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书面表达CompositionWritingWhatmakesagoodcomposition?Agoodcompositionisusuallymadeupofaintroductionparagraph,somesupportingparagraphsandaconclusionparagraph.IntroductionparagraphSupportingParagraph1BodySupportingParagraph2......ConclusionparagraphIntroduction(topic)Body(supportingparagraphs)ConclusionWhatmakesagoodparagraph?Agoodparagraphisonethatconsistsofatopicsentenceandsupportingsentences.Therearedifferentkindsofbee.Someliveinlargegroupslikethehoneybee,andmaketheirnestsintreesorholesintherocks.Otherspeciesmaketheirnestsinholesintheground.Therearealsovarietiesthatdonotliveingroupsatall…topicsentenceWhereveryougoinourschool,youseegreenlawnsandtreesandbeautifulflowers.Dottedamongthesetreesandflowersaremanybuildingsofdifferentstyles.Astreamrunsthroughourschoolandyoualwaysseeeverythingreflectedinthewater.Topicsentence:________________justlikeagarden.Ourschoolisjustlikeagarden.Ourschoolisjustlikeagarden.OurschoolisAgoodparagraphisonethatcontainsproperlinkingwords.IbelieveEnglishismoreimportantthanotherforeignlanguagesformanyreasons.Firstofall,Englishisspokenbyalargenumberofpeople,andthesepeoplearethemostwidelyspreadacrosstheworldinagreatmanycountries.Secondly,Englishisthemostwidelyusedlanguageontheinternet.Ithasbecomeanon-linelanguage.Thirdly,the2008OlympicGameswillbeheldinourcountryandEnglishwillbeveryuseful.Lastly,…正确使用有关连接词时间先后：first,then,later,intheend,eventually,sincethen,afterawhile转折关系：but,however,onthecontrary,nevertheless因果关系：because,since,as,thanksto,owingto,asaresultof,forthereasonthat让步关系：though,although,evenif,eventhough,inspiteofthefactthat递进关系：what’smore,inaddition,furthermoreontheonehand…ontheotherhand,条件关系：if,unless,aslongas,onconditionthat…表列举：forexample/instance,take…forexample,that’stosay,inotherwords,asfollows表总结：inshort,inbrief,inconclusion,inaword,onthewhole,ashasbeenstatedAgoodparagraphisonewithvariedsentencepatterns.Summary:Agoodcompositionisusuallymadeupofatopicparagraph,somesupportingparagraphsandaconclusionparagraph.Agoodparagraphisonethatconsistsofatopicsentenceandsupportingsentences.Agoodparagraphisonethatcontainsproperlinkingwords.Agoodparagraphisonewithadvancedvocabularyandvariedsentencepatterns.Goodafternoon,everyone!Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“MyAttitudetoPursuitofFashioninSchool”.Nowinourschoolthereisahotpursuitoffashion.Somestudentsliveaveryexpensivelife…______________,theyhopetolooksmartandspecial._______,theywanttowinothers’admirationandrespect.Inaddition,itmakesthemfeelcool._______,westudentsshouldholdtherightsenseofvalues.Weshouldpracticethriftinourdailylife._____,itisadvisableforustodonatesomepocketmoneytotheHopeProjectsothatthosepoorchildreninruralareascanreturntoschool.______,itistheinnerbeautyratherthanourappearancethatmakesusrespectable.Thankyouforlistening!A.thereasonswhytheydosoareasfollowsB.firstlyC.lastbutnotleastD.what’smoreE.asfarasIamconcernedF.SecondlyABCDEF现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以“高三学生要不要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，写一篇短文。６５％的学生认为应该春游３５％的学生认为不应该春游你的看法及理由（考生自由发挥两到三点）1．接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康1．高考临近，没有心情玩2．活动使精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习2．春游耽误学习Theoutlineofthewriting:Conclusionparagraph:…Introductionparagraph:…Point2…BodyPoint1…supportingidea1supportingidea2supportingidea1supportingidea2•Keywords:1.introduction:高三学生（senior3students）春游(gospringouting）讨论（discussion）2.body:接触自然（beclosetonature）呼吸新鲜空气（breathesomefreshair）精神放松（relaxthemselves）大脑休息（resttheirbrains）高考临近（withcollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear）没心情玩（don’tfeellikegoing）耽误学习(wastethetime)3.conclusion:inmyopinion…•身体差inapoorstateofhealth•充足的睡眠enoughsleep•加强锻炼，增加户外活动takemoreexerciseanddomoreoutdooractivities•定时吃饭少吃零食•havethreemealsregularly,eatlessnon-staplefood.•讲卫生•Form/developthehabitofhygiene主题句的内容要明确具体，语言简洁，开门见山，句式力争多样性Howwillyoustartyoupassage?问句：……从句：……Introduction:（sample）WhetherornotshouldSenior3studentsgospringouting?Wehavehadaheateddiscussion.巧用过渡句，过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑关系Payspecialattentiontothetransitionsentences:Opinionsaredividedonthisquestion.Differentpeopleholddifferent/oppositeopinions.Peoplehavetaken/adopteddifferentattitudestowards…Peoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisproblem.Peopletakedifferentviewsonthisquestion.ThebodypartPoint1:65%的人认为应该春游（亮明观点）Moststudents,about65%,arefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting.Reason1：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康Eg:TheythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshairReason2:活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习（注意：两个观点之间的连接）递进what’smore；besides;moreover;inaddition；furthermoreEg:theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic.Conclusion:小段总结，进一步亮明观点，前后呼应。•Eg:Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudents.•Point2:３５％的学生认为不应该春游（亮明观点）•注意：使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段落（承上启下）•Sentencepattern:•However,otherspreferto…•Someothershavejusttheoppositeopinion…..•Ontheotherhand….•Eg:Ontheotherhand,about35%studentsareagainsttheidea.•Reason1:高考临近，没有心情玩•Eg:Theysaythatwithcollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear,theydon’tfeellikegoinganywhere.•Reason2:春游耽误学习•（注意：两个观点之间的连接）Eg:Besides,theythinkgoingspringoutingwilltakeatleastadayoff.TheythinktheyshouldfixtheirattentionontheirstudiesConclusionparagraph提出自己的见解并且加以论证1.Inmy