LOGO2018.12-2018.06四级写作真题解析2018年12月第一套Writing(30minutes)Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthechallengesoflivinginabigcity.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.2018年12月第一套审题1)challenges“挑战”(面对新环境、新阶段需克服的困难)复数2)…oflivinginabigcity.明确“挑战”的具体内容2018年12月第一套思路1)开篇借现实问题或正或反引入(“大城市生活”)2)主体明确“挑战”的具体内容3)扣题围绕“挑战”,而非“做选择(是否应住在……)”或“提建议(如何应对……)”2018年12月第一套论证方式1)正面论证直接列举或说明大城市生活的挑战,如孤独、压力等2)反面论证以小城市或乡村具备的独特优势反衬出大城市的劣势3)事实论证引述研究或枚举个例,说明某种具体城市生活会面临的挑战/问题等2018年12月第一套“大城市”metropolisn.metropolitana.megacityn.downtownn./a./ad.urbanizationn.urbansprawlpublictransport/masstransitrowsofskyscrapersbuzzing/bustlinghighstreets词汇准备askylinestuddedwithhigh-risesarobustandreliabletransportationnetwork2018年12月第一套“大城市”的挑战smog/hazen.sandstormn.rentn.landlordn.tenantn.trafficjam/congestionn.rocketing/soaringhousepriceslight/noise/exhaustpollutiontheurbanheatislandeffect词汇准备commutingtimethehealthhazardposedbyleadinpetroladapt/adjusttothefastpacedlife2018年12月第一套Citylifeismillionsofpeoplebeinglonesometogether.(HenryDavidThoreau)城市是一个几百万人一起孤独生活的地方。(亨利.戴维.梭罗)Alargecitycannotbeexperientiallyknown;itslifeistoomanifoldforanyindividualtobeabletoparticipateinit.(AldousHuxley)人们无法凭经验了解一座大城市。对任何人来说,城市生活都过于纷繁复杂而无法参与其中。(阿道司.赫胥黎)Inalargecity,youmighthavetofightforaparkingspot,pushthroughacrowd,andwaitlonginline.Smallinconveniencesliketheseaddupandturnaquicktripformilkintoanhour-longendeavor.句子储备2018年12月第一套IToday,anincreasingnumberofpeopleareconsidering____.Itistruethatby_____,_____can_____.Butwemustrecognizethatmanychallengesawaitusinthisprocess.IIAsfarasIamconcerned,themajorchallengesof_____areasfollows.Firstly,asthenumberof_____boosts,thecompetitionfor_____isgettingmoreintensive.Soitisharderforusto_____.Secondly,tobetter_____,weneedtoovercometheobstaclesof_____/have_____experience/qualificationsas_____requires.Andthatisverydifficultforonewho_____/whatwhose_____lacks.Anddon’tforgettheannoying_____,weseemtohavelittlechoicebuttolivewithit.IIIAlthough_____bringsnumerousbenefits/canbeafulfillingprocess,itcomeswithtisshareofchallenges.关于“挑战”的模板2018年12月第一套Nowadays,theglobaltrendofurbanmigrationseemsunstoppable.Formanypeople,theterm“bigcity”issynonymouswithservices,resourcesandjobopportunities.Buttheyneedtobeawarethaturbanlifeischallengingaswell.Probablythemostdauntingproblemisever-higherhousepricespushedbyagrowingurbanpopulation.newcomerstoametropolisalwaysfeeldistressedbythenecessityoffindingaffordablehousing.Inaddition,thehustleandbustleofurbanlifeoftencausesphysicalandmentalsuffering,asevidencedbysleepy-eyedcommutersinovercrowdedsubwaytrainsorimpatientdriversstuckinrushhourtraffic.Lastbutnotleast,anawfullivingenvironmentcanalsobetortureforbigcitydwellers,whomaygetirritatedwithpoorairquality,trafficnoise,orthemeresightofadensecityscape.满分范文2018年12月第一套Tosumup,foralltheadvantagesoflivinginalargecity,peoplestillhavetoovercomevariouschallengestheyface.满分范文2018年6月第二套Writing(30minutes)Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayontheimportanceofwritingabilityandhowtodevelopit.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.2018年6月第二套审题1)theimportanceofwritingability“写作能力”的重要性(价值/意义)注:并没有特别提及哪一种语言的写作能力2)howtodevelop…如何“提高/培养”2018年6月第二套思路1)要点一“写作能力的重要性”浅层:个人语言学习、表达能力的帮助深层:对个人长远发展,甚至对社会、国家形象影响等2)要点二“提高”•具体途径,如模仿、练习、坚持等•结合当前社会上的写作氛围等提供建议2018年6月第二套论证方式1)对比论证以“写作能力差”的负面影响反衬能力价值2)类比论证借其他技能的提升方式说明写作能力的提升方式3)举例论证列举一些著名事例,说明提高写作能力的方式等2018年6月第二套“写作能力的重要性”animportantassetthevitalmeansofcommunicationcontributetodevelopmentof…communicateyourideaswithclarityandeasetoothersformapositive/negativeimpressionhelpyourefineyourideascultivatecritical/logicalthinkingabilitycompleteyouruniversityassignments…isnecessary/essentialformostjobs词汇准备2018年6月第二套“提高写作能力的做法”accuratea.correct/flawlessa.clearandconcisesharpenone’swritingskillschooseflavoredwordsavoidblandphrasesthatmakeyourwritingtastelessuserhetoricoutlineyourcontent词汇准备makeyourcontentmorenourishingstimulatetheinterestoftheaudience/readerthrough…discussyourworkwithawonderfultutorgiveyourselfsomechallengingtopics2018年6月第二套Beitaschool,college,workplaceorasociety,writinghasbecomeavitalyardsticktoassessone’sknowledgeandintellectuality.不管是在中小学、大学、职场还是在社会上,写作已成为评估一个人知识与智力的重要标尺。Writingimprovesthethinkingprocessandcontributestothedevelopmentofcriticalthinkingskillsbecauseanindividualhastoclearlystateideasandlayoutargumentsinsuchawayastocultivatehigherorderthinking.写作能改善思维过程,并有助于培养批判性思维能力,因为(写作中)个人需要清楚地表达观点并展开论证,这种方法能使我们培养起高阶推理思维。句子储备2018年6月第二套IThephilosopherFrancisBacononcesaid,“readingmakesafullman;conferenceareadyman;andwritinganexactman”.Inthiserafeaturingknowledgeexplosionandintensecompetition,thecapabilitiesofusinglanguage,especially______,areplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleinourlong-termdevelopment.Withoutacertain_____ability,wearepowerlessin______.Besides,thestrongerour_____abilityis,thebetter/morewecan______,andthusthemorelikelywearetostandout.IIAdmittedly,toenhance______,simply______isnotenough.As______isthefoundationof_____,tosteadilyboo