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高三英语书面表达（二）Aletterofgivingadvice长沙市岳麓实验中学高三英语组执教老师朱铖写作要点：1.建议信：作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。2.对象：1）写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。3.基本框架：开头（beginning）----开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点.(stateyouridea)主体(body)----对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasonsandevidence)结尾(ending)----呼应开头，重申观点(restateyouropinion.)4.注意事项：1）建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力2）建议的角度要多样化，避免重复。可从政治、经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建议。3）符合英文信件的基本格式A．建议信开头常用句式(照应材料,表明写作意图)1、I’mgladtoreceiveyourletterforaskingmehowto/askingformyadviceon…….2、I’mverygladtoreceiveyourletterandit’sapleasuretotellyousomethingabout……3、AfterIreadyourletter,Iamsorrytoknowthat……Youaskedmeformyadviceon……andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.4、Thanksfortrustingme.It’smypleasuretogiveyousomesuggestions/advice.5、Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto…Iknowyouhavetroublein…afterreadingyourletter.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou./Hereareafewsuggestions.Ithinkyoucanmakeitifyoufollowtheadvicebelow.6.Iamwritingtosharesomeadvicewithyou7.Inmypersonalopinion,itwouldbewiseofyoutotakethefollowingaction.B.表达建议（body）1.first，firstly，secondly…．then，afterthat，intheend．finally．Meanwhile,what’smore．．．2.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…3.Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthat…4.IfIwereyou,Iwould…5.Youmayconsiderdoing…6.Iwouldseemtomethatyoucould…7.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.8.Iwonderifyouhaveconsideredthefollowing.9.Whenitcometosuchasituation,Iwouldliketosuggestthatyoucan…C.建议信结尾常用句式1.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.2.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/recommendationspractical/useful/helpful.3.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.4.Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldconsidermysuggestions.5.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialifyousticktoit.6.Intheend,Iwillbegladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.7.Iamlookingforwardtodoingsth/sth8.Iwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyouaboutfurtherdetails.D.常见落款（complimentaryclosing）•开头字母要大写，末尾用逗号。结束语也称敬语，使用时也应因人而异，取决于发信人与收信人之间的关系或熟悉程度。•1.家人亲戚:Yourlovingmother/son/brother;Yourslovingly,Withlove,Allmyloveetc.•2.长辈或一般朋友：Yoursrespectfully/sincerely,Yourstrulyetc.•3.机关、团体、学校等：Yoursfaithfully/sincerely,Yourstrulyetc.写作模板模板一：Dear_____,Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceabout_____(问题)，andIwilltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere.Inmyopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:______(建议内容).Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyouaboutfurtherdetails.Goodluckwithyour____(祝愿).Yourssincerely,LiMing模板二：Dear_____(对象)，Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning______(问题).Firstandforthemost_______(建议一);inaddition_____(建议二);what’smore_____(建议三).Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsuseful.Yourssincerely,LiMing书面表达如何写？三个步骤Step1ListthekeypointsStep2MakesentencesStep3.Formapassageandpolish•注意衔接词使用:•表先后次序：•First,second,third….Finally•Firstly,secondly，…eventually•tobeginwith/tostartwith,atlast•递进关系：furthermore；moreover；notonly...butalso...；not...but...；,besides；inotherwords；ontheonehand...，ontheotherhand...；meanwhile；atthesametime；Lastbutnotleast如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象整体三部分1.Heading点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性2.Body中心记述部分；层次分明3.Ending小结；呼应主题假如你叫李华，你的英国朋友Jack来信说下学期要到你校学习，向你寻求建议。请你给Jack写回信，在下面几个方面给出建议，并希望他在你们学校过的愉快。1、与同学见面要主动向同学问好，并做自我介绍（姓名、国籍等）；2、多与别人交流，并友好相处；3、如果方便的话帮助同学学英语；4、积极参加一些学校活动，比如艺术节、运动会等；5、其他建议。注意：1、词数100左右；2、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。HomeworkDearJack,Iamgladtoknowyou’llcometoourschoolnextterm.•DearJack,•I'mgladtoknowyou'llcometoourschoolnextterm.Hereismyadvice.•Firstly,pleasesayhellotoyourclassmatesandintroduceyourselfaboutyournameandnationality.Secondly,communicatewithothersfrequentlyandgetonwellwiththem.Thirdly,helpothersstudyEnglishifitisconvenienttoyou.Besides,youcantakeanactivepartintheschoolactivitiessuchasasportsmeetingoranartcelebration.Lastbutnotleast,ifyoufeelpuzzledtoadapttothelifeinChina,youcancomeandtalkwithme.Iwilldomybesttohelpyouwheneveryouareintrouble.•Mayyouhaveawonderfulterminourschool.Yours,•LiHua