijinghostedthe29thOlympicGamessuccessfully.③Wanttowritesomeadvice/WouldliketogiveyousomeadviceContributesomesuggestionstoyou.③Iwouldliketogiveyousomeadvice.Iwouldliketocontributethefollowingsuggestionstoyou4.Useitas/beusedfor/as;takeitas;openitforPlacesofinterests/touristattractionsAttracttourists/appealtovisitors/beattractionforvisitors3.Give…to/Rent…to/berentedtoSportcompany/companieswhichorganizematches/organizingmatchesMake/createmoney;bringinmoney/makemoreprofits信息2信息3信息4向公众开放，用于健身租给体育公司，创造经济效益开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客正文2.Open/beopenedtothepeople/public/openthemtopublic.Beusedfor/as;bemadeto;Dosomeexercise/buildourbody/strengthenourbodies2.Thestadiumscanbeopenedtothepublic.Thepubliccanbuildtheirbodies/strengthentheirbodies3.Thestadiumscanberentedtosportcompanywhichorganizematches.Itcanbringinmoremoney/makemoreprofits4.Theycanbeusedastouristattraction.Itcanattractmanyvisitors..信息5总结，意愿……结尾Inmyopinion/asfarasIamconcerned../frommypointofview.Iwouldappreciate…Iwouldyouwillthinkof/take…intoconsideration….Inaword…Frommypointofview,weshoulddowhatwecantomakefulluseofthestadium.IwouldappreciateitifyouwouldtakemyadviceintodeepconsiderationPara.1:The29thOlympicGameswerehostedinBeijingwithagreatsuccess.Ihearyouarecollectingsomeadviceonhowtomakethebestofthestadiums.Iwouldliketocontributethefollowingsuggestionstoyou.Para.2:Thestadiumscanbeopenedtothepublic.Thepubliccanbuildtheirbodies/strengthentheirbodies.Thestadiumscanberentedtosportcompanywhichorganizematches.Itcanbringinmoremoney/makemoreprofits.Theycanbeusedastouristattraction.Itcanattractmanyvisitors.Para.3:Frommypointofview,weshoulddowhatwecantomakefullusethestadium.IwouldappreciateitifyouwouldtakemyadviceintodeepconsiderationPara.1:The29thOlympicGameswerehostedinBeijingwithagreatsuccess.Ihearyouarecollectingsomeadviceonhowtomakethebestofthestadiums.Iwouldliketocontributethefollowingsuggestionstoyou.Para.1:Ihearyouarecollectingsomeadviceonhowtomakethebestofthestadiumsafterthe29thOlympicGameswerehostedinBeijingwithagreatsuccess.HereIwouldliketocontributethefollowingsuggestionstoyou.Para.2:Thestadiumscanbeopenedtothepublic.Thepubliccanstrengthentheirbodies.Thestadiumscanberentedtosportcompanywhichorganizematches.Itcanbringinmuchmoreprofits.Theycanbeusedastouristattraction.Itcanattractmanyvisitors.Para.2:Firstofall,thestadiumscanbeopenedtothepublic.Thepubliccanstrengthentheirbodies.Secondly,Thestadiumscanberentedtosportcompanywhichorganizematches.Itcanbringinmuchmoreprofits.lastbutnotleast,Theycanbeusedastouristattraction.Itcanattractmanyvisitors.FirstofallFirstly,Tobeginwith,Inaddition,Besides,Moreover,What’smoreFinally,What’sworse,使用恰当的连接词逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇⑴排序关系⑵并列关系⑶举例关系⑷转折关系⑸因果关系⑹归纳总结⑺递进关系first;firstly;second;secondly;lastbutnotleastand;too;aswellas;alongwith;togetherwithforexample;forinstance;like;suchas;astobut;however;while;though;onthecontrarybecause;since;thanksto;a