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aletterofadviceStep3:writingaletterofadviceReadtheletterfromLiuZhen’ssonwhoisaskingforadviceabouthisfather,trytofindthemainpointofeachparagraph.MainpointPara1:Para2:Para3:Para4:Hecan’tgetalongwithhisfatherHisfatherforbidshimfromdoingthingshelikes.Heloveshisfatherandwantshisfathertounderstandhim.Hisparentsalwaysmakehimdothingshedoesn’tlike.WritealetterofadvicetoLiuXiaowei.UsetheskillsyouhavelearntinSteps1and2.•haveaheart-to-hearttalkwithhisfather•explainhowyoufeelandgiveparentsachancetospeakfirst•trytounderstandyourfather•listentoyourfather•makeeffortstodowhatparentsask•bepatientwithyourfather.Youshould/hadbetter/mightaswell……Example:DearXiaowei:Manyteenagershavedifficultygettingalongwiththeirparents......Thisisacommonproblem.However,bepatientwithhim.Yousaythathedoesnotlistentoyou.Isthiswhyyoudonotlistentohim?Ofcourse,yourfatherwillbeangrywhenthishappens!It’sonlynatural.Youmustlistentoyourfather—helovesyouandwantsthebestforyou.Youshouldtalkwithyourparentsinordertoexplainhowyoufeel,butyoushouldgivethemachancetospeakfirst.Itcouldbethatyourfatherdoesn’tlistentoyoubecausehedoesn’tthinkthatyouarelisteningtohim.Itistruethatyouneedtimetobebyyourself.However,partofbeinganadultisdoingthingsthatyoudonotalwayswanttodo.Youshouldmakeanefforttodowhatyourparentsask.Itwillnothurtyou.Andofcourse,youmustdoyourhomework!Yourstudiesareimportanttoyourfuture.Bothbeingateenagerandbeingaparentcanbeverydifficult.However,don’tgiveup,withalittlebitofpatienceandcommunication,manyoftheseproblemscanbesolved.BestregardsDrFang假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。要点：⑴参加中文学习班；⑵看中文书刊、电视；⑶学唱中文歌曲；⑷交中国朋友。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出。DearPeter,I'mgladtohearthatyoucanaskformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell._________________________________________________Bestwishes,LiHua第一步：审题养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：思考的问题样题分析第几人称？（person）文章的题材是什么？要写的文章主题是什么(topic)怎样安排信息点的顺序？(order)动作是什么时候发生的？(时态)(when)第一/二人称一封信对中文学习给出建议说理的逻辑性一般现在时建议信Para1.提出问题（3分）Para2.给出建议，陈述理由。（10分）Para3.提出希望。（3分）★全文结构合理，内容连贯，行文流畅（7分）★字数符合（2分）(1-2句)(1-2句)(6-8句)1.一个建议+多个理由—选择型2.多个建议+多个理由—问题型DearPeter,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou'llbeabletolearnfromtheteacherandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Second,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapersandmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.Third,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyou'lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.TryandwritetomeinChinesenexttime.Bestwishes,LiHuaOpeningsentences开头句1.Iamverygladtohearfromyou.2.Thankyouforyourletter.3.Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto…andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.4.Iamwritinginreplyto…5.Iamsorrytohearthat…6.Havingreceivedyourletter,Iknow...表示建议的句子•Youshould/must…•Don’t…•What/Howabouttryinganewmethod?•Whynotfindanewway?•You’dbetterchangeyourformerplan.•I’dliketosuggestyoumakeanewplan.•IfIwereyou,Iwould…•I’dliketosuggest…•Istronglyrecommend…•Youmightaswell…Closingsentences结束语1.Ihopeyouwillfindmysuggestions/advicehelpful/useful.2.Atlast,IhopeIwillbeyourbestfriendforever!Goodlucktoyou!3.Let’skeepintouch.Idohopetoheargoodnewsfromyou.常用关联词1.表示并列的过渡词或短语aswell;or;too;also;aswellas;and;notonly…butalso….;both…and….either…or…;neither…nor…First……；Second……;Third……Foronething;Foranother(thing)2.表示递进的过渡词或短语Moreover;What’smore;Besides;What’sworse,3.表转折对比的过渡词:but,however,insteadof,onthecontrary,although,differentfrom,despite,inspiteof,Ontheonehand,…;Ontheotherhand,…Some…;Others…4.表原因的过渡词:because,becauseof,since,as,for,nowthat,thanksto,dueto（由于）5.表结果的过渡词:so,thus,therefore,asaresult,sothat,then,6.表条件的过渡词:if,unless,aslongas7.表时间的过渡词:recently,atthesametime,finally,atlast,fromnowon,8.表特定的顺序关系的过渡词:first,firstly,second,secondly,third,thirdly,aboveall,firstofall,then,next,finally,intheend,atlast9.表换一种方式表达的过渡词:inotherwords,thatistosay10.表进行举例说明的过渡词:forinstance,forexample,suchas11.表陈述事实的过渡词:Infact,Totellyouthetruth12.表目的的过渡词：forthisreason,forthispurpose,sothat,inorderto,soasto13.表总结的过渡词:inaword(总之，简言之),inshort(总之),generallyspeaking,finally,inconclusion,atlast,insummary常用句型1.对于某人来说，做某事很…Itisadj/adv(forsbtodosth)…学英语对于我们来说不简单ItisnoteasyforustolearnEnglish2.不明白/想知道Iwonder+疑问词/if我想知道怎么能减肥Iwonderhowtoloseweight.3.做某事的最好的办法就是Thebestwaytodosthistodo…Thereisnobetterwaytodosththantodosth学好英语的最佳途径就是阅读浅显的英语书籍ThebestwaytolearnEnglishwellistoreadmanyeasyEnglishbook.ThereisnobetterwaytolearnEnglishthantoreadmanyeasyEnglishbook.4.学会用定语从句拓展句意教材当中有许多好看的图片，这些图片能够帮助我们更好的理解英语。Therearemanybeautifulandcolorfulpictures,whichcanhelpusunderstandEnglishbetter.一些教材当中有些生词或表达、表情（expressions），这些对于我们来说很难。Someofthetextshavetoomanynewwordsandexpressionswhicharehardforus.5.用举例子的方式拓宽句意这些书有许多优点，其中之一就是我们可以发现大量的话题，比如说科学，文化和历史。Thesebookshavemanyadvantages,oneofthemisthatwecanfindavarietyoftopics,suchasscience,cultureandhistory.6.学会用notonly…butalso…表示并列含义亲爱的朋友们，去参加课外活动吧，这不但会使你的校园生活变得丰富多彩，还会改善你的学习。Dearfriends,pleasetakepartinafter-classa