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1高考读后续写要求尽可能地应用较多较复杂的语法结构和词汇，同时能有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。下面是九个在续写中经常用到的句型，如果你能在续写中加以使用，一定会给你的续写增添色彩，也会让阅卷老师眼前一亮。将这些句型熟练地组合使用，根据需要加入状语从句、名词性从句或者是定语从句，可以在这九个句型的基础上写出许多较复杂的好句来。续写突破20+不是梦，就看你用不用。Doing...,主+谓...doing作状语，逻辑主语与句子的主语一致，构成主动关系；有时可以在doing前加before,after,while等;但如果是被动关系，应该使用过去分词done作状语。例如：1)SeeingtearsinMark'seyes,AnniedecidedtopromisetotheboythatshewouldletMarkcutherhair,too.2)Hesitatingalittle,MarkpromisedtoAnniethathewouldworkhardathisEnglish.3)Findingaclinicnearby,theywentinsideandtoldthereceptionistwhathadhappen.4)Ignoringherwords,themanwalkedawayquickly.5)Approachingthedoorway,Jennytookadeepbreath.6)Hearingthis,Catherineranasfastasherlegscouldcarryher.7)WhiledecoratingthetreetogetherwithMama,Iaccidentallydroppedandbrokeanoldglassonit.28)Wantinghimtotakehisflowerandgoofftoplay,Ifakedasmileandthenturnedtotheotherside.9)Afterreachinghome,shetoldeverythingtoherbrother.10)Hearinghisbrother'swords,sherushedbacktotheshoptofindtheboybuttimeneverwaitsforanyone.11)Havingwanderedaimlesslyinthestressforhours,shefeltalittlehungryandwishedforsomethingtoeat.12)Dressedinaballetdress,shemanagedtoslipintothedressingroomwithoutbeingnoticed.主+谓...,doing...doing作伴随状语，与句子的谓语动词同时发生，逻辑主语与句子的主语一致，构成主动关系；该句型可以以并列谓语的形式出现，转化为：主+谓...and谓...;但如果是被动关系，应该使用过去分词done作伴随状语。例如：1)Thegirlbegankickingandswinging,tryingtogetfreeoftheman'shold.2)Shebravelyapproachedhim,handinghimabunchofredroses.3)Bittermemoriesoftheman'sharshwordscamefloodingbacktoher.4）Herfatherwaslyingonhisback,trappedunderthetruck.5)HerDadwasstillconscious,yelling,Onemoretry!36)It'sOK,Mamasaid,comfortingmewithahug.7)Carefullylayingthenoteaside,Icleanedupthebrokenpiecesoftheball,wishingIcouldstickthemtogether.8)Ifollowedher,notbelievingmyeyes.主1+谓...,主2+doing...逻辑主语2与doing构成主动关系，构成独立主格，在句中作状语。该句型或以转化为并列句：主1+谓...and主2+谓...。例如：1)Hestoodthere,tearsofgratitudewellingupinhiseyes.--Hestoodthereandtearsofgratitudewelledupinhiseyes.2)Sheopenedtheletter,herhandstremblingwithexcitement.--Sheopenedtheletterandherhandstrembledwithexcitement.3)Don'tstandinmyway,Timyelledout,hisvoicequiveringwithrage.Don'tstandinmyway,Timyelledoutandhisvoicewasquiveringwithrage.主+谓1...,谓2...,and谓3....描述一系列的动作。如果是两个动作，可以用这样的结构：主+谓...and(then)谓...。例如1)Theadultsputonperformance,chatted,andsaidtheirgoodbye.42)Shestoppedthetrucksafelyoutsidethegarageandthenrushedbacktothebasement.3)Peterrushedtothesceneandwasastonishedtofindthecatingoodshape.4)Sheyawnedandturnedtolookbackatherhouseacrossthestress.5)Despitethegreatdifficulties,healwayshadapositiveattitudeandgreetedeveryoneeachmorningwithahugesmile.6)Hestoodrightbeforeme,andsaidwithgreatexcitement,LookwhatIfound!7)Ireachedfortheflowerandreplied,JustwhatIneed.8)Grandmasighedandturnedtowardsthekitchen.9)Shethoughtforawhileandthencontinued.10)Sheturnedaroundandsawmestandinginthedoorway.表情感类的形容词,主+谓...情感类的形容词在句中作状语，说明主语的状态，可以转化为Feelingadj,主+谓...。有时可以放在句后：主+谓...，表情感类的形容词。例如：1)Eagerandexcited,sheflaggedheryellowblouse,tryingtoattractothers'attention.2)Exhaustedandscared,Janelaydownnearastone,missingherfamilyatadistance.53)ToAnnie'sdelight,surroundedbyhisclassmates,Markseemedlikearockstar,cheerfulandproud.4)Andthenheranofftoplay,unawareoftheimpacthe'dhadonme.5)Shegotdisappointedandreturnedhome,continuouslyangryatherself.6)Jennysatthere,speechlessandnumbwithshock.7)Istoodinthelivingroomdoorway,absolutelyshocked.8)Shehungherhead,notsurehowtoreply.9)Theyagreednevertoquarrelagain,determinedtolivethelifetothefullest.10)Desperateandhopeless,Janekneltdown,tearsstreamingdownherface.11)Extremelyworried,theydecidedtowaitforthematMac'shome.方式副词(ly)，主+谓...方式副词在句中作状语，修饰谓语动词，一般放在句末，但有时根据需要可以放在句首。例如：1)Gently,shepickedupthefirstbaby,ranbackoutsideandlaiditonthesidewalk.2)Quickly,shefollowedthesoundtoastream.3)Attentively,welistenedtotheteacherinclass.64)Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.5)Carefully,Timdidhishomework.句子副词，主+谓...句子副词在句中作状语，修饰整个句子，放在句首，引出句子。例如：1)Andamazingly,theboysrecoveredsoonafterbeingperformedCPR.2)Fortunately,thecatwasstillalive,thoughbadlyinjured.3)Incredibly(Unbelievably),shewasabletocarryherlastchildoutbeforetheroofandwallsfell.4)Actually,Iwastouchedbyyourkindness!saidJenny,wipinghertears.5)Luckily,Iwasabletoborrowafewdollorsfromaclerkatthehotel.地点状语或表示运动方向的副词+谓(vi)+主该句型是一个全部倒装句，主语必须是名词，谓语动词为不及物动词，常见的表运动方向的副词有：in,out,off,away,up,down,outside,inside等。例如：1)AtthebackofthecrowdwasMark,determinednottobeleftbehind.2)Inhishandwasaflower,withitspetalsallworn.3)AtthefrontdoorstoodherdearhusbandwhosufferedgreatanxietywhenJanewasnowheretobefound.74)Aheadsatanoldwoman.5)Awaywentthecrowdonebyone.6)Downfelltheleaves.7)Incameastrangerinblack.时间状语，主+谓...时间状语一般放在句末，但有些时间状语放在句首，能使行文连贯，逻辑合理。如：shortlyafterwards,hourslater,beforelong,atthatmoment,afterthat,severalminutesafterthat,afterseeminglyalongtime,afterwhatseemedalongtime,inthemeanwhile,beforeIknewit,Itwasn'tlongbefore...等。例如：1)Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.2)Forthefirsttimeinherlife,Mariafeltfrightenedandalone.3)Inthemeanwhile,Bradandhiswifejumpedintotheircarandfollowedclosebehind.4)Onthemornin