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写一封建议信建议信是生活中常见的一种应用文体,是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议或忠告。建议信可以写给个人,也可以写给某个组织或机构。信的主要内容应包括写信的原因、建议的内容、表达期望等。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。【策略点拨】Ⅰ.技巧点拨1.布局谋篇。建议信的正文一般分为三段。第一段通常是写作意图,写信人陈述写信原由,简单介绍自己第二段通常先肯定对方的优点,然后指出需要改进的地方并提出具体的建议或忠告。第三段通常是再次提出希望，希望对方给予答复。2.衔接与过渡。具体的建议一般用firstly,secondly,thirdly或tobeginwith,then,later,lastbutnotleast等连接词作为过渡语。Ⅱ.常用句式开头：Iamwritingwithmysuggestionabout…Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning…Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceon…andIwilltrytomakesomeconducivesuggestions.正文：Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialif….Inthisway,…Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthat….Bydoingso,…IfIwereyou,Iwould…because…结尾Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful/useful.Itrustyouwilltakemysuggestionintoconsideration.Iwouldbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.【实战演练】假定你是李华，你所在的城市要修建一个文化广场aculturalsquare。考虑到残疾人的需要，请你根据以下提示用英语给负责该项目的英国设计师史密斯先生写一封建议信。要点如下：1.台阶step一侧应设坡道slope，方便轮椅wheelchair通行；2.厂场内设盲道sidewalksfortheblind，方便盲人通行；3.应设计残疾人disabledpeople用卫生间toilet。注意：词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数).2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【必备词汇】1.文化广场aculturalsquare2.坡道slope3.轮椅wheelchair4.盲道sidewalksfortheblind5.残疾人disabledpeople6.卫生间toilet7.方便的handy8.为了某人的方便fortheconvenienceofsb.9.方便某人进入withgoodaccessforsb.10.考虑takesth.intoconsideration/accountStep1审题谋篇体裁①_______话题②___________________时态③___________人称④_____________段落布局开头:点明主题-即说明写信目的主体:对修建文化广场提出具体建议结尾:表达态度建议信对修建文化广场提出建议一般现在时第一、三人称Step2遣词造句Howtostart—thepurposeoftheletter1.Whatisthebackground?修建一个文化广场aculturalsquare。Ihaveheardthat…2.Whydoyouwritetheletter?考虑到残疾人的需要，请你根据以下提示用英语给负责该项目的英国设计师史密斯先生写一封建议信Consideringtheneedsof…,Iwouldliketo…Or:Iamwritingtoaskifyou…(考虑到了残疾人的需要）Step2遣词造句Howtospread—thesuggestionstobegivenSuggestion1台阶step一侧应设坡道slope，方便轮椅wheelchair通行aslopeshould…fortheconvenienceof…Suggestion2厂场内设盲道sidewalksfortheblind，方便盲人通行itisnecessaryto…Suggestion3应设计残疾人disabledpeople用卫生间toiletitwouldbehandytoprovide…with…Aconclusion—whyshouldwedoso?If…withgoodaccessfor…,Iamsure….Step2遣词造句Howtoconclude-感谢与愿望Ihope…/Itrust…Step3联句成篇在适当位置加上过渡语firstly,secondly,thirdly或tobeginwith,then,later,lastbutnotleastDearMr.Smith,IamLiHua,ahighschoolstudent.Ihaveheardthataculturalsquareistobebuiltinourcity.Consideringtheneedsofdisabledpeople,Iwouldliketomakesomesuggestions.Firstofall,aslopeshouldbebuiltbesidethestepsfortheconvenienceofdisabledpeopleinwheelchairs.Second,itisnecessarytodesignsidewalksfortheblindinthesquare.Lastbutnotleast,itwouldbehandytoprovidedisabledpeoplewithspecialtoilets.Ifthingsinthesquarearedesignedwithgoodaccessfordisabledpeople,Iamsuremanypeoplewillbepleasedtogothere.Ihopeyouwilltakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.Yoursfaithfully,LiHua