书面表达专项突破-留言条

文体概述留言条开篇须有称呼语，日期部分可写在右上角，结尾须署姓名在正文的右下角；形式和内容简洁，明确无误。留言条(也可称为便条)虽简单，但中心务必突出，讲清楚写给谁、什么事、谁写以及什么时候写。注意事项：1.人称。以第一或第三人称的形式给第二人称写留言条。2.时态。根据时间状语灵活运用各种时态，常用过去时、现在时和将来时。常用语块1.直到下午5点才回来_____________________2.把书还给图书馆_____________________3.明早在咖啡屋见面_____________________4.有重要的事情要做_____________________5.对……感到抱歉_____________________feelverysorryabout…won’tbebackuntil5:00p.m.returnthebooktothelibrarymeetatCoffeeRoomtomorrowmorninghavesomethingimportanttodo/attend6.告知他这个变化___________________7.定别的时间见面___________________8.以便……___________________9.我们将要做……___________________10.非常感谢你的……___________________thankyousomuchfor…tellhimaboutthischange/informhimofthischangesetsomeothertimeforthemeetingsothat…wearegoingto…11.你很体贴______________________12.我们很高兴能收到……，但……______________________13.外出购物______________________14.卧病在床______________________15.离开……去……_______________________leave…for…itwasthoughtfulofyouwearedelightedtoreceive…,but…beoutdoingsomeshoppingbeillinbed套用句式1.今天早上一个自称刘彬的人打电话给你，但是你不在。2.他想在本周六早上9点在校门口与你见面。1.AMr.LiuBincalledyouthismorningbutyouwerenotin.2.HewantedtomeetyouthiscomingSaturday,at9:00a.m.attheschoolgate.3.如果不方便，你可以在晚上8点到10点任何时间打电话给他，号码是12345678。4.她要你回到家就回电话。5.最好来电告知。4.Shewantedyoutocallherbackassoonasyouarehome.3.Ifitisnotconvenientforyou,youarerequestedtoringhimupatanytimeintheeveningfrom8:00p.m.to10:00p.m.at12345678.5.Itisbetterforyoutoinformmeofit.习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文)March21Mrs.Wilson,Iamgoingoutshop,andwon’tbebackuntilabout5:00p.m.IhavetakewithmethetwobookyouaskedmetoreturnbacktotheCityLibrary.shoppingtakenbooksInaboutoneo’clockthisafternoon,Tracycalled,saidthatshecouldn’tmeetyouatBoltonCoffeetomorrowmorningasshehassomethingimportanttoattend.Shefeltverysorryaboutthat,andsaidthatyoucouldsetsomeothertimeformeeting.Shewantsyoutocallherbackassoonasyouarehome.ShehasalreadytoldSusanofthischange.LiHuaAtsayingbut∨thewantedabout1.shop→shopping因为godoing表示进行某活动，为固定用法。2.take→taken此处是现在完成时结构havedone，故用taken。3.book→books根据前面的two可知应用复数。4.去掉return后的back因为return和back有重复意义。5.In→At表“在几点钟”用介词at。6.said→saying分析句子结构可知，say在此是非谓语，且与逻辑主语Tracy存在主动关系，故用saying。7.and→but此处存在转折关系故用but。此处but本身无特殊意义，只是语法上的需要。8.在meeting前加the表示“双方都知道的或心中明白的人或物”前须加定冠词。9.wants→wanted根据上下文时态可知，want应发生在过去的时间。10.of→about固定表达tellsb.aboutsth.意为“告知某人某事”。课堂练习假定你是李华，本已约好与Kelvin今天(4月8日)晚上一起看电影《捉妖记》(MonsterHunt)。但你临时有事，他打篮球未回，故给他写留言条。要点如下：1.临时有事要做。2.具体更改的见面时间、地点。3.此事已告知谁。4.见字告知。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。April8HiKelvin,Yours,LiHuaIamgoingtotellyouthatasIhavesomethingimportanttoattendthisevening,soIcan’tgotoseethemovie,MonsterHunt,withyouthisevening.AndIhavetochangeittoanotherplace,theWandaCinema.Wewillmeettogetherat7:00p.m.atthegateofthecinematomorrowevening.Ihavealreadytoldyourparentsaboutthischangewhenyouwereouttoplaybasketball.Ifthischangeisnotconvenienttoyou,itisbetterforyoutoinformmeofitsothatwecansetsomeothertimeforthemovie.课外作业假定你是李华，你到一个叫Alex的同学家，叫他帮忙做一件事，碰巧他不在家。因此，你给他写了一张留言条，要点如下：1.请他代你参加明天(3月12日)的植树活动。2.集合地点，如何出发。3.天气情况。4.自备的东西。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。March11DearAlex,Yours,LiHuaIwouldliketoaskyouforhelp.WouldyoupleasetaketheplaceofmetotakepartinthetreeplantingactivityinthePeople’sParktomorrow?Youknowtheschoolsportsmeetinghastakenupmuchofmytimeandenergy,andIneedtoadjustmyself.Youwillgettogetherattheschoolgateat7o’clock,andsetoffbybikeforthepark.Bytheway,itisreportedthatitprobablyrainstomorrow,sodoremembertotakeyourraincoatalongwithyou.Besides,youmustbringyourownlunch.Amillionthankstoyou!